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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:20am | IP Logged
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hooray maaneet met
cat dancing
geet stuck to stay by maan side fab
dancing part was sizzling love it
geet taking maan home superb
but me waiting to know why geet
left maan & the reason
fabulous both part
love it core
btw i'll maan meet katrika
i real appreciate for double dhamaka
even though ur sick but yu made us
smile
bow to yu
muah
i luv yu sis

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -dia-

res

ll edit both the post after reading the second one

Btw love u darling ...umah ..Hug

~*Edit*~

The update was really Enchanting ...specially the dance part!!!

Beautifully penned down ...lovely!!!

wha wha ..kya baat hai ...Maan & TamilLOL ...Btw the song u r hiniting is "Poi solla kudathu kadhli" & I would have loved it more if u used the same word instead of nanbiEmbarrassed.
ahhh i thought nobody would recognize that song i was a bit hesitant to write that dialogue i even thought of attaching a note to it... but i didnt want to overdo it... but thnx for making my day by recognizing it Smile of course he learnt tamil... u know with geet around n her tamil cribbings its not hard to learn LOL for him she is his best mate, friend, guide, well-wisher... he is yet to realize kadhali in her n thats y i am here to make him realize Wink

woh tho Geet ka jadoo hai ...Wink well do that honor ...& I'm tihink arjun ll pop-up in the frame ..to make his day hell for making his ammalu cry ..Btw let it be in sweet way ..Be warned no pain to Maan ..If want lil pain ll goWink
of course arjun will pop-up n i mean this time its going to be WWIII n i dont think arjun would easily forgive maan... so geet will intervene to make sure maan is not hurt in anyway... n tumhe pata hai arjun cannot say no to her Wink

Thats better ...b4 arjun's action ..I need the proper reason y he is blaming Maan???
arre jaan abhi bhi tumhe nahi pata ki kyun arjun is blaming maan Confused
I mean the exact reason ..but I knw y he is blaming him ..so DW 
well that is the exact reason... Big smile
that is a lame reason according to meConfused
lame Shocked how is it lame???? 

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maaneet_09

Originally posted by -dia-

Beautiful Madhu ...Star(this time not just te update but also UWink
nandri nandri nandri LOL

vanakkam vanakkam vanakkamLOL
LOLLOLLOL

Geet was so elegant ...kya entry mara hai ...pari jaise ...the way u described I thought she has dressed up to blow off his sense ...& U see I was correctEmbarrassed ...poor soul ...can't stop himself from admiring herEmbarrassedLOL ...but he tried to control himselfD'ohLOL ...DW MSK u can do that honor next time ...I'm sure U ll get the chance ...kyu Madhu,chance de donge hena???Wink
ya chance de doongi magar he is MSK afterall... bechara ek baar pyaar kia magar doosri baar karega kya (did i reveal too muchShocked)

actually what u have revealed here???but I'm getting some flashes ...Do u mean to say Maan was in love???
i revealed abt maan Confused haan unhone pyaar kiya Embarrassed
DW ..my mouth zippedLOL
maan-ku premam vannalo vannalo... Wink

vantuchu vantuchuEmbarrassed
koodi seekkaram vannu Wink but there shall be a problem Ouch

Course there ll be problem ..thats y love is divine
haha of course love is divine n that same love shall become the problem...Ouch
to make the relation strongerHeart

OMG ...Geet is checking out himShocked ...Bechari GeetOuch ...even she can't stop herself from drooling over himLOL
of course maan is her first and last love...Embarrassed

woh mujhe bhi pat hai ...but who ll tell that dumbo???
oi kisko dumbo bola Angry oh u mean maan haan sach much mein voh dumbo hi hain LOL

Mere Maan ko ...Btw only I can call him.
LOL u must be kidding rite Tongue of course i can call him too magar its k only u call him coz i shall call him loosu fellow Wink

No I'm serious ...& dare U call him like thatAngry
Cry wah wah wah... he is loosu though LOL

ro mat darling ...challo teek hai ...as u r my darling I granting u permissionWink
Big smile thank u...Hug
U r welcomeWink

I liked their Hide & Seek game ...lekin poor hider ..hargaya seeker ki samnaeLOL 
she lost her heart itself...loosing a game is not a big deal for her Wink

pyar hai ...so everything is fairEmbarrassed
of course everything is fair... but loosing to ur love is sweeter Wink

nothing is more pleasurable than that dearHeart
that is sooo trueee Smile

Hug

I liked his teasing ...cho sweet ...he knows how to play the gameEmbarrassed ...but u made him cried!!!
haan magar tum hamesha maan crying ko complain karti ho bechari geet uski kya Ouch how much pain she is enduring uska bhi toh khayal rakh...

I think u have got a point thereTongue
ha i always do LOL

*LOL ROFL *U r kidding rightWink
ahem ahem of course not OuchLOL

challo ...as u r not well ..I ll go with u his timeWink
ji thnk u Big smile ek minute kyaa Shocked main bimaar hoon isliye chod rahi ho hm! *pouting*

Just kidding ..come on give me ur sweet smileTongue
*peeking from the corner of my eyes* ahem Big smile
thats goodLOL

loved it ...the way he let out all his emotions of those five years of loneliness was beautiful!!!

so finally Geet realized that pain enduring him is coz of her ...but y she left him in first place ...whether she don't that she is his happiness???
actually even maan hasnt realized she is her ultimate happiness... i mean he knows she was not there during the most times he needed n it has pained him deeply but will he know she is needed even during the best times in his life...

Babaji ...mere Maan ko ..us dumbo ko kuch akal dona???
oi khabardar meri geet ko dumbo kaha toh Angry magar if geet is dumbo her best buddy maan is a bigger dumbo LOL

ROFL ...Geet ko nahi mere Maan ko ...& ur principles can be followed here too ...magar if Maan is dumbo his best buddy Geet is a bigger dumbo LOLROFL
well both are for that matter... she is pagli for keeping her feelings from him n he is a loosu to not see her feelings for him ROFL

BINGOROFL
dank u dank u Embarrassed who shall we make the cupid Embarrassed

U r welcome ...Rocking
rocking??? yeh kaun hai Confused
tumhari BFWinkLOL

wonderful update!!!
thnx for the lovely comments my dear kunjuuu maniii luv ya Hug

luv u 2...Hug 
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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maaneet_09

Originally posted by -dia-

res

ll edit both the post after reading the second one

Btw love u darling ...umah ..Hug

~*Edit*~

The update was really Enchanting ...specially the dance part!!!

Beautifully penned down ...lovely!!!

wha wha ..kya baat hai ...Maan & TamilLOL ...Btw the song u r hiniting is "Poi solla kudathu kadhli" & I would have loved it more if u used the same word instead of nanbiEmbarrassed.
ahhh i thought nobody would recognize that song i was a bit hesitant to write that dialogue i even thought of attaching a note to it... but i didnt want to overdo it... but thnx for making my day by recognizing it Smile of course he learnt tamil... u know with geet around n her tamil cribbings its not hard to learn LOL for him she is his best mate, friend, guide, well-wisher... he is yet to realize kadhali in her n thats y i am here to make him realize Wink

woh tho Geet ka jadoo hai ...Wink well do that honor ...& I'm tihink arjun ll pop-up in the frame ..to make his day hell for making his ammalu cry ..Btw let it be in sweet way ..Be warned no pain to Maan ..If want lil pain ll goWink
of course arjun will pop-up n i mean this time its going to be WWIII n i dont think arjun would easily forgive maan... so geet will intervene to make sure maan is not hurt in anyway... n tumhe pata hai arjun cannot say no to her Wink

Thats better ...b4 arjun's action ..I need the proper reason y he is blaming Maan???
arre jaan abhi bhi tumhe nahi pata ki kyun arjun is blaming maan Confused
I mean the exact reason ..but I knw y he is blaming him ..so DW 
well that is the exact reason... Big smile
that is a lame reason according to meConfused
lame Shocked how is it lame???? 

Let me explain ...Arjun can't see Geet in pain ..& think Maan is responsible for that ...so that he might have tried to sort out that ...ya I knw Geet has taken promise not to tell Maan anything ...but still he might have hinted him ...atleast he might have given some clue in past b4 things getting out of control ..& U knw Maan ...how dumbo he is in this type of matterLOL
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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -dia-

Geet was so elegant ...kya entry mara hai ...pari jaise ...the way u described I thought she has dressed up to blow off his sense ...& U see I was correctEmbarrassed ...poor soul ...can't stop himself from admiring herEmbarrassedLOL ...but he tried to control himselfD'ohLOL ...DW MSK u can do that honor next time ...I'm sure U ll get the chance ...kyu Madhu,chance de donge hena???Wink
ya chance de doongi magar he is MSK afterall... bechara ek baar pyaar kia magar doosri baar karega kya (did i reveal too muchShocked)

actually what u have revealed here???but I'm getting some flashes ...Do u mean to say Maan was in love???
i revealed abt maan Confused haan unhone pyaar kiya Embarrassed
DW ..my mouth zippedLOL
maan-ku premam vannalo vannalo... Wink

vantuchu vantuchuEmbarrassed
koodi seekkaram vannu Wink but there shall be a problem Ouch

Course there ll be problem ..thats y love is divine
haha of course love is divine n that same love shall become the problem...Ouch
to make the relation strongerHeart
of course it shall Smile

so finally Geet realized that pain enduring him is coz of her ...but y she left him in first place ...whether she don't that she is his happiness???
actually even maan hasnt realized she is her ultimate happiness... i mean he knows she was not there during the most times he needed n it has pained him deeply but will he know she is needed even during the best times in his life...

Babaji ...mere Maan ko ..us dumbo ko kuch akal dona???
oi khabardar meri geet ko dumbo kaha toh Angry magar if geet is dumbo her best buddy maan is a bigger dumbo LOL

ROFL ...Geet ko nahi mere Maan ko ...& ur principles can be followed here too ...magar if Maan is dumbo his best buddy Geet is a bigger dumbo LOLROFL
well both are for that matter... she is pagli for keeping her feelings from him n he is a loosu to not see her feelings for him ROFL

BINGOROFL
dank u dank u Embarrassed who shall we make the cupid Embarrassed

U r welcome ...Rocking
rocking??? yeh kaun hai Confused
tumhari BFWinkLOL
mera BF Confused magar mera BF ka naam to Maan hai EmbarrassedWink
wonderful update!!!
thnx for the lovely comments my dear kunjuuu maniii luv ya Hug

luv u 2...Hug 
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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maaneet_09

Originally posted by -dia-

Geet was so elegant ...kya entry mara hai ...pari jaise ...the way u described I thought she has dressed up to blow off his sense ...& U see I was correctEmbarrassed ...poor soul ...can't stop himself from admiring herEmbarrassedLOL ...but he tried to control himselfD'ohLOL ...DW MSK u can do that honor next time ...I'm sure U ll get the chance ...kyu Madhu,chance de donge hena???Wink
ya chance de doongi magar he is MSK afterall... bechara ek baar pyaar kia magar doosri baar karega kya (did i reveal too muchShocked)

actually what u have revealed here???but I'm getting some flashes ...Do u mean to say Maan was in love???
i revealed abt maan Confused haan unhone pyaar kiya Embarrassed
DW ..my mouth zippedLOL
maan-ku premam vannalo vannalo... Wink

vantuchu vantuchuEmbarrassed
koodi seekkaram vannu Wink but there shall be a problem Ouch

Course there ll be problem ..thats y love is divine
haha of course love is divine n that same love shall become the problem...Ouch
to make the relation strongerHeart
of course it shall Smile
Embarrassed

so finally Geet realized that pain enduring him is coz of her ...but y she left him in first place ...whether she don't that she is his happiness???
actually even maan hasnt realized she is her ultimate happiness... i mean he knows she was not there during the most times he needed n it has pained him deeply but will he know she is needed even during the best times in his life...

Babaji ...mere Maan ko ..us dumbo ko kuch akal dona???
oi khabardar meri geet ko dumbo kaha toh Angry magar if geet is dumbo her best buddy maan is a bigger dumbo LOL

ROFL ...Geet ko nahi mere Maan ko ...& ur principles can be followed here too ...magar if Maan is dumbo his best buddy Geet is a bigger dumbo LOLROFL
well both are for that matter... she is pagli for keeping her feelings from him n he is a loosu to not see her feelings for him ROFL

BINGOROFL
dank u dank u Embarrassed who shall we make the cupid Embarrassed

U r welcome ...Rocking
rocking??? yeh kaun hai Confused
tumhari BFWinkLOL
mera BF Confused magar mera BF ka naam to Maan hai EmbarrassedWink
arghhhAngrychance lessEmbarrassed
wonderful update!!!
thnx for the lovely comments my dear kunjuuu maniii luv ya Hug

luv u 2...Hug 
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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -dia-

res

ll edit both the post after reading the second one

Btw love u darling ...umah ..Hug

~*Edit*~

The update was really Enchanting ...specially the dance part!!!

Beautifully penned down ...lovely!!!

wha wha ..kya baat hai ...Maan & TamilLOL ...Btw the song u r hiniting is "Poi solla kudathu kadhli" & I would have loved it more if u used the same word instead of nanbiEmbarrassed.
ahhh i thought nobody would recognize that song i was a bit hesitant to write that dialogue i even thought of attaching a note to it... but i didnt want to overdo it... but thnx for making my day by recognizing it Smile of course he learnt tamil... u know with geet around n her tamil cribbings its not hard to learn LOL for him she is his best mate, friend, guide, well-wisher... he is yet to realize kadhali in her n thats y i am here to make him realize Wink

woh tho Geet ka jadoo hai ...Wink well do that honor ...& I'm tihink arjun ll pop-up in the frame ..to make his day hell for making his ammalu cry ..Btw let it be in sweet way ..Be warned no pain to Maan ..If want lil pain ll goWink
of course arjun will pop-up n i mean this time its going to be WWIII n i dont think arjun would easily forgive maan... so geet will intervene to make sure maan is not hurt in anyway... n tumhe pata hai arjun cannot say no to her Wink

Thats better ...b4 arjun's action ..I need the proper reason y he is blaming Maan???
arre jaan abhi bhi tumhe nahi pata ki kyun arjun is blaming maan Confused
I mean the exact reason ..but I knw y he is blaming him ..so DW 
well that is the exact reason... Big smile
that is a lame reason according to meConfused
lame Shocked how is it lame???? 

Let me explain ...Arjun can't see Geet in pain ..& think Maan is responsible for that ...so that he might have tried to sort out that ...ya I knw Geet has taken promise not to tell Maan anything ...but still he might have hinted him ...atleast he might have given some clue in past b4 things getting out of control ..& U knw Maan ...how dumbo he is in this type of matterLOL
BINGO! u r right on trackkk Smile well arjun is annoyed that maan cannot see her love but that is not the reason for the abhorrence he has for maan... remember i mentioned one night changes everything... what happens that night is the reason for his REAL ANGER...
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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -dia-

so finally Geet realized that pain enduring him is coz of her ...but y she left him in first place ...whether she don't that she is his happiness???
actually even maan hasnt realized she is her ultimate happiness... i mean he knows she was not there during the most times he needed n it has pained him deeply but will he know she is needed even during the best times in his life...

Babaji ...mere Maan ko ..us dumbo ko kuch akal dona???
oi khabardar meri geet ko dumbo kaha toh Angry magar if geet is dumbo her best buddy maan is a bigger dumbo LOL

ROFL ...Geet ko nahi mere Maan ko ...& ur principles can be followed here too ...magar if Maan is dumbo his best buddy Geet is a bigger dumbo LOLROFL
well both are for that matter... she is pagli for keeping her feelings from him n he is a loosu to not see her feelings for him ROFL

BINGOROFL
dank u dank u Embarrassed who shall we make the cupid Embarrassed

U r welcome ...Rocking
rocking??? yeh kaun hai Confused
tumhari BFWinkLOL
mera BF Confused magar mera BF ka naam to Maan hai EmbarrassedWink
arghhhAngrychance lessEmbarrassed
ok ok naaraz mat ho... nahi kahungi (in front of uWinkTongue) magar batao batao kisse cupid banate hain Wink 

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