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Maaneet FF: Whispering Knolls NEW LINK on Pg141 (Page 107)

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 4:17pm | IP Logged

that was great part

but why not moving the story little fast...Embarrassed

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 5:14am | IP Logged
part 22
nice part...
Maan was so worried seeing Geet like that...
wow they have the same blood group...
Arjun so dislikes Maan...
cont soon...

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -dia-

Originally posted by Maaneet_09

Originally posted by -dia-

Beutiful part!!!

loved it ...awesome!!!

Geet-Kriti-Arjun moments were so sweet ...Mother-Daughter duo is just rocking ...acha hua Kriti ne Arjun ko Mammu boadiya ...lekin mujhe ek doubt hai ...Y she didn't call him when Maan was there ... whether U have any intention in creating MUs???

well I'm not commenting on Past ...as I didn't like the starting.

wonderful update!!!
diaaa Hug 
thnx for the comment! well the MU was not intentional she didnt say haan pappa. that's what maan heard. i hope to clear what she actually said in the next update hopefully if not i myself shall tell u what kriti said n why maan heard so that way Wink

waiting for that ...Day Dreaming

mujh par barosa karo i promise to keep my maan happy *running away before u smack me*LOL

kyun past accha isiliye -acha hai ...I liked 3/4th of the partBig smile expect the startingAngry 
oi starting mein hi acchi lagni chahiye kyunki u now now kriti addresses arjun as mama... 

accha nahi laga kyunki maan ko bad man i mean maan LOL (has mat,I'm getting angry)bana diya?? - Exactly ...how can u???CryCry
i like my men bad Evil Smile (bad men are SEXYYYWink ) full ka full ache ho toh there is no funWink... n i dont want that. hate is the first step in love Wink

writing acchi nahi lagi ya the story batao naConfused (how can u thk something like that it ...the story as well as the way the way u r penning it down is wonderful ...more over I'm loving it)
luv u darling for that. nahi seriously i wanted to know if my writing style needs to be changed i need people like u so that i can make it better isiliye pooch rahi thi. Smile

waiting ...
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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -dia-

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aww ...awesome Madhu Star(not U,I meant updateLOL)
haan haan mujhe pata... remember tere maan mere haat main abhi bhi tum kahogi ki i am not awesome (soch lo ek aur baar Evil SmileLOL)

The whole hospital scenes were wonderful ...Maan's restlessness & his fear of losing her ...though he is not able to voice out and understand his state of feelings(no probs,for he ll state it laterWink) ...have narrated beautifully ...Perfect!
hmmm not going to give too much away for now... see how the story shapes upBig smile

Vicky much knows about his Veerji very well ...kya in Future updates can we get more of Vicky playing cupids to bring them close???

Btw ab Vicky kaha hai????
i dont know if he will be able to play the cupid coz he himself is sooo lost in love (i mean changing gfs LOL) but vicky ab kaha hai... hai hai i may give a hint to where he is write now in the next update but cannot promise too much for now Tongue tumhe pata hai na last minute i add too much stuff that i many end up postponing vicky's whereabouts Ouch

Arjun tho Maan ko hug kiya ...well what ll be his reaction when he comes to know that he is Geet's Mr.Jellyfish???
tum mujhe marogi nahi na if i write the reaction Dead

Finally she decided to attend the Conference ...wish they come face-to-face ...pls don't disappoint me ...atleast let Maan see her.
nope i shall not disappoint u its a maan's promise. i already formed the whole encounter in my mind just hope to put it down into the best words n decorate it with proper honors Wink

I liked Geet's outburst ...she is 100XXX times correct ...Y Arjun needs to always blame himAngry ...glad that she made her point cleared about Maan.
maan koi chota baccha nahi tha n what he did was wrong meri geet ka dil dukhaya hai he needs to pay for it. Angry of course geet cannot hear against her maan but arjun cares for geet too much n that care is seen through his outbursts against maan...

But what U mean by this line ..." it was I who fell in love with him. What was his mistake in it if I failed " ... U r confusing meConfused ...coz in an earlier update u stated who much they love each-other, but this line sab ulta hogaya ...aur mujhe confuse bhi kardiya.
if i open my mouth to answer this i may give too much out Confused

I think in next update we can get Maan-Kirti encounter ...right ...can ?I hope the precap is meant for them???
well i never thought about the possible people this pre-cap could project this combo too now thinking abt it well i see a lot of possibilities LOL 
wonderful update!!!

loved it ...superb!!!


THANKS VERY VERY MUCH FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS. I HAVE IMMENSELY ENJOYED IT! LUV YAAA Hug
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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mrk_1

wow awsome one yaar...loved it so nmuch 
THNX SOOO MUCH Smile

Originally posted by nazsij

ek mere employee keliye ithna care?usi time se maan geet se attracted tha kya?i loved it...ufff finally she is going to meet him...i can't wait...it was awesome...poor arjun...
THNX A LOT FOR UR COMMENTS Smile YA POOR ARJUN BUT DONT WORRY HE SHALL BE FINE Wink

Originally posted by jasraj123

nice update. sooo geet is going to meet maan. 

precap is seems interesting. pls update soon and thanks for pm. still catching up so can't comment longLOL
THNX A LOT DEAR FOR THE COMMENTS. HAHA SILL CATCHING UP HUH? DONT WORRY U HAVE ALL THE TIME  U WANT Wink
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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aamirkhanfan

great part...loved it
THNX A LOT DEAR!

Originally posted by seshatree

awesome...
THNK U DEAR Smile

Originally posted by PerfectYaRav

Madhu    Hug...thank u for the lovely update and PM...both the past and present our getting really interesting...Maan giving his blood and saving Geet was awesome...waiting for Maaneet to meet at the conference...plz continue...TC Smile





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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shalve

loved it... awesome update...
THNX SOOO MUCH! Smile

Originally posted by Dilsay

superb update...eagerly waiting for the confrontation
THNK U DEAR FOR THE LOVELY COMMENTS Smile

Originally posted by maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ... 

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

THNX A LOT!Smile
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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti_l

awesome part...

maan saved geet...
of course bechara aur kya karega bhi LOL

n the precap is abt the past only...
pre-cap hmm when i wrote it i had only one thing in mind but it seems there are other possibilities too... well for a start it could be
1. arjun-maan encounter: after finding out maan is mr. jellyfish LOL
2. geet-arjun encounter: after the tiff between arjun n geet in the present for she shouted at him 
3. maan-kriti encounter: kriti seems to have still not warmed up to our dear maan LOL
4. maan-geet encounter: past or present Wink
these are the possible possibilities LOL see if u can guess it Wink


so it was geet who left him...but y??...coz of radhika...i think...

she still cant hear one word against him...it only tells that she loves him...still...but it was the circumstances that led her to leave him...
i think she did try to say but something went really wrong Ouch

continue soon...

thnx a lot for ur lovely comments Smile


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