FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47 (Page 49)

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PristineSoul

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joliefille

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 10:19am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Nidhsara

Esse kahthe hain grand finale...complete with rain,dance and romance...

Jo the end was as beutiful as the rest...emotional and funny...

My favourite part was offcourse the part you dedicated to me...wherein Arpita and Avdesh talk to their respective in laws...relations thats what matters to me the most...

One character in this story that i admire the most was NP ma'am...liked her for her maturity and not loosing the faith in love even though she was cheated.

Arshikhs redeemed herself in the end which has given her respect in my eyes...

Avita has entertained me throughout...

Love you for this ff...

And waiting for more such ff's and os from you...

Love

Nidha

Hey Nidha dear thankyou sooo much for liking the last part too

n special biiig kissiii for commenting dear as u all know how bad i m in romance writing n here i tried my best in it Ouch

so ur all's comments meant alot for me,

about ur fav part thanx for liking it yaar, u know for me love is only love n its incomplete if u have to hurt ur or the guy's family for aachieving it, n while that part i was suspecious whether u guys like it or find it bouring n i dedicated that part to u bz in ur FF i love the way u discribe all relations ,

sorry yaar i read ur last lovely UD but till now not commented yet as i have only few mins to visit forum or mom will kill me hehe LOL

n about ur fav cheracters thanx for liking NP n Chote u know NP mam''s cheracter i drew from my LU teacher hope no one else know her here LOL or she can sue me LOL

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joliefille

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 10:48am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Cuty16

Hye jo,
this part was just awesome awesome dear.
Loved each n every line of it.
Avi is just too too romantic wondering why arsh said him un romantic.
He He He uske sath kaise romantic hota he does'nt love her at all.
Loved u bought N.P.mam again.
Chotu was also nice and avi's idea was too good.
The complete part was realy like surprise package b'coz it was full of cute & sweet surprises.

Loved avi & arpi convo a lot.

hey Rups thanx for liking it dear,

yap u guessed it right Arshi ke saath romantic kaise hota LOL

aakhir ODB apne dil ki sun ke romance karenge ya confussed mind ki Embarrassed

i m realy glad that u liked this part too

n really very happy that u guys find it romantic LOL

rest , we will talk tomorrow ,

love ya for such sweet lovely comments dear

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 12:13pm | IP Logged

I unresed mah post on pg 48 Smile

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 2:05pm | IP Logged

I edited my post in Pg 39,42,47 finally and i completed editing all the res post

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Vistaa

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 9:27pm | IP Logged

Yoohoo Neha

!! Congratulations on completing you first fanfic...sorry, I had not been regular in reading and commenting but the finale was fantabulous and I luvvved all the dialogues between Arpita and Avi

...very sweet and natural

I am so glad that you gave it a happy ending...those are the best

...happy endings, that is.

Very well done

Thanks for sharing your talent with us

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Update my Post on page 48

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PristineSoul

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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 6:04am | IP Logged

hiee Sugar pie..

loved the ending..

although You know Im greedy for AviTa romance..you didnt continue with it..

but still..

loved the entire FF..

my fav part was 'Mesmerizing Night'

I hope you start another FF.. *we will force you *

love you..Muah muah..