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FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47 (Page 49)

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
I edited my post in Pg 39,42,47 finally and i completed editing all the res post D'ohDancingParty

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 9:27pm | IP Logged
 
Yoohoo NehaParty!! Congratulations on completing you first fanfic...sorry, I had not been regular in reading and commenting but the finale was fantabulous and I luvvved all the dialogues between Arpita and AviClapClap...very sweet and naturalBig smile
 
I am so glad that you gave it a happy ending...those are the bestSmile...happy endings, that is.
 
Very well doneClapClapClapClap
 
Thanks for sharing your talent with usSmile
 
 

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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
Update my Post on page 48Cool

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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 6:04am | IP Logged

hiee Sugar pie.. Hug

loved the ending..

although You know Im greedy for AviTa romance..you didnt continue with it.. Angry

but still..

loved the entire FF..

my fav part was 'Mesmerizing Night'

I hope you start another FF.. *we will force you Evil Smile*



love you..Muah muah..

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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 3:46pm | IP Logged
Great precap Neha, it's so adorable that Avi kisses Arpi's tears so each time she cries, she gets a kiss. 

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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
Neha darling, your final update was excellent. I loved how Avita reunited, their prom night was fabulous and of course everyone will be jealous of their jodi. I loved how Avi took care of Arpi at the hospital and how her parents accepted everything. Arshi changed for the better and found true love. Loved how Avi angered Arpi and then presented her, even I was furious. His gifts are so sweet. Carrying her was the best entry. The garden scene was romantic, especially the proposal and kiss. It reminded me of Twilight's prom, and the Cinderella Story. Thanks for the great conclusion. You wrapped everything up brilliantly.

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 2:42am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Sidda8

Great precap Neha, it's so adorable that Avi kisses Arpi's tears so each time she cries, she gets a kiss. 

heyy Siddu welcome back dearBig smile

oye hoye , u made it 50th page wowWink

thanx for liking it dearEmbarrassed

will b bck soon by 26th for sureWink

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Posted: 23 June 2011 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
hey neha!!!
fist of all sorry for the late reply!! been a bit busy so havent had tym to reply... but since u asked so nicely... cant say no now can iTongue
soo here goes!!
loved it!! so much romance and avi being so sweet!! kept smiling at his cutenes...
my fave part was in the hospital scene when avi was goin to stop arpi cryin by kissing herrEmbarrassed but arpi is soo shy... well at least avi knws hw to make her smile again lol
and then with chotuu it was soo cutee!!! bhabhi and bhaiyyah lol cute couple. loved the way avi got arpi to take off her earings so he cud gift herr... and way to put onn the necklace... badmaash avii EmbarrassedLOL
can just imagine the entire colleges expressions when avi carried arpi in!! poor souls... all the girls who were gaga over avi being all jelous Approve the way they shud be!!!

as u can tell i loved it!!! great ff neha... can't believe it finished!!!!
u did brilliant neha!! the best ClapClapClapClapClap

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