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FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47 (Page 20)

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Posted: 19 April 2011 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
Yayy..1st one to comment after so long...PartyDancingLOLLOL

Woww...woww....wowwiiieee!!!!!!!ClapClapStarStarThumbs Up
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This is update is just excellent..fantastic...mindblowing!!ClapClap

I don't knw hw to react....I got so engrossed in it dat even though it was a long part but I still felt it was short..WinkEmbarrassedLOLLOL

Hats off to u Neha!!!


First of all so many questions crossing the minds of AVITA....why can't they see the answer dat is so clearly in front of them.....I can't wait to see them together..
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Secondly..Arshika's character still is a suspense for me..Ermm
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Thirdly....dat RV...such a big *beep beepWink* Censored
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Hope he gets his full doses frm Avi.....
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Loved both the songs dat u selected...In short..I am totally in love with ur FF...
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Plzz plzz update soon...Big smileBig smile

Can't wait to read the next action & dhamaka filled dhagaddum update!!
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Edited by jes_jade - 20 April 2011 at 12:48pm

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hey jo this ff is getting more and more intrestingggg.....Embarrassed
i can imagine each and every scene in front of my eyes...Clap
well done


yeh rv toh bada danger nikla yaar.........................





Edited by danno - 20 April 2011 at 9:08pm

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Hey JO Hug

WOW jo is it amazing and i love the way you portrayed the Arpi and Avi emotions Clap Star Clap Star Clap

i dunno what to say Approve



Love you JO Hug


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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:12am | IP Logged
Hey NehaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaHugHug


Sorry sweetie.....Updated my post after a looo...............ng timeOuch

But..........this part made me speechless...

I love both the songs....Heart nd it suited them alsoEmbarrassed

I read it again and again...............Embarrassed

Finally, Avi came to knw abt his true feelingsD'oh  When Arpi would come to knwConfused

RV is aCensored

Wht is he uptoAngry  I think Arshika does not love AviOuch I dnt knw why she is doing thisAngry


The romantic moments of Avita...were juz superbClapClapClapClap Well Done sweetie...

                       



M eagerly waiting fr next partWink

                                  

                   




Edited by prash_t - 21 April 2011 at 11:25am

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Oye RV jaldi marne ka shok hai kya...this is whatcame to my mind after i finishd the chapter...becoz soon he is going to be raita...with special garnishings...and i was right Arshikha is onto Avi only for his money i guess......well girl you are in for shock of your life...kyunki chahe zameen asmaan ek ho jaaye humare Avita ko darthi mei koi alag nahi kar sakta.....loved it Jo...update soon...love u

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 5:54am | IP Logged
Hey Jolie,

amazing FF, read all the chapters for the first time n was mesmerized  with fact that this FF seems very real to me.


will be looking forward for ur update.

again great show dear keep it up

  

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Wonderful FF update Neha. Avi finally sees that Arpi is his true love. The Avita scene was so romantic. That RV is a jerk, poor Arpi has to be saved before he performs his sinful deeds. Good thing Avi stayed back and now he will beat up RV for hurting Arpi.

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nidhsara

Oye RV jaldi marne ka shok hai kya...this is whatcame to my mind after i finishd the chapter...becoz soon he is going to be raita...with special garnishings...and i was right Arshikha is onto Avi only for his money i guess......well girl you are in for shock of your life...kyunki chahe zameen asmaan ek ho jaaye humare Avita ko darthi mei koi alag nahi kar sakta.....loved it Jo...update soon...love u

Hey nidh sara thanx for ur comment dear,
@bold i really like it "...with special garnishing"LOLLOL
@red huun dear, it was same Avi with same money when she ditched him earlierOuch

think more why she returned nowWink

keep on thinking will try to update soon .Embarrassed

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