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FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47 (Page 12)

Cuty16 Goldie

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Hye dear,
Sounds like love is in the air.
I will be waiting to see the Update.

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joliefille Goldie

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 12:44pm | IP Logged

Sorry  everyone The Play was getting too lengthy so i m going to give it in two parts hope you like it and special sorry if anyone find it disgracing Shakespear's 'R-J' Embarrassed

this one for ANGILI, CUTY, n NIDHSARA,



NP's decision was really surprising for both of them as Arpi was new for collage she never heard anything about its annual plays, while Avi  take part in it only his first year as Romeo "best ever" that's what he was declared , but no one knows why he never participate again in any drama.

But this year everything was going to change, he agreed to play Romeo, not whole heartedly but as a gift for NP mam. Rehearsals was starting from that day when Shikha called Arpita and inform her that they are coming to pick her for rehearsal, they are coming mean that Avi and Shikha both are coming, Shikha was going to play the "Nurse" most close to "Juliet" . other roles were already distributed Rv want to be part of Play but Np forbid him from doing so as she don't want any mess during rehearsals or on stage. A car stopped at Arpi's door.

Shikha-"Arpita! Are you coming or we have to wait for you?"

Arpita came running as they were stopped on next side of street to her house,

Arpi-"Coming dear, why are you so excited?"   While sitting in the car, she noticed Avdhesh's expressions he was looking annoyed, "what happened to your brother?"

Avi-"oh god Arpita you girls are just chatter boxes! What happened with me! I m just fine."

Arpita get that there's something wrong, he was behaving differently, from that night in hospital they turn a bit close friends now, as they know each others real face, which they are hiding from rest of the world. she changed the topic,

Arpi-"So Shikha, looking excited, all set for stage dabue"

Shikha- "Dabute! Yaar its you who is going to get the best debut ever I m sure you guys are going to burn the stage on performance night, madam you know how lucky you are?

You are going to be Juliet of the best Romeo ever in collage history, you have to practice a lot to mach him on stage"

Arpi got chance to divert his tension, " oh really then I think that was the only chance of this play ever in collage history, otherwise I don't think he can act as super romantic hero or near to him."

Avi got smile on his face, she saw it in mirror, she smiled too,

Avi-"oh so Arpita mam have too much confidence on her acting skills! Let us see mam who is better."

Shikha-"wooooo! Sounds interesting! Now I m sure this play is going to be most memorable play ever as you both are set to give your best, BTW Arpita you never told us that you are interested in acting"

Arpi-"well, I like to do it, but just never got chance to try it in front of anyone, so when mam asked it as her gift, I think should give a try, may be I can act like my di"

Shikha-"your di, is she actress?"

Arpi-"not actually, but in her collage days she was the best Juliet, and see now I m going to try my acting skills as same character "Juliet".

This time Avi looked at her eyes in mirror he get that she is not happy as again everyone will compare her with her sister, he said-"I bet you will be worse then your sister!"

Shikha burst in laughter and Arpi give a warning look to him.

Arpi-"don't you dare to say anything about my di ok she is the best"

In their convo they reached the rehearsals hall, they all entered it in light mood Avi forget that he don't want to be Romeo again as last time when he played the character he loose his love but this time he don't have it loose it, is that true!.

Rehearsals starts they practice more nowadays as the day of performance comes closer

They too, now every morning Arpi wake up with the thoughts of Avi or the dialogs of Romeo which they practiced last day, Shikha and Avdhesh  pick her daily if Shikha was not going then Avi pick her as they are the protagonist so they have to rehearse together, they were rehearsing the first meeting of "romeo and Juliet"the very first visit of Romeo at copulates mention where the party was on, and everyone was dancing, he was there to search his first love "Rosaline" but as she was with someone else, Juliet was waiting for her fiance who was coming to meet her first time,

(Avi=Romeo,,,, Arpi=Juliet)


O, she doth teach the torches to burn bright!
It seems she hangs upon the cheek of night
Like a rich jewel in an Ethiope's ear;
Beauty too rich for use, for earth too dear!
So shows a snowy dove trooping with crows,
As yonder lady o'er her fellows shows.
The measure done, I'll watch her place of stand,
And, touching hers, make blessed my rude hand.
Did my heart love till now? Forswear it, sight!
For I ne'er saw true beauty till this night.

Avi says while looking a Arpi with mesmerized eyes,


[ToArpi]I profane with my unworthiest hand
This holy shrine, the gentle fine is this:
My lips, two blushing pilgrims, ready stand
To smooth that rough touch with a tender kiss.

And he bows to kiss her hands,


Good pilgrim, you do wrong your hand too much,
Which mannerly devotion shows in this;
For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch,
And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.

She draws her hand and placed it with his hand like worshiping(namaskaar)


Have not saints lips, and holy palmers too?

He came close for kiss,


Ay, pilgrim, lips that they must use in prayer.

She backed a step,


O, then, dear saint, let lips do what hands do;
They pray, grant thou, lest faith turn to despair.


Saints do not move, though grant for prayers' sake.


Then move not, while my prayer's effect I take.
Thus from my lips, by yours, my sin is purged.


Then have my lips the sin that they have took.


Sin from thy lips? O trespass sweetly urged!
Give me my sin again.


You kiss by the book.


Arpi deliver the last line and burst in laugh,

"oh my god, Shakespear must be out of his mind when he write such lines, and if not then after reading it he must gone crazy"

Avi was smiling too but he don't know he was smiling bz of dialogues or its Arpi's smile effect,

Next day they were watching others rehearsals when Arpi asked him-" can I ask something?"

Avi-"what if I say no!" he smiled " I m sure you will ask then why are you asking?"

Arpi-"why don't you participate last year? I mean you are a good acter, even I don't want to say but that's a fact."she knows that indirectly she was asking about "Her".

Avi-this time her memory doesn't affect him much "its bz of her, you know whom, I thought if I entered the hall and tried to be there on stage I will be overwhelmed by her memories, and specially as Romeo I can't even think, bz that time she was Juliet, and that Juliet broke not only my heart but me too." he ends his talk with a sarcastic smile on his lips.

Arpi-" see but I don't think any thing like that happened. M I right Mr. Thakur?"

Her last words bring again smile on his face.

Avi-" yap you are right Miss Rai."

Chulbul heard only Mr. Thakur and Miss Rai. He just jumped in,

"oye MR THAKUR and MISS RAI , chaol realty pe aao aur ROMEO JULIET ban jaao"

They both were stunned by his words, and he immediately corrects his sentence, "I mean time for your scene, come on."

They both get on stage it was The balcony scene,


He jests at scars that never felt a wound.

JULIET appears above at a window


Ay me!


She speaks:
O, speak again, bright angel! for thou art
As glorious to this night, being o'er my head
As is a winged messenger of heaven
Unto the white-upturned wondering eyes
Of mortals that fall back to gaze on him
When he bestrides the lazy-pacing clouds
And sails upon the bosom of the air.


O Romeo, Romeo! wherefore art thou Romeo?
Deny thy father and refuse thy name;
Or, if thou wilt not, be but sworn my love,
And I'll no longer be a Capulet.

She was talking to her self , as he was hidden,


[Aside] Shall I hear more, or shall I speak at this?


'Tis but thy name that is my enemy;
Thou art thyself, though not a Montague.
What's Montague? it is nor hand, nor foot,
Nor arm, nor face, nor any other part
Belonging to a man. O, be some other name!
What's in a name? that which we call a rose
By any other name would smell as sweet;
So Romeo would, were he not Romeo call'd,
Retain that dear perfection which he owes
Without that title. Romeo, doff thy name,
And for that name which is no part of thee
Take all myself.


I take thee at thy word:
Call me but love, and I'll be new baptized;
Henceforth I never will be Romeo.


What man art thou that thus bescreen'd in night
So stumblest on my counsel?


By a name
I know not how to tell thee who I am:
My name, dear saint, is hateful to myself,
Because it is an enemy to thee;
Had I it written, I would tear the word.


My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue's utterance, yet I know the sound:
Art thou not Romeo and a Montague?


Neither, fair saint, if either thee dislike.


How camest thou hither, tell me, and wherefore?
The orchard walls are high and hard to climb,
And the place death, considering who thou art,
If any of my kinsmen find thee here.


With love's light wings did I o'er-perch these walls;
For stony limits cannot hold love out,
And what love can do that dares love attempt;
Therefore thy kinsmen are no let to me.


If they do see thee, they will murder thee.


Alack, there lies more peril in thine eye
Than twenty of their swords: look thou but sweet,
And I am proof against their enmity.


I would not for the world they saw thee here.


I have night's cloak to hide me from their sight;
And but thou love me, let them find me here:
My life were better ended by their hate,
Than death prorogued, wanting of thy love.


By whose direction found'st thou out this place?


By love, who first did prompt me to inquire;
He lent me counsel and I lent him eyes.
I am no pilot; yet, wert thou as far
As that vast shore wash'd with the farthest sea,
I would adventure for such merchandise.


Lady, by yonder blessed moon I swear
That tips with silver all these fruit-tree tops--


O, swear not by the moon, the inconstant moon,
That monthly changes in her circled orb,
Lest that thy love prove likewise variable.


What shall I swear by?


Do not swear at all;
Or, if thou wilt, swear by thy gracious self,
Which is the god of my idolatry,
And I'll believe thee.


If my heart's dear love--


Well, do not swear: although I joy in thee,
I have no joy of this contract to-night:
It is too rash, too unadvised, too sudden;
Too like the lightning, which doth cease to be
Ere one can say 'It lightens.' Sweet, good night!
This bud of love, by summer's ripening breath,
May prove a beauteous flower when next we meet.
Good night, good night! as sweet repose and rest
Come to thy heart as that within my breast!


O, wilt thou leave me so unsatisfied?


What satisfaction canst thou have to-night?


The exchange of thy love's faithful vow for mine.


I gave thee mine before thou didst request it:
And yet I would it were to give again.


Wouldst thou withdraw it? for what purpose, love?


But to be frank, and give it thee again.
And yet I wish but for the thing I have:
My bounty is as boundless as the sea,
My love as deep; the more I give to thee,
The more I have, for both are infinite.

Exit, above


O blessed, blessed night! I am afeard.
Being in night, all this is but a dream,
Too flattering-sweet to be substantial.

Re-enter JULIET, above


Hist! Romeo, hist! O, for a falconer's voice,
To lure this tassel-gentle back again!
Bondage is hoarse, and may not speak aloud;
Else would I tear the cave where Echo lies,
And make her airy tongue more hoarse than mine,
With repetition of my Romeo's name.


It is my soul that calls upon my name:
How silver-sweet sound lovers' tongues by night,
Like softest music to attending ears!




My dear?


At what o'clock to-morrow
Shall I send to thee?


At the hour of nine.


I will not fail: 'tis twenty years till then.
I have forgot why I did call thee back.


Let me stand here till thou remember it.


I shall forget, to have thee still stand there,
Remembering how I love thy company.


And I'll still stay, to have thee still forget,
Forgetting any other home but this.


'Tis almost morning; I would have thee gone:
And yet no further than a wanton's bird;
Who lets it hop a little from her hand,
Like a poor prisoner in his twisted gyves,
And with a silk thread plucks it back again,
So loving-jealous of his liberty.


I would I were thy bird.


Sweet, so would I:
Yet I should kill thee with much cherishing.
Good night, good night! parting is such
sweet sorrow,
That I shall say good night till it be morrow.

By these words as Arpi turns and Avi climbed down the set of  blcony broke and arpi fell but as Avi was already standing under it he catches her and a log from balcony set fell on his forehead, there was a cut on his forehead,  but he was looking at her in his arms,

Avi-"Arpita are you ok! Comeon girl speak up!"


Thats all for today hope you like it,Embarrassed

waiting for comments, n Priya dear bz of my pc cant use ur suggestion will try it in next updateEmbarrassed

Edited by joliefille - 11 April 2011 at 8:20am

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jasveensokhi Senior Member

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Hey JO meh first in d list........LOLLOLLOL

So once again a mindblowing part realy vry nic

I realy liked d way when AVI n ARPI called each other

MR. THAKUR n MISS RAI EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

HATT'S OFF 2 u.......Clap

Edited by jasveensokhi - 11 April 2011 at 12:53pm

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-Prashu- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 12:52pm | IP Logged

Romeo-Juliet part was wonderful....StarStar

Both are falling fr each otherBlushing

Superb Play DearClap


Hats Off to you...

Edited by prash_t - 14 April 2011 at 2:02pm

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yoga23priya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
JO Hug

Love it Embarrassed 

you are sooo awesome Cool

NO words Approve

i am not a romantic person soo Romeo and Juliet i can't get in my head LOL

Chulbhul is Awesome Wink

LOve ya

Edited by yoga23priya - 14 April 2011 at 2:36pm

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jes_jade IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
Just one word..Wooowwwwwwww!!!!!!Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

Hats off to you Neha!!!!!

What a fabulous play...& this whole update shows the effort u have put!!!ClapClapClap

It's just a classic piece..ClapClap

I never expected Shakespeare's Romeo-Juliet part to be so extraordinary!!Thumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs Up

You made me speechless!!StarStarStarStar

I am really eager to read next..EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Cont soon..Big smileBig smile

Edited by jes_jade - 10 April 2011 at 1:03pm

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Cuty16 Goldie

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Hye jo,
great part dear.once again.

Edited by Cuty16 - 11 April 2011 at 11:14am

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Vistaa IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 April 2011 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
Very very cute, Neha...........your Avi and Arpitaa are coming along nicely with the help of The BardBig smile.great setting and dialogueClapClap
Can't wait for the next part.
Thanks for the pm.

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