FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47

Hello everyone i m here for few days hope so and during this disappearance i have some wierd kind of ideas hope , i can turn them into my first ever FF😆😆


                                                     
 

Part 8...Page 16(Shadows Turn Alive)

Precap...Page 18

Part 9...Page 19 (Silence before the Storm)

Precap...Page 24

Part 10...Page 25(Storm bursts out)

Precap...Page 27

Part 10... Page 30(Storm burst out, Part -2) 

                                                                                   

Edited by joliefille - 12 years ago

Hi jolifeille, of course I'm excited for more Avita ff. I would love to see Avita compete against each other in a competition especially since they are B.A. students.

Edited by yoga23priya - 13 years ago

Hye jo,
nice one dear you must write as the intro sounds intresting & we will be looking forward to it.
Bye

Hey Jo......!!

        

  "Desire"

Time is running out she hav to wear her sis's abandoned clothes as she is still not unpacked her own clothes n cubord is still full of her clothes

Arpi-"oh god , wat is this di has left her all Indian dresses for me , not single top or trouser, now wat, "oh no I can't manage these patyala salwaar with such heavy 'dupatta'

N specialy in this reany day,"

Meanwhile her uncle call her-"Arpi beta, come fast I m getting late if u r not coming within two mins I hav to leave for office n u hav to go alone on ur first day."

Arpi was changing ?" coming uncle, just two mins I will b there with u"

Her two mins turn to ten as she hav to fight big battle with her sis's clothes.when she came down her uncle was not there, aunt ? " ur late arpi , ur uncle called u many times but when u didn't reply he says drop the plan of going today he will take you tomorrow,don't worry he will talk to ur proffecer she is a nice lady"

Arpi_(oh no if uncle talked to mam then everyone will again recognize me as her lil sis I don't want it happen again)oh its ok aunty I will manage, its not reaning now I can manage,afterall I don't want to miss the adventure of exploring the new world ,plz let me go"

"ok if u insist,but if u find anything troubling u just come back or give me a call"

Arpi leaves for collage after a hug to aunt as she allowed her to go,she come on road n hired a autoriksha for collage but destiny ha decided something else for her after going half way to collage the auto stoped as its engine got some trobule so  Arpi decide to walk that distance,but again rain starts n she runs for shelter which she finds on the side shop of the street,actuly a tea stall of a 12 year old boy,

Boy-"madam , ur looking quenched , hav some tea it will make u feel good"

Arpi-"madam!ok boy u can call me di, as it will b my daily route, tea haan not today may b some other time"

As she was talking to boy a fast bike crossed her n throw all the street mud on her white sute which makes her annoyed but the biker was gone.just after that biker another bike stops n a boy of almost her age enter the stall of tea boy,

Boy-" oh Bhaiya u didn't forget to come , I thought u will not come as its raining and he is ahead of u "

Biker-"don't worry chote, he can't efeat me ,he has victory only in his name , I hav it in my hand"

Arpi was listening the convo  she got the idea that these two bikers r friends n they were racing that's why that one throw all mud on her,before she says anything the Biker looked at her says- "ok Chote looks like u hav a mescott for ur shop".

Arpi-"how dare u talk about me like this ,ur friend had done this to me n now instead of feeling sorry u are making fun of me"

Biker (while again getting on his bike)"-oooh mam u scared me, forgive me plz see I m shivering"  .

He get on his bike , starts it n gone like wind.Chote was smiling on all this incident while this make Arpi more angry becouse  she even can't see his face clearly as he was putting helmet all the while in shop,.

*END*

That's all for first scene hope you like it .

If u don't then no probs waise bhi hum zaldi to wapas aane wale hain nahi to joo bhi sudhaar ke comment dene hain plz dil khol ke de do.😃

hey priya ,cuty, parash thanks for liking it and reminding me of my exams😆

well my family is sleeping n i was studing but after updating this i m going to sleep 😆 I can logged in bz of my bro , use patay but devil says only one day for me by tomarrow morning he will take my cell n again i can't login for long time😡

hey dreamy di n all those who give a glance n liked it thanks ,

hope next time i will give nice peace,sorry for spell mistakes i m feeling sleepy ,🥱

n don't worry my exams will b in april yaar abhi to last min ki study ke liye time hai😆😆

Edited by joliefille - 13 years ago

First of all congrats Jo for ur first FF..🥳



I really enjoyed reading the first part!!😳
Awesome part!!👏👏
Its very interesting......can't wait to read next!!
Cont Soon..😃

Edited by prash_t - 13 years ago

Edited by yoga23priya - 13 years ago

Congo jo for ur ff,i liked reading it i hope the next man on bike was avi only.
I like dis pehle takrar fir pyar and all.
And all the best for ur exam take ur time.
Bye