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BreakPoint (Maneet FF)- Epilogue added (pg 122) (Page 83)

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 9:00am | IP Logged
nice update.. continue soon

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 9:03am | IP Logged


Ok . The update was awesome . Absolutely spell-binding . Everything fitted seamlessly ; the party ,  Geet's initial reluctance & eventually their dance , lastly their confrontation .
                           
The dialogues by Geet were fantastic ........  Star   Star   Star . Very hard hitting & painful . Am very proud Geet told him that HE WAS RESPONSIBLE for her misery ......... Thumbs Up    Thumbs Up

LOVED it .... Clap   Clap   Clap


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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 9:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by puth

lovely update gb....
guess Aahana is nanny for maaneet's baby................

Keep guessing...I like all of your curiosity...

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 9:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gawdygory



Ok . The update was awesome . Absolutely spell-binding . Everything fitted seamlessly ; the party ,  Geet's initial reluctance & eventually their dance , lastly their confrontation .
                           
The dialogues by Geet were fantastic ........  Star   Star   Star . Very hard hitting & painful . Am very proud Geet told him that HE WAS RESPONSIBLE for her misery ......... Thumbs Up    Thumbs Up

LOVED it .... Clap   Clap   Clap



Yes..agree..the flow..actually came very naturally to me....She opening up with...because of his flirting...loving pokes..she understanding...there is no way she can escape now...If you have noted this part was pretty long one....and I wrote this just in one sitting...no review.... nothing....that's why u see that natural flow...ClapClap

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 9:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kooliio

Awesome update..!!!
Loved geet's outburst...!!!
Can't wait for the next part..!!
Pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM

This is Geet's first shot only...more to coBig smileme....
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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 9:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by acjanfeb1

ATLAST GEET HAD BLURTED OUT .YES , GEET IS RIGHT WITH HER QUESTION .I WANTED TO SEE HOW MAAN IS GOING TO HANDLE THE INNER TURMOIL OF GEET .GREAT PART . WAITING FOR THE NEXT .

Yes....Maan is going to have tough time..
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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 10:19am | IP Logged
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
loved geet getting jealous
glad geet let her anger out
hope maaneet can move on
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
ah!finally geet opens up 2 maan...tells her pain,agony.
vry nice update..hp dis nw yr wl bring dem a new start..
do cnt...thnx 4 d pm!

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