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BreakPoint (Maneet FF)- Epilogue added (pg 122) (Page 54)

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjh1234

woderful update dear can't wait for maneet meeting Smile
Yes..they will meet....but will it be explosive or hello hi type...you have to wait.

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by butterfly.tanu

for last 5 years...............
means u skipped 5 yrs..........
omg geet left HP also..........
poor geet....CryCry
dev hitted n abused her.....also foced her..now he making excuses that he never saw any feelings in her eyes for him...what a jerk.....AngryAngryAngry
where is geet??QuestionQuestion
i hope geet is in Shimla.............
and they will meet soon...........
thanx 4 the update dear..
loved it.........SmileSmile
No surprise..that she is at Shmila...so how they meet..and then how he wins her back...is next
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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by jazzerette

@part 9....Very well written. You have put together Maan's pain and guilt very well. 
Jazz
 
I have fulfilled your wish...you wanted him to repent more....so 5 years is long time...and Geet is not going to make it easy.....Cry

Yes I wanted him to repent more. Geet laid out everything infront of him. She pleaded and begged for his love. She married his good-for-nothing brother for his sake. She suffered abuse and rape in silence. She surrendered to him completely in love. Its good she will make it difficult. She has been too giving. A woman's honor is the most treasured thing for her. A man can suffer for ages, still he can never undo a woman's loss of honor.

But ofcourse, I believe in true love's power to heal all. And I believe that love is so powerful that nothing can keep it suppressed for long. And it will engulf Maaneet, soothing their sufferings and fill their lives with lifelong happiness.


Edited by jazzerette - 25 March 2011 at 11:00pm

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Awesome part... loved it

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jazzerette

Originally posted by goldenball

Originally posted by jazzerette

@part 9....Very well written. You have put together Maan's pain and guilt very well. 
Jazz
 
I have fulfilled your wish...you wanted him to repent more....so 5 years is long time...and Geet is not going to make it easy.....Cry

Yes I wanted him to repent more. Geet laid out everything infront of him. She pleaded and begged for his love. She married his good-for-nothing brother for his sake. She suffered abuse and rape in silence. She surrendered to him completely in love. Its good she will make it difficult. She has been too giving. A woman's honor is the most treasured thing for her. A man can suffer for ages, still he can never undo a woman's loss of honor.

But ofcourse, I believe in true love's power to heal all. And I believe that love is so powerful that nothing can keep it suppressed for long. And it will engulf Maaneet, soothing their sufferings and fill their lives with lifelong happiness.
Yes...i also wanted him to suffer to realize how traumatic it is when you don't get to see the person whom you love....how that guilt of she not saying anything makes his  life more painful...A woman honor..is her most precious thing....she cannot forgive if someone uses her.....like if you remember in one of the MPK part -23 , I had put Geet was hurt because of being used as a sex object...her inner pride was hurt....her womanhood was insulted.....so in this case you will see this coming.....U have to wait.Tongue 
 
 
 
So we are having some interesting discussions....I am glad my story is provoking such good thoughts....

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 11:13pm | IP Logged
awesome update.

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
loved it...

hmm 5 years..poor Maan

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Posted: 26 March 2011 at 12:20am | IP Logged
story is moving in a nice direction 
well when GC (Maan) was on break DD (Geet) handle the episode alone.....here I fell DD (geet) is on break and GC (Maan) is handling the episode :) 

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