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BreakPoint (Maneet FF)- Epilogue added (pg 122) (Page 46)

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jazzerette

@part8....wow...this was unexpected. Geet's request came out of her need to truly loved once. But I felt it was too easy on Maan. I was kind of glad when she walked out on him. Maan needs to repent properly. 
Jazz...
 
True...she went thru all this for love...and her desire to be loved once was very strong.....she asks him if you knew about Dev...he says Yes...still she asks him for togetherness....because her urge to meet her love is very strong....
 
She walking out on him is still because of her love...because she knows divorcing one brother and marrying another one.. what she will face to do so....what Maan will face,....Dev will get an excuse...so she just doesn't want to trouble Maan.
 
But here is the breakpoint in the story.....how they seaprate...and how they meet...and True Maan repentance has to be more....then words.

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -dia-

wow.............that was beautiful!!!!

wonderful update.....................love it!!!!

Their unison was magical!!!

Thanks......no one has commented on their union yet...I think that was quite passionate and first time kind....thanks....

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
fabulous

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
thanks for the pm...

lovely update
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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 12:47am | IP Logged

this is the most beautiful part of this ff....................................

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:14am | IP Logged
that was awesome...
 
geet was so much in love with maan!!!! awesome update
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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:17am | IP Logged
wow amazing update.. luved geet's depth of luv for maan.. continue soon

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 1:28am | IP Logged
loved the update...........
omg...hot night...BlushingBlushing
truly magical..........
geet walking out........CryCryCry
update soon.........


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