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BreakPoint (Maneet FF)- Epilogue added (pg 122) (Page 39)

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
@Part7...I had kept my breath held throughout the update...and only relaxed when I read Geet is going to be free of Dev. Btw...doesn't Dadima know about Dev's torture? What is her take on this? 

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Nargis--

GB...Sorry, I finally got around to reading all 6 chapters.  You have weaved a very interesting ans Sad story.  The only victim in this story is Geet....both Maan and Dev have wronged her to such an extent.  Dev is just a JERK...i cannot expect more from him, but Maan too...he sold her love so short....the price was a possible improvement for his looser brother....was that how little her LOVE was worth.   I know Geet's character is not very independent in this story, but if i was Geet, then I would leave both of them and let them both rot for life.  I would bring criminal charges against Dev for physical. mental and emotional abuse, and I would leave Maan to wallow in his rightfully deserved guilt!!Angry

Looking forward to Maan running with his tail between his legs!!!Ouch
Yes...but my Geet is independent in this story........but her craziness for love...for Maan....to prove her love...she is accepting Dev...and if u read chapter 7...she decides to leave ....without Maan telling....

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
i wanna see dev to be beaten n thrashed by maan yaar Angry

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -dia-

wonderful update..............love it!!!!

feeling sorry for geet,for proving her love she needs to undergo this much.

its time for maan to prove his love nd win her back!!!


Yes that is what he will do now...in chapter 7...he decides for her...but winning her trust will take time...and I am not going to make it that easy.....Angry

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjh1234

i wanna see dev to be beaten n thrashed by maan yaar Angry
Good thought....but i will not like Maan wasting time on him...instead he should put focus on Geet..to bring her out of trauma.
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
So dev is willing to give her divorce nd she is going hp but will her family let her take divorce????
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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
Even in due time...Geet does forgive Maan....how will Maan ever forgive himself???Dead

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jazzerette

@Part7...I had kept my breath held throughout the update...and only relaxed when I read Geet is going to be free of Dev. Btw...doesn't Dadima know about Dev's torture? What is her take on this? 
 
Yes..i didn't wanted to hang-on too much on Dev... so ...thats why I fast forwarded..(This I have learnt from GHSPTongue )....
 
Is Dadi ma that important....? .I am planning to put some on her repentance in next chapter ..but not much..she has no major role to play...in further story.

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