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BreakPoint (Maneet FF)- Epilogue added (pg 122) (Page 36)

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nav2010

OOOHHH man its very sad i am cryinggggggggg...
 
 
Maan.......He raped me...beat me........last night........" ...her voice very low.... hardly audible....and... she closed her eyes.....she could not face him...cannot look into his eyes......

"Geet........" he was not able to believe her....how could Dev do such a thing.....

"He wanted me to always remember......not to ever ask him about his coming late........"

Maan........was totally lost......he thought Dev respected Geet ...he was so eager to marry her....and how he could do such a thing.......with his own wife.....
Have I gone wrong....in understanding him....


"Geet........I will talk to Dev......." he wiped her tears and came out of the room....not able to see her in pain....

 
 
So intersting, but precap is scaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.... cant wait next one.
 
Precap is scary...but not next part...You will feel relief...I don't want to hang on dev part too much..

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 7:42pm | IP Logged
i hate Maan too....

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
awesome and a marvelous update

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 10:53pm | IP Logged

wonderful update..............love it!!!!

feeling sorry for geet,for proving her love she needs to undergo this much.

its time for maan to prove his love nd win her back!!!


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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
GB...Sorry, I finally got around to reading all 6 chapters.  You have weaved a very interesting ans Sad story.  The only victim in this story is Geet....both Maan and Dev have wronged her to such an extent.  Dev is just a JERK...i cannot expect more from him, but Maan too...he sold her love so short....the price was a possible improvement for his looser brother....was that how little her LOVE was worth.   I know Geet's character is not very independent in this story, but if i was Geet, then I would leave both of them and let them both rot for life.  I would bring criminal charges against Dev for physical. mental and emotional abuse, and I would leave Maan to wallow in his rightfully deserved guilt!!Angry

Looking forward to Maan running with his tail between his legs!!!Ouch

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
Ooooooooooooooo...Chapter 7....yeh..i didn't have to wait at all..Thanks!!!  Will read and comment!!

Adding comments for chapter 7...........it was too short....very waiting fo rthe next part soon!!  Sorry for the greed!!Big smile

Wow....what to say....this Daadima is a totally passive one...no?  How can she just stand by all of these months and watch Geet suffer so at the hands of Dev??  Doesn't she she what he does to her?  Doesn't she wonder why Geet does not come out of her room?

Maan....wow Dev se divorce dilwa ke mukti mil jayegi???  Angry


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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
@Part7...I had kept my breath held throughout the update...and only relaxed when I read Geet is going to be free of Dev. Btw...doesn't Dadima know about Dev's torture? What is her take on this? 

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Nargis--

GB...Sorry, I finally got around to reading all 6 chapters.  You have weaved a very interesting ans Sad story.  The only victim in this story is Geet....both Maan and Dev have wronged her to such an extent.  Dev is just a JERK...i cannot expect more from him, but Maan too...he sold her love so short....the price was a possible improvement for his looser brother....was that how little her LOVE was worth.   I know Geet's character is not very independent in this story, but if i was Geet, then I would leave both of them and let them both rot for life.  I would bring criminal charges against Dev for physical. mental and emotional abuse, and I would leave Maan to wallow in his rightfully deserved guilt!!Angry

Looking forward to Maan running with his tail between his legs!!!Ouch
Yes...but my Geet is independent in this story........but her craziness for love...for Maan....to prove her love...she is accepting Dev...and if u read chapter 7...she decides to leave ....without Maan telling....

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