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BreakPoint (Maneet FF)- Epilogue added (pg 122) (Page 34)

RageOfAnAngel IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 04 March 2011
Posts: 9713

Posted: 23 March 2011 at 4:03am | IP Logged

Dev is such a Censored    Censored   Censored 

Poor Geet   Cry   Cry    Cry    Cry

& Maan  Angry   Angry     Angry . I cannot imagine what Geet is going through Cry .

Why Maan is leaving ??? He wanted this na ; well he is getting it ... why he is escaping from truth & reality ? He wants to ease out his pain ??? What about Geet's pain ? No woman deserves to be abused & raped  even the man being her Censored   husband  ...  Angry

The update is superb , I could feel  Geet's pain & my blood boiled @ Dev . I will reserve my judgement for Maan later ; but as for now I don't approve him of running away leaving behind Geet in this hell when he knows very well why she is silently succumbing to this torture .

Am sorry if I went overboard with my  POV its actually coz I can't tolerate domestic violence ... 

Loved it ...   Star


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swetha10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 18646

Posted: 23 March 2011 at 4:40am | IP Logged
Nice FF.. poor geet.. Dev is too much.. hate him.. oh no maan cant leave her.. plzz continue soon n do add me onto ur pm list..

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craziekudi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 4:54am | IP Logged
oh god.. what is with dev!!! poor geet maan u are a

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namita25 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 5:16am | IP Logged
arghhhh this Dev...he is a jerk......poor Geet...going through hell right now...... in a way Maan  too is responsible for her sufferings.....n I really don't him to go to London.....he should  support Geet and help her out now.

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-Veritaserum- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 6:23am | IP Logged
Poor Geet  CryCryCryCryCry

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Cutee999 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 6:33am | IP Logged
loved every part of this ff....

this dev Angry....

hope maneet will be together soon....

thanks for pm.

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Nav2010 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 7:03am | IP Logged
OOOHHH man its very sad i am cryinggggggggg...
Maan.......He raped me...beat me........last night........" ...her voice very low.... hardly audible....and... she closed her eyes.....she could not face him...cannot look into his eyes......

"Geet........" he was not able to believe could Dev do such a thing.....

"He wanted me to always remember......not to ever ask him about his coming late........"

Maan........was totally lost......he thought Dev respected Geet ...he was so eager to marry her....and how he could do such a thing.......with his own wife.....
Have I gone understanding him....

"Geet........I will talk to Dev......." he wiped her tears and came out of the room....not able to see her in pain....

So intersting, but precap is scaryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.... cant wait next one.

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puth IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 7:07am | IP Logged
omg dev is such a bast****....

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