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BreakPoint (Maneet FF)- Epilogue added (pg 122) (Page 124)

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jazzerette

@Part20....Glad Maan did not leave....I was somewhere sure he won't. I kept on thinking how you would make Geet see Maan's POV....and girl you did it so beautifully with the whole Ahaana getting hurt example!! Clap
 
Maan will never leave her.....you remember what he said in chapter 2...he will keep on persuing her..... ...so he is not going to give up....its now Geet's turn to start melting.....
 
Yes.....Aahana example came very naturally in the story....and geet can easily relate......
 
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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sharmake11

yippe maan didnt live  that
good i knew if she pour
out what was in her heart
all the hate bitter she was holding
i'll go way now its time to fresh
relationship again
good its progressing
brilliant update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnn
thank yu so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
thanks pm
Yes.....she has poured out all  bitterness from her heart......which she will fill with Maan's love....
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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by preethia

loved the update..............
i am glad maan didnt leave her...........
still trying to make her realize her love for him and he was not happy either by putting her thro the hell
i am sure he will win her over with his love which he has to prove to her and to make sure she trusts him more than anything else...........
waiting for the next update..................
Yes...he made her realized his pain.....now next.... will be will she be able to put all her fears aside and trust him again ? ...trust in love again...?

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
wonderful update.............loved it!!!

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drashsree100



LOVED it Clap . I'm glad Maan did not leave coz he needs to make it up to Geet ; big time . His helping her in her studies was superb Thumbs Up ; parting with the responsibilities over Aahana was Thumbs Up . 

The symbolism that you get more hurt when your loved ones are in pain was written beautifully Clap  Clap Clap . The last scene where Geet kissed him , yet again her heart taking over , was very emotional Star.
Beautiful update Heart & thanks for the pm .....
Thanks....
 
Aahana example was good...when I was thinking of how to put his POV...and when this clicked..I was also amazed...it fitted very naturally in the story...

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 11:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by butterfly.tanu

awesomee.............
loved it.................
geet kissed maan.............Blushing
"Geet.....ek taraf tum mujhse nafrat karti hon......aur doosri taraf.......chupke chupke pyaar karti hon...."LOLLOL
loved that line............
plz update  soon...........

 
Yes....very well noted......

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 11:28pm | IP Logged

loved every single word of this updae............. loved maan taking care of them with his heart............ he is a true lover.......................... hope next part will be full of Blushing

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maansee

loved every single word of this updae............. loved maan taking care of them with his heart............ he is a true lover.......................... hope next part will be full of Blushing

Yes..Maan is ultimate lover.......that's why we all love him so much....

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