BreakPoint (Maneet FF)- Epilogue added (pg 122) - Page 14

Tanu

@butterfly.tanu

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

really loved the concept .... 👍🏼

continue soon...........

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holyangel

@holyangel

Senior Member

Posted: 13 years ago

ch 4... i will kill Maan being sooooooooooooo rude with her... how can he denied her so coldly aftr beeing soo passionate,....😡 Edited by holyangel - 13 years ago

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saanjh rathore

@saanjh11

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

awesome !!maan holding back painful😭

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Arsheela

@Arsheela

Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

very nice and realistic

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120377

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

awesome...

geet tried her maximum to make maan realise his love for her

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

part4

geet is bold

hope maan reciprocates her feelings

well written

do cont soon

thnks 4 pm

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

IF-Stunnerz

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

How much a girl try bring out ones feeling????

poor geet..................Maan really a duffer!!!

lovely update.......loved it!!!!

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sona rai

@sona-rai

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww lovely part loved it a lot👏👏

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592212

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

love the part 4 but hate the precap....cannot see geet with dev....plzz bring maaneet together....waiting for maaneet moments..

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-Veritaserum-

@-Veritaserum-

IF-Rockerz

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome part.... loved it

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