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AR FF Yaare Dil Daare updated PART 37 ON PAGE 115 [11/02/2015] (Page 50)

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 11:15am | IP Logged
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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 12:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shafyyy

just wanna share my view that in your this ff.. you had shown various twist in the lovestory of ar and sajan but my.. dear... friend.. our.. mayur.. lovestory.. is as simple.. as could be possible...

means in serial also..
they have.. some.. sort.. of hatke.. lovestory...talking.. the way you have potray.. their character in your this ff.. i completely..understand...their.. behaviour..
but yaar..it feels..verybad...a lovestory...with no..twist...that too.of our mayur's lovestory...ConfusedConfusedConfused
difficult to imagine...
itni.. aasani se confession... ho gaya..
seems..
 
very boring...infact.. i must se,, sajan's lovestory.. is.. somewhat..mixed of spices...
please yaar...please.. bring..some..twist..in our.. mayur's lovestory..
i know.. you must be thinking that i am out of my mind..but please..do..rethink about it...
i just wanna..that...they..didn't..realise..the...pain..of seperation...when two..lovebirds..get seperated..not..even...they fight...
 
hard..to..digest..mayur..with... no fight...OuchOuchOuch
agar..itne..sweet homge..to...hummme..diabties..ho..jayegi...
please...do...take..notice..about..it...
give..them also..chance.. to prove.. their true love...they also.. get some...opportunity...
to give.. their.. love a chance...
also..provide..some...twists..to their..lofe..also...how...many..times..they.will..solve..others...
problem...
and yes...
you also...haven't provided...mayur...raindanceEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
and yes.. how.. could.. i forget..
just wanna.. mention... one more think that...
mayur..are just too.. dump..really..very very.. dump...in the name.. of romance...really...oppposite..of mjht...
please show..some...passion...yaar..show..some..intimacy...some...
egarness...to feel...some..sensuous...something... that...made...
both.. of them.. crazy.. for each other...
 
please..i request you to.. give a thought.. about it...

PLEASE YAAR..PLEASE UPDATE

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 12:30am | IP Logged
god kind of morcha on my ff ,
 
i am not gone annywhere just i am out of town where i dont have any good access to net,
 
luckyly got a cafe for some other work soo visited here , guys i will be back in another 4 days and then will update for sure , just wait for another 4 days thats next week i will be back on this weekend

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 12:32am | IP Logged

ok dear..bt plz updt a big one with loads of sajan parts..

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 4:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by simi2

god kind of morcha on my ff ,
 
i am not gone annywhere just i am out of town where i dont have any good access to net,
 
luckyly got a cafe for some other work soo visited here , guys i will be back in another 4 days and then will update for sure , just wait for another 4 days thats next week i will be back on this weekend

thanks dear..
tumne bahut badi mushkil..
hak kar di.. 
okay i will wait till next week..
and yes please thoda mayur romance to dikha dena please

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 7:15am | IP Logged
pleas continue soon.

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 5:15am | IP Logged
waiting for the updates...

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 5:19am | IP Logged
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