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shanak love story......part4pg4

samriddi Groupbie

Joined: 31 October 2010
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 2:25am | IP Logged
ths if my first story and i am very nervous hope u guys like ths plz. write ur views if u like ths thn pnly i will write further.........ConfusedConfusedConfusedConfusedConfused
shantanu: he is a businnesman and a strict boss every1 in the office scare from him in his dictinory there is no word exict like love he had a same shedule daily there is no fun in his life he spend very less time with his family in his family he only loves his dadi.....
khanak: she is very bubly girl belong to a middle family she had completed her mba a year back and finding sum nice job but she cannot find a job so she decided tht she can do the job of a seceratory so she start finding job far a seceratory. she lovesher family a lot md always want lifepartner who is like her only and loves her a lot................
{if more character needed i will write its description in between onlt}
story begins::::::::
khendwal house;
shan wake up at six ang doing gym for 1 hr and thn getting ready for going to office after gettimg ready he cum to dinning table and call hari
shan:hari where is my breakfast
hari:just bringing sir
hari came with food
shan:(angry) hari why my breakfast is late tuday u know i am time punctual
hari:sorry sir
shan:its ok and see its not happrning again
hari leaves
mehta house
khanak couldnot sleep whole night as she was worried about het job as she is night getting any job she wake up at eigtht take a bath and goes to temple
in temple
khank to god: god plz helpme im not getting job joy anywhere  and now im very tired of finding job god i need ur help............
khanak came to home
mom:where were u
khanak:i had gone to temple
mom:atleast u shud informsumone
khanak:srry mom anyways mom i am feeling very hungry plz give me food thn i hv to leave to find the job
in shan office
dad: shan i need to talk  to u
shan:yes dad
dad:i think u need seceratory so tht she can help u
shan: no dad its fine for me
dad:plz for me u gave article in newspaper tht u need a seceratory
shan :but shan
dad:plz. shan
shan:ok dad
khanak had went to 2to 3 places to find the job but unable to find she get  lot of dissapointed and decide she will nt go to find any job frm noe if god is there thn he will help me
next morning
khanak woke up with very sad moond
on breakfast table
dad:khank u r here i think u hv gone to find sum job
khanak: no dad i will not find any job frm now i hv got tired of finding a gob nw god will only help me
dad:don't loose ur hope
khanak: plz dad
dad: look there is 1 article for seceratory job and its for shantanu khendwal i think u shud try for ths
khanak: no dad
dad: plz for me u try for ths job only thn i will not force u
khanak:ok dad but ths is last 1
khanak goes to get ready for interview
in shan office
shan was takink interview for the job but noone girl he find for ths job nd now he becamevery borr
so he called a offfice member who is sending the girls in for interview
person: yes sir
shan:how mant girls r lefy
person: only one her name is khanak
when shan hear ths name a vibrant goes though a body
shan: send  her in
person leave
khanak walkimg towars his office and very nervous whereas shan thinking wht happened to me when i hear khanak name
plz ignore mistake and plz. write comment hope u like it

Edited by samriddi - 27 March 2011 at 3:24am

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jyothi1989 IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4312

Posted: 15 March 2011 at 2:35am | IP Logged
beautiful intro plzz continue the os
angel_9 Goldie

Joined: 12 November 2010
Posts: 1476

Posted: 15 March 2011 at 2:40am | IP Logged
loved the introduction part................please continue this OS
Roshni_M IF-Rockerz

Joined: 19 March 2010
Posts: 5042

Posted: 15 March 2011 at 2:41am | IP Logged
nice nice..........
do continue.......
priya_cool_123 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 7621

Posted: 15 March 2011 at 2:43am | IP Logged
nice one..pls continue
Yasharanrocks IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5016

Posted: 15 March 2011 at 2:50am | IP Logged
gr8 start.plz cont soon.........
OlicityFan IF-Rockerz

Joined: 31 July 2010
Posts: 6214

Posted: 15 March 2011 at 3:30am | IP Logged
is this an FF or an SS....??
a gr8 start......PM me wen u update!
-Deepali- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 9:26am | IP Logged
Beautiful os dear  !!!!
pl keep continue it

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