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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
wow beautiful update... luved their confusion.. geet's possessiveness and outburst was nice.. continue soon

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
awesome update...................

please continue soon...............

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Rujul13 Senior Member
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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
Firstly, the update was too short. so please please update soon.

Secondly, I didn't like that much as I wanted to see Maan get punished. Because even thought he and Meera didn't make out but he didn't stop her or pushed her away.

How can he go back to Geet and face. He does not have any shame left in himself.

And Geet how can she forgive him. where is her self respect now? I did not wanted Geet to let go everything so easily. This doesn't go with her character. if she can abort the child thinking consequences than how can she forgive Maan without even thinking once.

I am sorry but I didn't like the update first time. I like your other FFs. can you please update Deewangee, Khamoshi & Truly Magical too please? Love you.

Show main self respect ke liye Maan ko maaf nahi kiya aur yaha self respect ki dhajjiya udadiLOL


Edited by adorableyosh - 06 April 2011 at 12:42pm

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Love his last dialogues

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princess163 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
hum dono anjaan the, ek doosre se bekhabar,
phir kaise achaanak kismat ne jod diya hamen iss kadar....
aapne-apne sapnon ke peeche bhaagte hue,
shaadi ke pavitra rishte se me jude.....
 
zindagi chalti rahi, hum door-door rahe,
par kismat ke haathon hamesha majboor rahe.....
jab ham mile toh kaisi thi woh kashish,
ek baar ki mulaaqaat bani baar-baar milne ki khwahish....
 
ek doosre se bhaagte rahe, par uss ehsaas se kaise bhaage?
jo hamaare dilon ko jodne lagi, uss dor se kaise bhaage.....
jo pyaar panapne lagaa tha dil mein, uss pyaar se kaise bhaage,
jo kashish basi thi zehen me, uss ehsaas se kaise bhaage.....
 
tumne muh mod liya,  mera dil chalni kiya,
maaana koi wada kabhi hamne nahin kiya....
par woh ankahi baaten, woh mulaquaten,
kya woh kisi waade se kam thi??
 
maine apne dil se ladna chod diya,
maan liya ki dil tumhe de diya...
par kya tum bhi kabhi ye maan paaoge?
dil de chuke ho mujhe, kabhi yeh jaan paaoge?
 
jab socha ki alag ho gayen hain raaste...
toh kismat ne phir bana diya hamsafar.....
jab socha ki shayad dil door ho paye tumse,
toh khuda ne tumhe mere paas bhej diya!
 
muh se chaahe kitna hi mana kar lo,
pehle apne jasbaat to kaboo me kar lo...
dekh sakti hun, pyaar hai tumhe bhi mujhse,
phir bhi kinara kar rahi hoon tumse...
 
chaaha ki door chali jaun tumse..
phir kyun nai dekh payi kisis ke saath tumhe?
kyun aaye tum mere peeche, kyun diya pyaar ka woh dard mujhe?
haan, aaj maan liya tumne mohabbat hai tumhe bhi,
dekhna hai kismat kahan le jaati hai ab hamen....
 
okay, so it seems u have completely driven me insane muski di!!!
I HAVE NEVER EVER WRITTEN ANYTHING OF THIS SORT, NEVER IN HINDI...
i mean subah TM and ab yeh...OMG!
I have lost itLOL
but, loved the updateBig smile
Love
Swati

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nisharoyce Senior Member
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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
nice update yaar
love u

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by princess163

hum dono anjaan the, ek doosre se bekhabar,
phir kaise achaanak kismat ne jod diya hamen iss kadar....
aapne-apne sapnon ke peeche bhaagte hue,
shaadi ke pavitra rishte se me jude.....
 
zindagi chalti rahi, hum door-door rahe,
par kismat ke haathon hamesha majboor rahe.....
jab ham mile toh kaisi thi woh kashish,
ek baar ki mulaaqaat bani baar-baar milne ki khwahish....
 
ek doosre se bhaagte rahe, par uss ehsaas se kaise bhaage?
jo hamaare dilon ko jodne lagi, uss dor se kaise bhaage.....
jo pyaar panapne lagaa tha dil mein, uss pyaar se kaise bhaage,
jo kashish basi thi zehen me, uss ehsaas se kaise bhaage.....
 
tumne muh mod liya,  mera dil chalni kiya,
maaana koi wada kabhi hamne nahin kiya....
par woh ankahi baaten, woh mulaquaten,
kya woh kisi waade se kam thi??
 
maine apne dil se ladna chod diya,
maan liya ki dil tumhe de diya...
par kya tum bhi kabhi ye maan paaoge?
dil de chuke ho mujhe, kabhi yeh jaan paaoge?
 
jab socha ki alag ho gayen hain raaste...
toh kismat ne phir bana diya hamsafar.....
jab socha ki shayad dil door ho paye tumse,
toh khuda ne tumhe mere paas bhej diya!
 
muh se chaahe kitna hi mana kar lo,
pehle apne jasbaat to kaboo me kar lo...
dekh sakti hun, pyaar hai tumhe bhi mujhse,
phir bhi kinara kar rahi hoon tumse...
 
chaaha ki door chali jaun tumse..
phir kyun nai dekh payi kisis ke saath tumhe?
kyun aaye tum mere peeche, kyun diya pyaar ka woh dard mujhe?
haan, aaj maan liya tumne mohabbat hai tumhe bhi,
dekhna hai kismat kahan le jaati hai ab hamen....
 
okay, so it seems u have completely driven me insane muski di!!!
I HAVE NEVER EVER WRITTEN ANYTHING OF THIS SORT, NEVER IN HINDI...
i mean subah TM and ab yeh...OMG!
I have lost itLOL
but, loved the updateBig smile
Love
Swati


OHH EMM GEE .... am still in a shocked state ... 

swati you wrote that .... wwoww is an understatement ... its beautiful , its  awesome, its classic, its mind blowing ... simply amazing  ..    Clap ....



wah wah.... muski ki updates kya kya kamaal dikha rahee hain
her aik insaan ko ghalib, meer aur dard bana rahee hain   LOL  ... 


Edited by sindu555 - 06 April 2011 at 1:18pm

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by princess163

hum dono anjaan the, ek doosre se bekhabar,
phir kaise achaanak kismat ne jod diya hamen iss kadar....
aapne-apne sapnon ke peeche bhaagte hue,
shaadi ke pavitra rishte se me jude.....
 
zindagi chalti rahi, hum door-door rahe,
par kismat ke haathon hamesha majboor rahe.....
jab ham mile toh kaisi thi woh kashish,
ek baar ki mulaaqaat bani baar-baar milne ki khwahish....
 
ek doosre se bhaagte rahe, par uss ehsaas se kaise bhaage?
jo hamaare dilon ko jodne lagi, uss dor se kaise bhaage.....
jo pyaar panapne lagaa tha dil mein, uss pyaar se kaise bhaage,
jo kashish basi thi zehen me, uss ehsaas se kaise bhaage.....
 
tumne muh mod liya,  mera dil chalni kiya,
maaana koi wada kabhi hamne nahin kiya....
par woh ankahi baaten, woh mulaquaten,
kya woh kisi waade se kam thi??
 
maine apne dil se ladna chod diya,
maan liya ki dil tumhe de diya...
par kya tum bhi kabhi ye maan paaoge?
dil de chuke ho mujhe, kabhi yeh jaan paaoge?
 
jab socha ki alag ho gayen hain raaste...
toh kismat ne phir bana diya hamsafar.....
jab socha ki shayad dil door ho paye tumse,
toh khuda ne tumhe mere paas bhej diya!
 
muh se chaahe kitna hi mana kar lo,
pehle apne jasbaat to kaboo me kar lo...
dekh sakti hun, pyaar hai tumhe bhi mujhse,
phir bhi kinara kar rahi hoon tumse...
 
chaaha ki door chali jaun tumse..
phir kyun nai dekh payi kisis ke saath tumhe?
kyun aaye tum mere peeche, kyun diya pyaar ka woh dard mujhe?
haan, aaj maan liya tumne mohabbat hai tumhe bhi,
dekhna hai kismat kahan le jaati hai ab hamen....
 
okay, so it seems u have completely driven me insane muski di!!!
I HAVE NEVER EVER WRITTEN ANYTHING OF THIS SORT, NEVER IN HINDI...
i mean subah TM and ab yeh...OMG!
I have lost itLOL
but, loved the updateBig smile
Love
Swati

swati my darlingHug
it's beautiful awesome, brilliant.Clap
perfect emotions.
 loved it.

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