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Posted: 20 August 2011 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Hamlet53

hi dayaTongue...finally read it! as per usual an interesting read with,plot unfolding...
Hammie Hug  aja...
part24,WOL:
 
~interesting recap of Adahi,Madhu,friendship as Ahdhi calls it... also Madhu's accident and her recuperation...also Ahdh's natural curiosity and threfore questionng of Madhu's relationship with both Dutta and his mate Baji...that's the kind of closeness friends require some times to nurture further bonding... well written in a casul style ,without making it to cumbersomeClap...interesting cross questioning,about finer details of a relationship e.g...Madu's exact depth of relationship with Dutta and Baji,her true identity...particularly in terms of linkage with Dutta..looming question..was he her brother? was she distancing her self from Baji ,on account of Dutta??...these are the fine bits that put meat on the plot skeleton..so good going Daya!
yeah now madhu has someone to talk to about everything she feels regarding the situation and not have to bottle it all up...and Aadhi and Madhu's friendship will be highlighted often...thank you for the last line...I'm glad you thought soo Embarrassed
~ Daya ,some endearing things between Dutta and his Nakku never change,or cease to amuse.Her fussing over him to eat his breakfast sandwiches,and him scoring a one up by offering her a bite to eat first.Tongue
omg that is exactly why i put that in the middle...remembered LTL1 and her talks about eating toh snuck in a similar scene LOL
~ interesting how people's unwitting behaviour [Madhu not answering her phone]can play on people's emotion's Baji's discomfort!
so much too...sometimes you don't realize that someone is worried about you and here you are not caring to let them know ...decrease that worry...but in this case she is on the line with the whole Baaji thing...
~good old Nakku jumping to the rescue,problem solving!
~enjoyed in a calm ,quiet soothing way the romantic part ,between Dutta and Nakku..the tactile and the emotional bonding ..with the hoops of nakku telling her family about him,and him being approved by them,dangling in mid air!...immediate family involvment..that which is of great significance between two people who are thinking about marriage!
actually i loved writing this bit...really did..and am glad you liked it too.. Embarrassed
~well trust you to stop where you did Daya!  ..
LOL yup so this has been the biggest comment so far...that I stopped here LOL
ok methinks it's her dad who has turned up at her door step ...
and you will know whether ur right or not with next update ..whenever that is
thanks for the update ,and pm enjoyed reading it...noo there are no errors in the script ..done no proof reading...you show offfLOLoh hammie...lol u noe as soon as I wrote the proof reading bit I knew u would make a comment Tongue yes it's not a habit to re-read...but I know i make mistakes ...I find them often when I look over scenes after i posted it LOLLOL...xxxlove sharmilee from hammie thank you for your wonderful comments...much appreciated..love you lots...phir milenge chalte chalte Big smile
 

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Posted: 14 September 2011 at 7:37am | IP Logged
daya updated my comments finally on pg 106
 
 
loved it...great job...paisa vasoolWink


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Posted: 16 September 2011 at 4:37pm | IP Logged
waiting eagerly for the update...i am guessing it is naku's parents upstairs...

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Posted: 16 September 2011 at 5:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chithoo

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okie me here to finally edit my 15th aug resLOLLOL but i am pardoned as i went on vacation naTongue
LOL wow even I am just noticing I have not updated almost a month ShockedLOL
I was only waiting for ur return Wink how can I write a story about you with out u here to read it na WinkTongueLOL
 
what have we hereSmile okie madhu is back on her two feet (literallyBig smile) and our "Sherlock Holmes "AdhiWink has found out her true identityBig smile. So she has been giving confused signals to poor baaji and driving him up the wallOuch not fairLOL. Aadhi is the one who does/says all the right things at the right time...is he for realLOLLOLLOL. but there are characters like himBig smile.
you me totally forgot what has happened in this FF ConfusedLOL so will take ur word for it LOL.. oh yes Aadhi is smart one...who has solved the case LOL and i know poor Baaji ...ur right she is drving him up the wall...but u are probably happy they keep stealing ur screen space hahaa LOL
 
Ria and Sam after a long timeEmbarrassed..."hi handsome" ha ha love her. I know I had to bring them back na...or else I would pull what CVs did in LTL where the kala's son and leela's daughter go missing LOL or rather were non existent and it was only a pigment of our imaginations LOLLOLSo nakku comes to feed Dutta EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed and they are shamelessly romancing in front of 3 friendsLOLLOLLOL hell so whatEmbarrassed.I know you wouldnt care TongueTongue feeding and eyeing Day Dreaming They leave and she promises to return in the evening. Poor baaji again desperately trying to reach madhu and relieved after nakku comes and talks to aadhi and informs her whereabouts. seriously she could have taken his calls atleastAngry. baaji too tired of these games i guess and heads home, leaving N and D aloneBlushing. see what Madhu's absence does for you, you have gotten a moment for romance Wink
okie now i am blushing more than nakku did in the sceneBlushingEmbarrassed u know why b cos D loves when nakku blushesLOL.ROFL ROFL Sundar Jiju kaha ho tum ... OMG Shocked she says she would dump him if her dad didn't approveTongue...champ THAT IS EXACTLY MEEmbarrassedBig smile how did u know?you know na that i have seemed to nail ur life down in this FF without even having to stalk u ...haha i have international spies hired WinkTongue i would also use the same language "throw u away like yesterday's trash" ROFL loved itClap ha ha LOL u know what I use that line often for jks and stuff LOL heehee i guess we a very much alike Embarrassed and the typical male reaction from D chasing her around and cornering her and then EmbarrassedBlushing kissyEmbarrassed.haaye i forgot about this scene LOL the Knight in shining armour then drives her back home and there is someone at home already...daddy dearest is it?Tongue hmmm i need to get on with the next update Confused lol its been a month ...dang ...well viji i am so very happy u are back from vaca...love the comment and love you more :) take care ...
Phir milenge chalte chalte
 
loved it dayaHug waiting for the next update.
 
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Posted: 16 September 2011 at 5:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Alamelu

waiting eagerly for the update...i am guessing it is naku's parents upstairs...
hi dear ..sorry i know its been a month ...i can't believe it lol but have started to work on it so hopefully by tonight I can finish...
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Posted: 16 September 2011 at 5:28pm | IP Logged
^^time plss...

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Posted: 16 September 2011 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mIsHeZ.x

^^time plss...
time of update? lol ...i am not sure...i might have to leave soon which means late ...but update is shaping up well...I will pm u wen I get closer finishing  ...nice to see u here btw...i have missed ur comments

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Posted: 16 September 2011 at 6:13pm | IP Logged
il be bakon trak 1ce i catch up wit every1..inshAllah...missin u 2..but u  dnt evn bother replyin 2 my pms :((

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