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@ mishez.. well my bloody lap top was to be delievered today..  but it did'ent so tomorrow  i will have to chase those know.how dweebs again ... this lappy is the family one...  i miss y own it has a lot of mishal's pictures saved  in my picture  which I  as background for my desk top .her roz uska  new expression   hai hai! besides i just like the feel o f  my own lappie's keys... bas  baat the...funny how one gets addicted to a machine... or it is people on the forum,and their

@ daya with regards to the suggestion in WOL  second try! well personally in keeping with what the veiwers want I would say proceed with  not OTT engagement  then marriage for a good dollop of tasha...  the  skeletons in the closet can wait... also if dutta is going to lose it once the past revelation happens,then its best that his wife is there to support him...as probably he will be the good hubby and adhere to her rules as those are the expectations of the family ,unless you want to throw a spanner in the works and he cuts her out and distances her out due to his inability to cope with pressure ... nakku too can wrestle with the fact  madhu and Baji..or madhu and her brother? who will she gravitate towards ?  maybe once this is sorted Aye can decree a double engagement Baji and ?...future? dutta's coming to terms with the truth madhu being his half sitser ,but not his mother's issue and father issue?... thanks for asking for my pov..  but whatever you decide Iam sure it will be clear not a rigmarole like  my pea brain. waise I go more for conflict,rather than lovey dovey... but as you know our readers want the lovers close very close,so your track ma'am  Edited by Hamlet53 - 12 years ago

tumhe yaado mein basaake rakhne ki chaahat si ho gai hai,

kuch is tarha pyar karne ki hamari aadat si ho gayi hai,

pehle hum doston ke saath haste khilkhilaate the,

ab tumhe yaad kar ke kuskuraane ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

kabhi tanhaayi se hum ghabraate the jahaan,

ab tumhe mehsoos karne ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

kabhi apni parchaayi se dur bhaaga karte the,

ab tumhe apni parchhai samajhne ki aadat si ho gayi hai,

ab tumhari chahat meri badat si go gayi hai,

ab meri mohabbat hi meri aadat si ho gayi hai...

 

btw i ddn wrote it myself..jus cme up wit few lines n goolgd d rest lol...hope u liked my way of expressing n indulging u wit my imagination LOL

love u lots

xoxo

oh my word Mishez ..this is exceptional.Iam actually speechless at the flow of verse ,the words, the imagination,the simplicity  yet the yearning in the words, the feeling of being consumed by the fire of love, separation, yet a sense of hanging on to memories ,that rekindle the past and so lives on the love! well done hammie bows before you..gifted you are... you should send this to Him FROM ALL OF US! Iam actually saving it in my favourites ,will share it with my mate... although they might not get the true essence of the urdu language.. such a shame i'l have to translate but to me it'll  lose its original charm.xxxhammie Edited by Hamlet53 - 12 years ago

ur welcome😆 nahh i'll do it

Hey Dear Daya🤗

haha it worked 😛 thank you for the feedback/suggestions it was quite useful actually...I think i got what imma do..need to get both love and whole lot of conflict ...imma be a devil ...but for now remain the angel 😆thank you soo much 🤗

Suhana 🤗
thanks for reading and commenting ...always one of the spl ppl i wait for 😃...yeah madhu lol needed her to bond with her brother and felt this will be good opportunity...hehe glad u liked the tasha moment felt it needed to be there...and then yup lol she is so open eh asking about his first kiss 😆😆 and smart too she caught on that it never happened 😆...imma work on finishing AKK and starting prolgue for new one...before i get back to this FF ...soo u might have to wait a while 😛 thanks suhana ...love you lots ...🤗 take care