Originally posted by kiran255
OH Dhayani !
You cruel you make my Dutta time at cafe so hard
bechara DUtta he was fuming with anger !
he wanted to hold ADi and get the trurth out of his mouth !
and Naku hiding from Dutta
awwwwwwwww sweety but she has no idea what his brither is up to !
its getting so interestinga nd icing on the cake Ria tells everyone
she is MEHra daughter
gosh !
now DUtta will think ADi is with Naku !
poor baby !
Dhayani thats bad !
OH god
i love the mind talks which D, B , A were talking with themselves !
and adi was so sad at knowing Naku will leave him !
sweet !
cant wait !
i want next part jaldi say :D
ahhh the handshake :D
superb update
cruel? ๐ฒ lol ...no worries will fix the confusion soon
Dutta's soo in love ...just wait till he finds out Naku also likes him
I will try to speed it up a bit and get their romance started
Ria had a reason for switching names.. and I have to still develop some ideas....
thanks for the comments....
i have not written anything after where i ended lol
so once I write it will post it :-)
Edited by dg0628 - 13 years ago