Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by kiran255


OH Dhayani !

You cruel you make my Dutta time at cafe so hard 
bechara DUtta he was fuming with anger !
he wanted to hold ADi and get the trurth out of his mouth !

and Naku hiding from Dutta 
awwwwwwwww sweety but she has no idea  what his brither is up to !

its getting so interestinga nd icing on the cake Ria tells everyone 
she is MEHra daughter 
gosh !
now DUtta will think ADi is with Naku !
poor baby !
Dhayani thats bad !

OH god 
i love the mind talks which D, B , A were talking with themselves !
and adi was so sad at knowing Naku will leave him !
sweet !
cant wait !

i want next part jaldi say :D
ahhh the handshake :D
superb update 

 

cruel? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ lol ...no worries will fix the confusion soon
Dutta's soo in love ...just wait till he finds out Naku also likes him
I will try to speed it up a bit and get their romance started
Ria had a reason for switching names.. and I have to still develop some ideas....
thanks for the comments....
i have not written anything after where i ended lol
so once I write it will post it :-)
Edited by dg0628 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Nakku loves him......awwww....amazing update dhanya...thanks for the PM upload asap.....*hugs*
Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear nice update 

so aadhi ne dutta ko bahut irritate kiya by talking about nakku indirectly and now he thinks nakku is of aadhi

interesting dear


Posted: 13 years ago
really liked ur ff....plz pm me whenever you update
Posted: 13 years ago
Hey dhayani๐Ÿค—
 
Awesome updates dear...loved d bro n sis convo...dat ws really cute..๐Ÿ˜ณ n omg cafe scenerio ws awesoem D n B trying to understand...n aadhi..ohh god...he is too much...wow,..dey all seat...together...wow...wht an u turn ria,..nice๐Ÿ‘ aw D still attract towards her.,,..hw cute...omg ..handshake...n she is just blbbring in her mind,..soo natural n real๐Ÿ˜† awesome writ up dhayani,...loved it....thnks for pm ...tk care..๐Ÿ˜ณ
Posted: 13 years ago
@everyone : Thanks for the comments ๐Ÿค— ...means a lot ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Posted: 13 years ago
love this uppate jus as much as others lol...it was sooo funy n sweet..
 
plz update jaldi karo...n thnx 4 pm.x
 
ps.sory 4 such a  short coment lekin hav 2 start on another essay n need 2 finish it by tmrw..soo....
Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome updates as alwayz lol...it was sooo funy n sweet..
update soon Edited by alveera_rckz - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by mIsHeZ.x


love this uppate jus as much as others lol...it was sooo funy n sweet..
 
plz update jaldi karo...n thnx 4 pm.x
 
ps.sory 4 such a  short coment lekin hav 2 start on another essay n need 2 finish it by tmrw..soo....


thanx missy  ๐Ÿค—...been missing ur comments ๐Ÿ˜Š
lol I'm actually going to start writing the next part right now!
and no worries short or long comment still means a lot :)
and anyway school ....errrr ...uni (my hands even have a habit of typing that lol...i'm gonna work on saying uni from now on lmao)  comes first :-)
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by dg0628




thanx missy  ...been missing ur comments
lol I'm actually going to start writing the next part right now!
and no worries short or long comment still means a lot :)
and anyway school ....errrr ...uni (my hands even have a habit of typing that lol...i'm gonna work on saying uni from now on lmao)  comes first :-)
aww missing u2 bby๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
 
will be waiting 4 da update sweetie๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
 
hehe lookz lyk am a gud influenc ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† haha๐Ÿ˜ณ

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