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New FF: Ehsaas Promo - P.78 (08.08) (Page 3)

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
Hey SophiaHug
First all congratulations for starting new FFHug....Thanx for the PMWink
Wow its really wonderful and different WinkLoved it yaar .....Thumbs Up
Omg Naku is having twins and Dutta doesn"t want kids so soonShocked.....
loved the confident naku here ...she left the home ..to start a fresh life for her kids...can"t wait for nxt part...pls jaldi update karna....but i won"t able to read itCry...will come bk and read them all....thanx yaar....
u take care ,,,,,,Love and hugs
suhanaHug



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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 6:56pm | IP Logged
@Vandu... Thanks a lot.. You have to keep reading to know that lol.
Thanks you :)
 
@Suhana... Thanks a lot. Yeah he doesnt want it :(
Yes, Nakku is strong. I know but ur coming back! Ryt? lol.
Don't worry, It's not going anywer hehe. Have a safe journey!
Thank you :)

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 7:11pm | IP Logged
You said you loved me
But you were going to break my heart,
You said you would love me forever,
So Why are we apart?
If you really meant forever,
Then say you will try,
Cause you once said forever,
And that made me cry...
*********
 

Chapter One:

Five years ago, Nakku stood at the same exact spot where she was now – only this time, she had company with her, and that was all that had mattered to her.
The past five years had taught her that life wasn't all spick and span. There were obstacle's to face, people to argue and disagree with – but she had learnt something more than anything: happiness.
She gazed down at the two angels holding onto both of her hands.
She never got tired when looking at them.
Ananya, Anya for short, her beloved girl, stood on her left, gazing at the building towering over them. Her parents were fond of money, so it was never a hardship deal for them to provide food when needed for their kids. They always made sure that their kids were well fed and cared for.

Raj, her young, fierce warrior, stood to her right, also gazing at the beautiful house.
No one but them knew they were standing outside, staring at her old home. She had not seen her parents for five years – except for the Christmas and birthday cards for her.
Not once had she mentioned Raj and Ananya to them.
'My little angels, what do you think of your nana and nani's house? Nice right,' she murmured.
They both at her at once and smiled. 'Yes mumma.'
'It's pretty,' said Ananya.
She smiled down at them. Ananya looked more like her, with her straight black hair, full lips, green eyes and button nose. She had her father's dimple on her left cheek.
Raj looked more like his father, with his hazel eyes, jet black hair and his left dimple.
The father, the man that didn't want to know they existed.

Her thoughts became bitter when she thought about him, and what he was doing with his life. He could be happily married with five kids for all she knew.
She shook her head and concentrated on more important things, like her kids and how she was going to tell her parents about them.
'If they love me, then they wouldn't care,' she thought to herself.
They walked hand in hand to the front porch and rang the bell.
One, two, three … ten seconds went by when finally, her mother opened up the door, her apron covered with flour. Her mother looked at her a few seconds, probably trying to identify the woman standing on her porch with two kids.

'Nakku? Meri bacchi?' her mother cried, and hugged her fiercely.
Nakusha cried too, for the joy that her mother had welcomed her with open arms. 'Haan Aayi, Main hoon. And I brought company.'
Her mother looked down at her two little angels and gasped. 'Are they … my grandkids?'
Nakku smiled broadly, 'Haan Aayi. This little angel here is Ananya. This is Raj.' She kept it simple. Adding 'Patil' at the end, would raise many questions.
Babi looked down at them and burst into tears, 'My beautiful babies!'
Ananya and Raj smiled up at her, both walking towards her and then hugged her.
If it were possible, her mother cried even harder, and she was hiccupping this time, 'oh m-my.'

'What's with all the noi - NAKKU?'
She looked behind her mother and stared into eyes just like her own, and smiled. 'Sethji!'
He ran towards her, practically pushing their mother aside, and hugged her long and hard. 'Where have you been? You told me few weeks ago that you weren't coming back. What changed your mind?'
She smiled into his shirt, 'they changed my mind.'
They both moved apart and stared at the trio hugging each other, and at her mother crying her heart out.

'Sethji, this is little Ananya and Raj I've been telling you about.'
Sethji was the only person that she had kept contact with in the family. She told him everything that had happened to her, and he understood her need for space – even if it did kill him that his younger sister by two years was living her own life, raising two kids on her own.
She watched as her mother reluctantly let go of her kids.
'Hey guys. I'm Sethji, Seth for short. I'm your mums older brother.'
Ananya and Raj, the kind young kids they were, smiled at him. 'We know. Mum talks about you alot. We love mummy's older brother. He cares for her very much.'

Nakku choked back a sob. Her kids spoke so highly of her.
Sethji chuckled, 'little clever ones aren't they Aayi?'
Babi nodded, 'just like their mother.'
Nakusha smiled at both of them. 'I really am sorry for not keeping in contact with you guys these past five years. It's just been really hard - but I appreciate the help you guys offered - or sent, I must say. It helped us financially.'
Her mother smiled and nodded, 'anything for our little girl. Come in, you guys must be hungry! How about you two? You guys feel some hot milo with cookies? I've just put some into the oven. It should be ready in half an hour or so.'

The two little angels nodded eagerly and followed their grandmother into the kitchen. She's never seen her kids so happy before.
When they were boarding their plane, she wasn't sure if she was doing the right thing, telling her parents about them now after five years.
She now knew that she had made the right decision.
That coming back was a big change in their life. It was only temporary though - a time off from their busy life in Australia. India will be a good life changing experience for them, and if she was lucky, maybe for her as well.

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You didn't expect the 5 year leap did ya? LOL
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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 7:17pm | IP Logged
res!!!
 
edited;;;
 
okayyy so she dus hav prnts>>by that i ment that they are alive o not lol...wer her dad btw..??
 
i totaly loved the update hon..it was rely sweet...
 
loved it how Ns mother (is she cald babi here aswel..?)) recognised ananya n raj soo quikly..  
 
it rely was a heartuchng momnt >>>happy tearsLOL
 
aww they sooo cute n rely clever...  
 
hmm i hope D has only been missing naku n not wit any1 n was not hapy sinc she wnt away etc etc lol  
 
cnt wait 2 see wat hapens nxt...wen wil tasha *bump* in2 eachother agen..afta 5 yrs!!Shocked
 
thnx 4 pm..cont soon.x
 
ps.i have edited my previous comnt lol n u wrote wrong pge 4 dis chater..its pg3 not 2TongueLOL




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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 9:19pm | IP Logged

HugHayye 4th FF!! Congrats!!StarParty

Sorry, der ho gayi comment karne mein....so gayi thi (I mean, after reading it, it was like raat ke 12 bajeLOL)
OHMyGawdddddd Naku toh pregnant hai, but Dutta ne use chod diya kyun choda eeeeeeeeShocked
Jaldi bataooo naaa bataao naa bataaooo naaaaa bataaoo naWinkLOL
Dutta left her all alone..usse bache nahi chahiyeOuchCry..so sad...aise bhi koi ladki ko akela chod ta hai kya?Cry
Aw so Sethji is older than her (I can't imagine 3*3=6 wala Sethji being grownup and responsibleLOL) and she kept in contact with him only..glad ki uske paas money tha
The kids are aodrable! Ananya and RajEmbarrassed so cute names! Aww Raj is like his father...dono ke paas dimplesEmbarrassedHug to Ananya and Raj...
Thank god Babi wasn't angry at Naku...but what about her father?
Oh the kids ekdum se khush and milo-ing with Babi and SethjiEmbarrassed happy family!Big smile
Thanks for the PM!!
 


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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
Wow!! Nope sophia didnt xpect the leap....... nevertheless ur FF is always very different frm the normal xpectations........ thats why they are differently special.........
A very touching updt.......... luved it to core....... Nakku alone in australia bringing up her 2 kids..... Ananya and Raj (beautiful names)...... They really jelled well with sethji and baabi...... Nakku happy to see her kids more happy than never......
Dutta is really going to repent his decision when he sees the kids........ More that he might be missing Nakku now ......... I dont want Nakku fall weak infrnt of Dutta......... she should be real strong and stubborn to not giv in soon................
Updt soooooooooon........ Thanx fr PM

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
hey sophia,

its really nice to know that u r writing an FF.......... mm....... very interesting prologue and u updated chapter 1 already....... wow..........

nice to know naku is independent.......... has been through bitterness in life enough to appreciate the happiness in store for her in the future..Smile

just loved the course this FF is taking.......

update asap the next updateSmile kindly add me to the PM list dear........

tc
divya


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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
hey dear

nice ff

so dutta leave her alone but now for his decision he will suffer.

nice that nakku is happy with her children and come back to India after a struggle .

hope nakku will not forgive dutta soon as we know she will surely forgive him but not soon.

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