New fanfic...

Friends...it is my first ever fanfic...(i was really inspired by Ana's one)....please post comment..even criticize.=D

 

Background:
Shaina hasn't left SS .... she had told Aryan about that offer...but no serious conversation has taken place...Dipika is back in SS
Edited by kul_shy - 13 years ago

Neha: Aryan ye kal ke case ki file hai....all paper work is done
Aryan: Ah! Thanks Neha
Aryan relaxed his legs and made himself comfortable on the chair
Neha: tired?
Aryan: Ya! a little bit
At the same moment Shaina entered and took a seat in front of Aryan
Neha: Shall I bring coffee
Aryan: sure.....sugar free
Neha: Yes boss!!!!
Neha left the room...Aryan looked down and smiled

Shaina: Kya hoa?



Aryan: kuch nahi bas woh itni respect ka aadi nahi hon na...that's why
Shaina: Aryan you are our boss but you never imposed your views on us
Shai said that giving a sharp look at Dip who just entered the room




Edited by kul_shy - 13 years ago

nice start............
but bus itna sa part :-((
cont soon/...............waiting 4 my shayan scenes ;-))

lolz
ana

Shaina: And also... atleast tumhare koi rivals to nahi hain na
Aryan(smiling+amazed):Rivals???...yeah
Dipika didn't listened that...
D: So what are you guys upto
Shai was just going to speak when Aryan interrupted her

Ary: Nothing serious...just about sunny
Shai gave a sharp look at Aryan
S: Sunny ..yeah



Aryan innocently nodded and they both smiled...when Neha entered the office
Neha: Aryan here you go!!!
Shaina: Neha....You look good in Blue
Neha: Thanks .... You know what...ye dress mujhe Ajay ne gift kiya hai😳😳
Dipika: Neha...Is Ajay here
Neha: No Dipika...woh actually jahan woh rehta hai na..udher ki road rebuilt ho rahi hai'😡
😡Dipika: So Neha...yeh kitne dinon se chal raha hai...ab aisa to nahi hai na...ke aaj subha subha hai road ka work shoru ho gaya...and woh itna innocent hai ke use pta  bhi nhi chala...If he knew that road ka kaam ho raha hai so he should leave early

Aryan: Ab is me ajay ka kya kasoor hai....😲😲....Govt. taxes to leti hai..lekin kerti kuch nahi....God knows sara fund kahan jatahai
Dipika.:Or kahan jayega....Govt.ka adhe se zyada fund to tumhare coffee ke kharch mai nikal jata hai😡😡
Aryan(INNOCENTLY): No dipika u r right...Neha....ye to khatam ho gayi...plzz
Neha and Shaina smiled...leaving Dipika looking angrily at all of them

At the same time Aryan's phone rang
A: Juhu...ok we are coming....guys new case
and all left for the crime scene

Edited by kul_shy - 13 years ago

kul_shy

it's a request that u should be a little considerate towards Dipika also

Originally posted by: pearlnarang

kul_shy

it's a request that u should be a little considerate towards Dipika also

OK I'LL TRY TO......ACTUALLY IT IS MORE OF AN AS FANFIC..BUT I'LL TRY

Hey! kul_shy please post your next part soon
eagerly waiting for it

Hey kul_shy.......
its beautiful fanfic which you have started and i have read that posts also ...
I liked that.......
So please update the new post soon am eagerly waiting for that.....
And one more thing try to use some colors while writing it will create more enthusiasm
while anybody read the post....
If possible then please do that..

Thanks for starting new fanfic....
Edited by chintsbshah - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chintsbshah

Hey cool_shy.......
its beautiful fanfic which you have started and i have read that posts also ...
I liked that.......
So please update the new post soon am eagerly waiting for that.....
And one more thing try to use some colors while writing it will create more enthusiasm
while anybody read the post....
If possible then please do that..

Thanks for starting new fanfic....

Its kul_shy....thanks 4 liking it...i'll continue it 4 sure after my exams...thanks 4 ur suggestion...i'll definitely do dat