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kul_shy Senior Member
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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 6:50am | IP Logged
Friends...it is my first ever fanfic...(i was really inspired by Ana's one)....please post comment..even criticize.=D

 

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 7:03am | IP Logged
Background:
Shaina hasn't left SS .... she had told Aryan about that offer...but no serious conversation has taken place...Dipika is back in SS



Edited by kul_shy - 14 March 2011 at 7:04am

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Neha: Aryan ye kal ke case ki file hai....all paper work is done
Aryan: Ah! Thanks Neha
Aryan relaxed his legs and made himself comfortable on the chair
Neha: tired?
Aryan: Ya! a little bit
At the same moment Shaina entered and took a seat in front of Aryan
Neha: Shall I bring coffee
Aryan: sure.....sugar free
Neha: Yes boss!!!!
Neha left the room...Aryan looked down and smiled


Shaina: Kya hoa?



Aryan: kuch nahi bas woh itni respect ka aadi nahi hon na...that's why
Shaina: Aryan you are our boss but you never imposed your views on us
Shai said that giving a sharp look at Dip who just entered the room


 


 






Edited by kul_shy - 29 March 2011 at 6:36am

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
nice start............
but bus itna sa part :-((
cont soon/...............waiting 4 my shayan scenes ;-))

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 12:37am | IP Logged
Shaina: And also... atleast tumhare koi rivals to nahi hain na
Aryan(smiling+amazed):Rivals???...yeah
Dipika didn't listened that...
D: So what are you guys upto
Shai was just going to speak when Aryan interrupted her


Ary: Nothing serious...just about sunny
Shai gave a sharp look at Aryan
S: Sunny ..yeah



Aryan innocently nodded and they both smiled...when Neha entered the office
Neha: Aryan here you go!!!
Shaina: Neha....You look good in Blue
Neha: Thanks .... You know what...ye dress mujhe Ajay ne gift kiya haiEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Dipika: Neha...Is Ajay here
Neha: No Dipika...woh actually jahan woh rehta hai na..udher ki road rebuilt ho rahi hai'Angry
AngryDipika: So Neha...yeh kitne dinon se chal raha hai...ab aisa to nahi hai na...ke aaj subha subha hai road ka work shoru ho gaya...and woh itna innocent hai ke use pta  bhi nhi chala...If he knew that road ka kaam ho raha hai so he should leave early


Aryan: Ab is me ajay ka kya kasoor hai....ShockedShocked....Govt. taxes to leti hai..lekin kerti kuch nahi....God knows sara fund kahan jatahai
Dipika.:Or kahan jayega....Govt.ka adhe se zyada fund to tumhare coffee ke kharch mai nikal jata haiAngryAngry
Aryan(INNOCENTLY): No dipika u r right...Neha....ye to khatam ho gayi...plzz
Neha and Shaina smiled...leaving Dipika looking angrily at all of them

At the same time Aryan's phone rang
A: Juhu...ok we are coming....guys new case
and all left for the crime scene




Edited by kul_shy - 29 March 2011 at 6:41am

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 3:06am | IP Logged
kul_shy

it's a request that u should be a little considerate towards Dipika also

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 6:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pearlnarang

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it's a request that u should be a little considerate towards Dipika also


OK I'LL TRY TO......ACTUALLY IT IS MORE OF AN AS FANFIC..BUT I'LL TRY



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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Thanks for trying

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