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..Life is Strange?!? [SG SS] * Completed* P43, 47

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 1:57am | IP Logged
SmileHey Guys! I'm back!Smile
 
After recieving such over-whelming comments on my first ever try on writing a story!
 
I thought of writing another one.. It will be either a OS of two parts or if I am appreciatedWink I will make it a SS.. This one is completely my own thinking. Any resemblence to any kind of story is purely co-incedential. LOL Read at our own risk! Embarrassed It's bad I am quite sure.. Please be true with your comments. If you don't like it and you write it in the comment I will try and make it better.. It is for my and your (as readers) betterment!Smile Sorry for troubling you!Embarrassed Sorry if it doesn't make it up with your expectations..
 
So here it follows! Enjoy...Big smile

 Banner and Text Courtesy: Sanaya [Sanaya-luv-arti]Hug
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As the sun's rays entered the room, we could see a beautiful lady sleeping and her loving husband staring at her' Smile

B: She looks so innocent while sleeping' Can't believe that actually I, Samrat woke up earlier than my beautiful wife! Life changes so much after marriage'

Yes, indeed that is Samrat Shergill. The Excel College's ex-student, currently a successful businessman working in his father's company, The Shergill Industry! He is married to his lady love and the most beautiful girl in Excel's history Gunjan Bhushan... Ooops! Gunjan Shergill! She is working with Samrat as his left-hand in his business. It's a Sunday morning!

S: (whispers into her ears) Good Morning Chashmish!

G: (turns to the other side) Good Night!

S: Come on Sweetypie! It's a miracle I woke up early and you are still sleeping!

G: Hmm'

Gunjan in sleep clutches Samrat's hand and rests her head on his bare chest' She falls asleep again! Samrat then starts caressing her hair and kisses them' He can feel her smile in sleep.

G: Let me sleep Sam! (Irritatingly!) And you also sleep..Sleepy

S: Ok! I need an excuse to fall asleep again!!Wink

G: What time is it?Sleepy

S: 1 'o' clock! Why?

Gunjan gets up with a jerk!

G: What???? It is 1?Shocked

S: Yes Baby! Well its okay if you want to sleep some more you can as it is a Sunday!

G: Shut Up Sam! And why did you just keep on blabbering? You should have woken me up!

S: Hello madam! I woke you up! "Let me Sleep Sam! And you also sleep!" (Mimicking Gunjan) Remember?

G: Sorry Baby! I don't know but I feel like sleeping more!Sleepy

S: (caringly) are you fine baby? You sleep I will take care of the food.. Do you want any medicine? Shall I take you to the doctor? (Showers all in one go!)

G: (surprisedLOL) Awie. I'm fine Sweetheart! Just a little tired! {changing the topic} So what do you want to eat for breakfast? I mean lunch! [matter-of-factly]

S: Don't try and change the topic darling' I know you are not feeling well!

G: Sam! Leave it! Anyways! I feel like going out for lunch with my sweet hubby! Can we go please please please?

S: Sure why not baby! Where do you want to go?

G: Anywhere.. (hugged him) Just want to spend time with you!!

S: {Checking her forehead} Uh! Chashmish! I think either you are sick or I am dreaming' My wife wants go out with me on a romantic lunch!

G:{gets angry and leaves him} What do you mean Samrat? I am unromantic! Fine then! I don't want to go with you  anywhere and anytime! I will never go out with you! Hu-h [turns her head the other side]

S: {holding his ears} Aww baby! I am sorry!

G: {smiles} OK fine!

S: {get's up and moves towards his cupboard} Tell me what shall I wear?

G: (No reply)

S: Chashmish! (turns to find her not there and puking in the bathroom) Chashmish (runs towards the bathroom) Are you fine baby? (Strongly) We are going to the doctor right now! {Gunjan tries to speak} I what no arguments' (Softly) Baby it is for your health! Please try and understand!

G: (thinks there is no chance of arguing) Ok! Fine! I'll take a shower and then come!

S: Good! I'll lay the breakfast' (Gunjan again tries to speak) and that is final!

Samrat goes out and closes the door behind him, he takes out a Pink sari for Gunjan and keeps it on the bed' Finally he goes down to lay the breakfast.

(After a While)

Gunjan and Samrat eat their breakfast.. Gunjan tries her best to avoid going to the doctor but Samrat is firm with his decision. Soon she realizes he won't listen to her and they sit in the car and reach the hospital.

(At the Hospital)

Sam's POV:

I was busy waiting for Gunjan outside the room where the doctor was checking her. I was praying to God that nothing serious comes out. *Fingers-Crossed*!

Suddenly I saw something' In fact someone! And it was'

Precap: *Uh Mr. Shergill can I speak to you for a minute?
         
       What? Really? This can't be true!

              *This can't be her! No ways! Not now!

               *Where did you vanish?
               
None of your business be happy with yourself!

              *I love you Samrat!Cry
               But I hate you! You betrayed me!Angry
               What's my mistake in it? Even you are a share holder in it!

Hope you all like my new concept!Embarrassed 
Please inform me if you want to be PMed! I'll be glad to do so but then you will have to add me in your Buddy List!
 
P.S:: Vritika, I modified your idea!Smile
 
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Love from Nivriti =)


Edited by SajanRox - 03 August 2011 at 10:20pm

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 2:16am | IP Logged
wow yrrrr it was too goooddddddClap

waiting eagerly for the nxt part

doo cntinue soon

n thnks for the pm....

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 2:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetsurabhi94

wow yrrrr it was too goooddddddClap

waiting eagerly for the nxt part

doo cntinue soon

n thnks for the pm....
 
Thanks for liking it! I will surely update the next part soon.. Smile
Please suggest whether I should make it a OS of 2 parts or an SS!
I will write according to that only!Tongue
If an OS I will have to sum it up in the next part and if an SS I can write more!
Please tell me fast!
And you are welcome for the PM...
 
 
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PM list!Smile 
(My first ever!LOL)

- mohit_rockstar()
- RadhikaBhushan (Radhika)
- -MoNayalicious- (Palak)
- Karantakiar (Vritika)
- ambikamuskaan (Ambika)
- ekta_monaya (Ekta)
- Anjali_12 (Anjali)
- samratrocks (Hina)
- Joseph_A (Joseph)
- saduf ()
- rupal.sri24()
Kritianya (Kritika)
- MohitSanayaDrug (Sanz)
- SM_317 (Shreya)
 
Hey Guys.. It's a request please tell me your real names.. (the ones which have an empty bracket!)Smile
!!Happy Reading!!Wink
 
Hope you enjoy it!
 


Edited by SajanRox - 18 March 2011 at 2:24am

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 2:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SajanRox

Originally posted by sweetsurabhi94

wow yrrrr it was too goooddddddClap

waiting eagerly for the nxt part

doo cntinue soon

n thnks for the pm....
 
Thanks for liking it! I will surely update the next part soon.. Smile
Please suggest whether I should make it a OS of 2 parts or an SS!
I will write according to that only!Tongue
If an OS I will have to sum it up in the next part and if an SS I can write more!
Please tell me fast!
And you are welcome for the PM...
 
 
for that thing i may need to know the story line because i cant tell weather u cn write it as an ss or os bt if u have some more story after tht then u may write it as n ss SmileBig smile

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 2:24am | IP Logged
AAWWW..that was rily cute..lovd the starting...wonder wats in the precap...i rily lovd ur concept..dear..if its f9 with u then cld u write it as a ss..it wld b gr8..
plz send me pm...and cont soon..
M WAITINSmile


Edited by mohit_rockstar - 14 March 2011 at 2:26am

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Character Sketch...Tongue
 
(Some characters will come later! First I am concentrating only on SaJan.. Slowly all will come.. I am planning to get MayUr and AdhAani soon.. Sam's mom will play a positive role as I am tired {sorry!Embarrassed} of seeing her in a negative role.. No offense to other writers!)

Gunjan &Samrat Shergill: Our sweet SaJan!Embarrassed

Supporting Characters.. (will come soon!)
 
Suhani Chapekar: Samrat's twin sisterSmile

Adhiraj Chapekar: Suhani's husband

Sneha & Abhilasha Chapekar: Adhaani's daughter

Indraani Shergill: Samrat's mom!

Mayank & Nupur Sharma: Gunjan's brother and sister-in-law
 
Dhruv Tripati: Tenants at Gunjan's old home (b4 marriage in Jalandhar...) and his childhood friend!Smile
 
Secondary Characters...
 
Rajat Sharma: Gunjan and Mayank's elder brother (elder to Gunjan by 15 years and to Mayank by 10 years)
Mughda Chapekar Sharma:  Adhiraj's elder sister (15 years) and Gunjan and Mayank's Bhabhi
 
Sheena Malhotra: Samrat's ex-girlfriend (same as MJHT)
 
(Hope you all like the CS.. All characters play a secondary role and the limelight will be on only SaJan..)
 
Index!Smile

Part I - Page 1

Part II- Page 3
 
Part III- Page 6
 
Part IV- Page 8
 
Part V- [a] Page 11 [b] Page 12
 
Part VI- Page 14
 
Part VII- Page 18

Important Note on Page 20..
 
Part VIII- Page 21, 22
 
Part IX- Page 26
 
Promo 1- Page 31
 
Part X[Last]- Page 40

Epilogue- Page 43

Surprise on Page 47Wink

Party
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Edited by SajanRox - 19 June 2011 at 6:26am

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without asking add me in ur pm list . N only one word excelent bt u stopd at vry bad point i cant wait 4 nxt ab ye kon sajan ki lyf me aa gaya yar.

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