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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -afsha-

Hi im here
heyy afsha....wat a surprise to see u hereLOL
okay so i read it and OHH-EMM-GEEE that was soo freaking awesome!!!
i am really intrigued by the concept....though, what is your rationale behind geet getting back at him.....cuz if she does that, wouldn't she be the same as maan?
and i think the writing was amazing!....kinda poetic u knowWink
the only thing i would advise is if you could write out the entire words, instead of short forms cuz then it gives the update more of an elegant tone

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by phoenixgirl

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bday time? ur bday is in june? mine too..
OMGGG really?
sweet!!
u know i think jenn di's bday is in june as well...thats soo coolLOL
when is urs di?
 
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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by macho_muffin

[QUOTE=-afsha-]Hi im here
heyy afsha....wat a surprise to see u hereLOL
okay so i read it and OHH-EMM-GEEE that was soo freaking awesome!!!
i am really intrigued by the concept....though, what is your rationale behind geet getting back at him.....cuz if she does that, wouldn't she be the same as maan?
and i think the writing was amazing!....kinda poetic u knowWink
the only thing i would advise is if you could write out the entire words, instead of short forms cuz then it gives the update more of an elegant tone
[/QUOTE
Hello meri jaan
I cum wen u cum so u asked n here im
Ok ill do that n Geet wali thg its suspense
Im nt make Geet same lik Maan yaar samjha kar
Wat idea u wuld give

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -afsha-

Originally posted by macho_muffin

[QUOTE=-afsha-]Hi im here
heyy afsha....wat a surprise to see u hereLOL
okay so i read it and OHH-EMM-GEEE that was soo freaking awesome!!!
i am really intrigued by the concept....though, what is your rationale behind geet getting back at him.....cuz if she does that, wouldn't she be the same as maan?
and i think the writing was amazing!....kinda poetic u knowWink
the only thing i would advise is if you could write out the entire words, instead of short forms cuz then it gives the update more of an elegant tone
[/QUOTE
Hello meri jaan
I cum wen u cum so u asked n here im
Ok ill do that n Geet wali thg its suspense
Im nt make Geet same lik Maan yaar samjha kar
Wat idea u wuld give
haha
ohh okay then, don't tell me anything cuz i love suspenses tooLOL
yayy as long as Geet stoop as low as him, i am happy!Embarrassed
umm i am a little confused here....idea for which part of ur story? lol....like how geet can take revenge or what maan does to her?

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Woh vl c aaramse
For now tell me strt
Lik wat shuld be in 2nd part
Frndshp
1st meet sumthg lik that
 

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -afsha-

Woh vl c aaramse
For now tell me strt
Lik wat shuld be in 2nd part
Frndshp
1st meet sumthg lik that
 
i think it would be awesome to tell the story in flashback mode you know
like u can juggle between the past and present
show geet thinking of all these memories
so in second update u could start from their first meeting and geet thinking all that
does it make sense?Confused

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by macho_muffin

i think it would be awesome to tell the story in flashback mode you know
like u can juggle between the past and present
show geet thinking of all these memories
so in second update u could start from their first meeting and geet thinking all that
does it make sense?Confused
Didint u raed the end of the pm
Its past
Geet is taking them to the bumoy ride
Muffin tuna
Nw asking u an idea for their 1st meet
Sumthg hatke

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -afsha-

Originally posted by macho_muffin

i think it would be awesome to tell the story in flashback mode you know
like u can juggle between the past and present
show geet thinking of all these memories
so in second update u could start from their first meeting and geet thinking all that
does it make sense?Confused
Didint u raed the end of the pm
Its past
Geet is taking them to the bumoy ride
Muffin tuna
Nw asking u an idea for their 1st meet
Sumthg hatke
ohh ya ya....no i read it but it just didn't register in my teeny tiny headLOL
hmm something hatke, eh?
well could you give me some clues on their characterization....is he the hotshot and she is the shy girl?

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