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Mayank&Nupur:With You...Last Part Pg 33 (Page 33)

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Sajjal dear - what a beautiful ending ... I just loved reading this story ... The every word you wrote burst a volcano of emotions in me ... It was just perfect - the pain that pity gives is huge and no one likes to pitied and you know why I liked it all because you brought the reality - he tried to run away and that is natural but he came back and that is love ... Her fear was true and I really loved the ending how you brought out the whole scenario - in very simple words you brought out the reality of their lives ... I am glad you didn't give it a sad ending ... This couldn't be anymore perfect ... This is one of the main reasons why I love reading what your write - they just pull the strings of my heart and I actually feel each and every emotion ...

Great job dear,
God bless you ...
Jaee D. Rathore


Edited by -jaee- - 06 May 2011 at 11:22pm

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O.M.G princess..This could'nt be more perfect!! .. beautiful .. and this story was written in a very serne and classic way!! I enjoyed very bit of it and that pity issue was so rightly adressed, a main problem in such relations.

and i sooo adored the family scene in the end..*sigh*..i have teary eyes..

Excellent princess..this was a master piece as always!!

love uu..God bless..


Edited by Fantasia. - 07 May 2011 at 8:49am

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awesome updt sajjal
hope everything will be fine soon...cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Me waiting for an update...the last 2 parts were good as usual...but hated to see Nupur go through so much pain...i hope Mayank realises and comes back to herSmileSmile

And plz dont make this a story with a sad ending...plz plz plzzz...

And update as soon as you get time okaySmileSmile

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Perfect ending with all imperfections...thanks for a lovely n happy ending...!!!


Edited by valiyah27 - 07 May 2011 at 4:58am
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perfect and mindblwoing ending dear...
thank GOD u didnt made nupur suffer sooo much...
loved the ending..bt i missed gunjan in the last update...
she was sweetheart..
and the little angel was so sweet...
pls do write more stories dear...

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