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OS: Hold me close Sway me more 031211

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 8:54am | IP Logged

Dis is an One Shot (OS) on a fictional sketch.
Hope its easy to envision it as u read ...
yet another dose of Imagination winning over Reality
To Prithvi as HIM and Damini as HER

It was a month since de had danced at Max  Brennan.
A lot had taken place since then. Yet no commitments had been made.
Both of dem knew der blood sang for one another...
YET why did de never say it out loud. Wasna it high time ??
De wer together again on yet another Biz deal out of station
It was da Last nite of der trip and Dats wen SHE plotted her best move. Seduction of HIS mind.
~~ Dedicating it to da Biggest Shoe Lover Ever
on da other side of mah planet ~~


So he took da 7 short steps to da suite.
putting his ear he tried to gauge wots happening inside.
He had messed up really really big dis time.
It was der last nite der and he had still to tell her he loved her.
wot was he waiting for !!
His hand touched da Key card in his blazer pocket.
He had gulped down whiskey for reinforcements so he doesna falter
Not realising it was slowly affecting his system.

He slid the card at da door and da light turned from Red to Green

She sat on da stool at da dressing mirror.
Damn wer was he ?? its was der last nite here.
She had to seduce him or dis doofoo wud jus let her slip away...
he had failed dat game twice already... she didna want it to repeat.
Tonite he had to SWAY wid her.
She looked at her reflection in da mirror.
it looked slightly blurred. Oh jeez...
was she HIGH on da Whiskey she had drunk for reinforcements??
She eyed da Chivas Regal bottle on da dressing table...
Oh Jeez and all finks Drunk ... it was 3/4th empty !!
yuP she was DRUNK. maybe dat way she wud be able to shed her inhibitions. She felt da ocean breeze coming in from da open balcony.
yuP she had kept da wall to wall french doors wide open.
da Most amazing view of silver light reflected on da dark waters greeted her. It was almost gauzy as a dream. She smiled.
Pickin up da whishkey glass she gulped down da last shot.
Hid da bottle under da dresser and was about to stand up wen...
she heard da CLICK of da RED light turning to GREEN at da door.
It was time... She quickly stood up...
On her 4 inch High heels.  Her most expensive buy on dis trip.
Her world tilted slightly. and she Swayed.

He opened da door, and walked in jus as she swayed...
Its called TIMING !! perharps for da first time in his life
He was on TIME at da Right place !!

He caught her b4 she fell. and jeez was she glowing like a real star !!
I am Phinneeeeeeee. she sing-songed da words trying to steady herself.
Faltering outta his arms she walked out beyond da French doors.
Reaching da banister she looked down...
Down was 14 floors down. Whoa... nope need to look straight out.
she reminded herself
Da penthouse suite 1402 did have its birdeye view of da Ocean at its best.

He followed her out to da balcony n stood beside her.
She was moving to sum beat.
He wanted to ask her wot secret song was playering in her mind.
4 floors down on da 10th floor was da popular Open restaurant da Hotel was famous for and sumone was singing a sexy sensual number.
Suddenly realising...dats wot she was moving to. Eureka !!

She was a sight. Eyes closed. lower Lips between teeth, hands on da banister. she was in a world of her own.
He folded his hands at his chest n turned towards her.
Legs apart firmly planted tilting his neck slightly left, eyes broodingly minimised. He watched her and a silent fleeting thot bordered around him
She was HIS. All he had to do was tell her.
He cud see da pleasure on her face as da music became louder.
He tried to tune in da song as he watched her.

And den she OPENED her eyes. for a second she looked out straight
sumwer far out at da ocean. den a sly grin crept her lips.
and she turned towards him. She was a good 7 inches shorter to him.
tilting her head up HIGH she looked into his eyes.
He was watching her wid a questioning look.

sumwer below da singer started crooning

When marimba rhythms start to play
Dance with me, make me sway

She slowly reached out towards him...still moving to a beat from da slow song... her hands curled around his loosened tie. and he felt her pull him forward. his face was mere inches away from hers now. his tie still in her hand.

Like a lazy ocean hugs the shore
Hold me close, sway me more


den she turned and took a step in fronto him
both of dem facing da ocean now.
Her left hand was on da banister her right hand still held his tie

Like a flower bending in the breeze
Bend with me, sway with ease


She bent down slowly towards da banister taking him wid her
and den she moved her hips, swaying to da beat

When we dance you have a way with me
Stay with me, sway with me

Oh boy was he in deep deep trouble or wot !!
He clutched da banister wid both his hands trapping her between his body n da ocean

she let go of his tie knowing she had to UP da ante now.
slowly she turned in da small space he had created between his hands
now facing him... he was still slightly bent towards her.
she watched his eyes his lips his... zoning bk to his lips again
wer de da best lips she had known dis side of her teenage life ??

Other dancers may be on the floor
Dear, but my eyes will see only you

She lifted her hand and touched his face watching him take a deep breath
She hid her grin behind her flying hair.
yuP da breeze was gud for seduction !!
She slid her hands at his blazer n slid it down off his broad shoulders.
She knew he never wore shoulder pads. He didna need dem !!
wen da blazer reached his hips level.. she pulled Him IN towards her.

Only you have the magic technique
When we sway I go weak


He knew he had to take over. or else he was deffo gonna embarrass da bejesus outta himself
He held her at her hips and steadied her slightly away creating a tini tiny distance between dem
as da violins below played a sensual melody to der already hightened senses

He knew it was time !!
Den he did bent down and caught his hands together behind her knees
and in one smooth move lifted her up and over his shoulders
He grinned knowing she must have her eyes wide opened at his shocking gesture
wot he didna know was dat she was grinning like a cheshire cat
dat had found da best bowl of milk

I can hear the sounds of violins
Long before it begins


He walked slowly bak to da room.
On reaching da huge King size bed, he stopped n slid her slowly down his body. Sheer torture. dats wot she thot. As her body felt a tingling.

Make me thrill as only you know how
Sway me smooth, sway me now

She wished da tingling wud never go away
she hoped da fire burned steadily in his blood too

Sway me take me thrill me hold me
bend me ease me u have a way with me


She grinned saucily at him... and slowly pulled da tie loose and slid it off him
he opened his sleeves

Other dancers may be on the floor
Dear, but my eyes will see only you


she circled him slowly still on da beat
running her hands north from his hips n sliding it into his hair at da nape.
She felt him shudder... and den she slid her hands to his broad chest from behind. plastering herself to him.
sumwer in da RULE BOOK of seduction, HBO jus became SHOWTIME

Only you have the magic technique
When we sway I go weak


She seductively grabbed da edge of his unbuttoned shirt and parted it
slowly sliding it off his shoulders. The shirt dropped down between dem
and she flicked it outta sight wid da pointed heel of her most expensive shoe. She once again hugged him, Hands splayed across his wide BARE chest. Heaven der on earth was his first thot.

Heaven had jus met HELL wen her hands started doing da zig zag dance
He grabbed her hands before de did any further damage to his system !!
and turned towards her still holding her delicate hands in his.
He wasna letting go of dem anytime soon.

I can hear the sounds of violins
Long before it begins

Two major things happened suddenly widout any intimation.
Da hotel lights went out and she jumped wid a shriek pushing him backwards in da process

Make me thrill as only you know how
Sway me smooth, sway me now

He felt da bed edge at da bak of his legs as he fell backwards pulling her along In a pile of silken fragranced sheets.
The moonlight played hide n seek on da bed dat nite
Her long hair creating a halo around her beautiful face fell on his chest
He didna move her. It was a comforting feeling.
he held her face in his hands... n mouth da words silently
She looked at him questioningly.
he repeated... You... Make... Me... Sway !!
She smiled n said da only word dat was needed dat nite...*Ditto*

as only you You know how
Sway me smooth, sway me now


da music was fading away... da cool breeze from da ocean was flowing in
but wot happened in dat Suite dat nite was for
DEM to know and us to DOT DOT DOT
...
As sumone Swayed to Sumwone on a song
dat reDefined da word SWAY...



Writers Note: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lo5t69WGmr8
Hope u all can envision it da way i have written it
And jus incase u hear or see sumone swaying to a silent beat...
Remember sumone sumwer da Tango is Destined !!
*skorpion*


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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 10:10am | IP Logged
Wow panna wow......

you made me **Sway*** to the whole music and the ambience you created with the OS

and then u **KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELED************ me LOLLOL

The 4 inch heels created HELL Effect..........

Getting drunk makes a person shed inhibitions.. ** innocently asking ** can this be experimented///

what happens ?? u want me to fill in the dot dot dot .......... Wink

LOVED IT ClapClap


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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Pannnnaaaaaaaaaa... Are you trying to kill me! I think my mouth fell open halfway through.. i mean you donot write about that.. that she took his shirt off and practically plastered herself from behind and then her hands started dancing too.. i mean.. Okay I'm blabbering arent i? That's your fault. *tries to glare* 

What wouldnt i give to see this happen for real.. 

Seduction.. I have always had a weakness for scenes in which she seduces him... I basically just died a happy death here.. The stuff on the balcony.. Man am i glad they were both drunk *grins shamelessly*

Anyhow i believe you have gathered that i simply loved this! Keep 'em coming.. Big smileLOL

Take care,
Maham.

P.S God bless the powers behind the power outage :P

P.P.S Oh and Khush i love this song too.. Great number. Congo.. The list of the songs we both like is gradually increasing :P and Congo on getting your request fulfilled too (Unofficial one i guess unless you blackmailed Panna later in private :P) .. anyway I'm glad for that.. i hope you know why. 

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
 panna is on a killing spree !!

Sway is a sexy number ...and i can totally envision queenie seducing her king....she was not like other heroines we see on tv...she was daring enough ..had dat spunk ...


awsome yaar ...this Os was all things sexy ..drunk PriDa...suite wid birdseye view of the ocean ..dat sizzling number ...and the moonlight ..terrificStar Heart

do write more

--khwahishSmile





Edited by khwaish.e.arsh - 14 March 2011 at 1:34am

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
Egads! This was..ummm...Heart Heart yeah!

Women in charge...Like! ;)

You totally keeeled it...hehehe...

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Viduu

Wow panna wow......
you made me **Sway*** to the whole music and the ambience you created with the OS
and then u **KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELED************ me LOLLOL
what happens ?? u want me to fill in the dot dot dot .......... Wink
LOVED IT ClapClap


Hehehe...yaa...i keeeeeeeeeeel you !!
so much to say so lil time left.

skorpion

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Maham...

Pannnnaaaaaaaaaa... Are you trying to kill me! I think my mouth fell open halfway through.. i mean you donot write about that..

Seduction.. I have always had a weakness for scenes in which she seduces him... I basically just died a happy death here.. The stuff on the balcony.. Man am i glad they were both drunk *grins shamelessly*
Anyhow i believe you have gathered that i simply loved this! Keep 'em coming.. Big smileLOL
Take care,
Maham.

P.P.S Oh and Khush i love this song too.. Great number. Congo.. The list of the songs we both like is gradually increasing :P and Congo on getting your request fulfilled too (Unofficial one i guess unless you blackmailed Panna later in private :P) .. anyway I'm glad for that.. i hope you know why. 


HAHAHA ... SILENCE...I keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeel you too !!
Smoking gun  indeed eh.  who know Whiskey ke do ghunt can be so expressive !!
Khushwaa sure knew wot she was upto wen she commented on da earlier OS n sly-ly mentioned a Michael B number... Music n Imagination so sync up in a real nice way eh.

skorpion.

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 5:28am | IP Logged
Panna...

mera tho sach mein BOLTI BAND hogayi thi...Day DreamingBlushing..n pls i cnt help but blusshhhhh....

U R on a roll it seems.. thnks to Kushi's nudging u wid dat youtube link..we got another superhot Prida OS filled with passion, dare n its done with such a Finesse  .... .. *sighhhhh* :D :D

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