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Maaneet Express # 2 (Page 41)

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
@ sana thanks dear, yes dadi is self centered , only think about her and her family name
love u darling.
 good night
sweet dreams.
 see u tomorrow.
@susana ha ha let's see dadi's reaction may be she got  an attack.
thanks dear. geet aka gk is tough but she is still very scared abt maan and feared abt his safety.
@hinal thanks dear
@jyoti thanks dear. nehi re slight changing the story line but more twist will come.
 ha ha dadi bhi na
 mere soul sis ne kuch kaha toh aap toh mujhe maana hi hoga

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
@wardah thanks dear
I just changed the story line little but twist will come
aab now twist will happy or sad that will be reveal in next part

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
ooookie gulz me leaving will nt cum 2morrow at evening may b
well loved the parts du continue soon
will read rest later
had a gr8 tym all day
bye tc
love u all
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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
next part....

she came to this big not for the first time...she had been here to give her exams....
sometimes with darji for meeting the doctors...
but everytime someone accompanied her.....
this was the first time she came alone...
came alone to face this world..
came alone to be with him...
came alone to be with his memories...
just thinking about him made her smile n at the same time tears welled up in her eyes...
but she had to brush it aside...
otherwise people would think that she was weak...
n he never wanted any1 to think that his sherni was weak..
she came here for him...
she didnt tell anybody but it was his dream that kept her alive...
his dream that she wanted to fulfill...
his dream to come to delhi ...

---------------------------------flashback---------------------------------------------------------
both of then were sitting near the river, their secret spot....
they knew that if any1 of them is lost,....they wud find each other here....
gurmeet aka gm -- tum jaanti ho main yahan bachpan se aata tha....pata nahi yahan kya hai..jo itna sukoon milta hai....
geet -- mujhe ye nahin maloom,,,,,mujhe to bas ye pata hai....ki jab tum here saath hote ho to mujhe sukoon milta hai....
both sitting close by with gm's head on her lap.....n geet stroking his hair...
gm -- geet tum jaanti ho hamesha se mera ye sapna raha hai ki mai ek bada aadmi bano...
geet -- laughing -- abhi chote bacche ho kya...??
gm -- geet....
geet -- ok ok...sorry...
gm -- thats better...i mean i want to become successful.....
geet -- meaning...??
gm -- u know i visited my friend adi in delhi a while back....
geet -- hmm...
gm -- there is something about that city that captures u...like u dont want to ever leave again....
i saw become successful...he was struggling at first...but now he has a profitable business...his own house...his company....n i want to be just like him....
geet -- no...i dont want u to be like him/...
gm -- what?? but y??
geet -- with a smile -- i want u to be better than him....i want u to be more successful than him...i want u to fulfill ur dream n conquer the world....
gm -- shocked -- whole world??
geet -- thik hai...thik hai...abhi ke liye delhi...phir india...phir world...ye chalega...
gm -- agar tum saath ho to kuch bhi chalega...
both stared into th esun as it was gradually coming down....with a promise in their heart for a better 2moro....to be with each other...

-----------------------------------------flashback ends-----------------------------------------------------------------

she came here to complete him...to make his wish come true...to make his dream convert into reality...
just then she heard some1 call out her name...
man -- geet...tum geet ho naa..??
geet -- confused -- aap??
man -- hi....i'm adi...
geet again had tears in her eyes coz here she was thinking abt him n here god sent her a message.....that she is right.....
she quickly wiped away her tears b4 he cud see anything....
geet -- par aapne muhe pehchana haise??
adi -- gurmeet ki geet ko main kahin bhi pehchaan sakta hoon...he said with a heavy voice...,
chalo ab tum mere saath chalogi....
geet -- nahin...meri...
adi -- main kuch nahi sunne wala...mere liye tum meri choti behan ki tarah ho...sochna bhi mat ki mai tumhe yahan chod doonga...
b he grabbed her with him....she was unable to say no to him...

from far away...a man standing in a corner was watching everything...watching her...watching him...watching her every move....

precap -- meera.....who is the man.....dev......

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 2:44pm | IP Logged
@ wardah -- good night dear....c u soon....love u...Hug

@ rakhi -- story change chalegi as far as maaneet r together,,,no worries.....yeyyyy my demand might get fulfilled..Dancing...
.love u my ss...Hug

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 2:52pm | IP Logged
@wardah ok dear.
good night sweet. dreams.
@jyoti nice , lovely, beautiful, emotional part. loved it.
continue soon.
yes maaneet willbe fight together.
tujhe kaise mere maan ke baat pata chal jata hain re.
@all kal mein Index karungi
@all I post today's all part in mein TM thread
pls have a look
page no 68
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1633809&PID=40222156&#40222156

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
wow super hit scene
i wish yu turn this into
FF pls love it
i hope she successed
the dream of GM
what love they heard
for each other
pls cont tom to pls
HeartThumbs UpClapHug

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@all now me going for sleep
good night
sweet dreams.
 love u all
muhhha
see u tomorrow

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