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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 1:42am | IP Logged
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Edited : I enjoyed the convo. between Kishore & Nakku.Such ease on nakku's part & teasing on Kishore's part.Unknowingly Kishore was teasing her about Dutta & poor nakku,all shyEmbarrassed.
 
Ok,i am bit confused here,was the conversation between her father & that marriage broker was the only reason to give her the hope for a life of her own or she herself had  feeling for Dutta .I mean the way she was thinking that he should like curtains & then teaching Buddhuram to speak aa gaye,it made me think .
 
Why Kala had to complicate things further.Unknowingly she incresed Nakku's hope by allowing her to decorate the room as per her choice.So far Nakku never thought about herself ,her dreams,her feelings.But ,now for the first time she thought about her own life.Nakku was so right in thinking-without hope there is no hurt.Till yesterday,the girl was addressing him with all sorts of names & making his fun & come today,she even in her thoghts she is giving him respect by saying ji,aap & all that.She infact dreamt about him.BTW the dream was so sweet & pure,just like nakku's heart.
 
Her father is so simple human being,he knows his ground & his social standing that's why he is not keeping any hope.
Nakku dear went to purchase bangles,how sweet.But there also she settled herself for glass bangles since they were in her budget plus she can buy the clip for her sister.The girl finds pleasure in little things.oh,she doesn't want to go to her maami's place becaz Dutta is coming on that day.Embarrassed
 
It is bad manners to evasdrop on someone's private conversation,isliye nakku dear Kanhaji se sorry bol rahi thi naa.But,she couldn't stop herself from listening.
I so wished that nakku ne Kala ki baat nahi suni hoti,it broke her heart & her hope.For once she had dreamt about her life & it shattered,just like those broken bangles.Somehow these broken bangles reminded me of Nakku's famous line in LTL - Saab,glass aur dil ek jaise thodi naa hote hai,jo ek baar tut gaya to dubara nahi banegaDay Dreaming
I just hope nakku doesn't take kala's words to her heart & don't lose hope,nakku dear.Ur prince charming will soon come.Wink
 
I had written in my last comment that while talking about suitable girl for Dutta,Kala had Nakku in her mind.But,I was proved wrong.Being wrong made be respect Kala more.
When she was questioned by Kishore,i was like what she will answer,why she refused?
But,i realised that in Kala's voice a mother was speaking for well being of her child,in this case Nakku.When she said that she loves nakku more than her own brother,the honesty in her words touched my heart.She indeed is Nakku's yasoda mom.
She is right at her place,both Dutta & Nakku stay in two different worlds.Their likes,dislikes are so different.
If Dutta is sky ,then Nakku is earth.
But then,as they say opposite attracts each other.So,here also same will happen but gradually.
Like in ur first part u mentioned thru Dinky's Fiance that in 1st sight Nakku goes unnoticed,but there is something in her which is likable.So i am sure that something will attarct Dutta towards her.
 
BTW,i want to know the reason behind Dutta's eractic life style.Like mentioned in my last comment,there is something in him,on which i cann't exactly place my finger.But,kuch missing hai.
If it has something to do with his past,then i am sure u will let me know thru ur future updates.
Ab jaldi se apne hero ki entry karwa de,more than nakku ,i am waiting for their first interactionSmile
 
OMG,kuch jyada hi rambling ho gaya.Read at ur own riskWinkLOL
 
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Edited by preety_219 - 15 March 2011 at 7:58am

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 1:48am | IP Logged
nice update shilpi,
i am little bit upset in the starting when i read that kala don't want nakku for dutta but as i read it completely then i understand that why kala refuses to shashi. she must b scared naa about their future.
shilpi update soon , iam really really excited and eager to know that what will happen next. current update is fultoo fatak.

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 2:29am | IP Logged

ch 3 kishore wants to have tea made by nakku daily ..how sweet

ohh nakku also deams about DSP just like me but in my dreams he is all caring and not saruu lol
earlier i was feeling all happy n nice while reading ur updt then kala refused to accept nakkus proposal for dutta , i was like yeh kabhi nahin sudhregi ...but then after she explained the reason for doing so i started liking her again ...wonderful concept ...i like such stories where the protagnists are poles apart and slowing come together . awesome updt

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 3:23am | IP Logged
V well written and mind blowing FF!!! U did not PM me Cry
I was thinking y no update yet and hilla already 2 posted Shocked
It was not mention on the header so did not know Ouch

But I loved the whole 2 parts and poor nakku she is already heart broken! Cry
Don't worry kalavathi ji u will be happy in time to come Embarrassed

Eagerly waiting for the next update and do not forget to PM me plzzzzz Big smile

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[UOTE=AzMishy]V well written and mind blowing FF!!! U did not PM me Cry
I was thinking y no update yet and hilla already 2 posted Shocked
It was not mention on the header so did not know Ouch

But I loved the whole 2 parts and poor nakku she is already heart broken! Cry
Don't worry kalavathi ji u will be happy in time to come Embarrassed

Eagerly waiting for the next update and do not forget to PM me plzzzzz Big smile[/QUOTE]
 
Oh..i am soooo Sorry..Ouch..The PMing thing sometimes acts so weirdly..But will defo take care to PM u from now on..Yeah..i know i need to add the index and update header will do it asap...Sorry again and thanks for still reading and commenting ...hope you love futher parts by the way to cheer u up here's a link to my previous FF if haven't read it:
 
 

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:04am | IP Logged
hi shilpa....just read the first chapter and could not resist from commenting......you are awesome girl.....are you a professional writer?
it seems from the way you write:-)

awwww......feel so sad reading about naku...poor girl lost her childhood at 12...and had loads of responsiblities.....i hope all her miseries are compensated by duttas love
she is such a helping hand for her neighbours....and good to see kala being nice to her...........and naku was thinking about her sisters marrige and happiness not about hers....what a character Clap
But then she doesn't realize that there are some imperfection which make a perfect picture..its needs the right artist to capture it. Clap
you ve spell bound me with these line...loved them :-)
i have to leave for some work now...will stick to the other chapters as soon as i come back:-)

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 5:32am | IP Logged
Great update shilpi..
Aww bechari nakku... already dreaming bout him :(
But i hope when he comes, kala will re-consider nakku. Well opposite attracts. So what if they are poles apart..
I cant wait for Dutta to come. I wna see how he reacts after seeing Nakku after 12 years.
 
Thanks for the PM. Continue soon :)

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 5:41am | IP Logged
Shilpita!
 
Another great story! Looking forward to it! You have infused very cleverly Mishal's penchant for seaside home into this story's Dutta Patil!! Liked it very much!
 
But my all time fav is your "The Second Chances"!!! I haven't been able to forget it! I have downloaded it on my comp and read it many times over! That story had stolen my heart! I liked Dutta in that story as being an only child. But anyway this story is also getting under my skin! You have a way with words girl!

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