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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 5:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shilpita87

I am almost scared to do this but....here goes...

Ahem Ahem attention dear passengers...apni khursi ki peeti bandh le because we will soon be taking off for Ch16..

Work on runway in progress....

i won't respond to bullying or bribes this time around..ask Vandu..i am on diet! so there...i make my stand!!!Stern Smile
How about some sugar free gulab jamunsWink
U know its easter & i am celebrating in desi styleLOL

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 6:08am | IP Logged

very nice update

dutta was awesome ..... liked his confession

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 9:12am | IP Logged
hi shilpita,

I need to confess that I couldn't stop myself reading this update three times and I can read it again and again.. fantastic update with so much depth ..
First para itself  could elate oneself to tranquillity.. so much hidden within those few lines.. the depth of emotions and feelings is to be understood rather than defining.Clap
the dream sequence was something I could visualize.beautiful realization by dutta in his own way.and much to his character. and his gradual acceptance to the fact that he has fallen this time and the fall is hard but worth..
abeer is considered to be sacred.. and for dutta it was purifying not only his reality but his dreams too.. the way she put her hand on his heart.. ohh Man! what an imagination.. on has to have this level of imagination to pen down such beautiful scene and your thoughts are as beautiful as dutta's dream.. way to go gal!Clap
then his confession: this is one of the most beautiful confession I have read so far.. he did get effected or jealous should I say when that idiot was trying to sit with her, touch her.. this is something one can feel only when madly in love. as always his eyes did it all to naku.. she could feel that incessant love in his eyes for a fraction of seconds and then it vanished..
Tai kahti hai,teri maa ke maut ke baad sabko tune sambhala hai. barso se main bhi bikhara hua sa jeer aha hoon nakku. Please, mujhe samait le. Please, mujhse pyar kar please!

this line brought tears in my eyes..especially  the line :main bhi bikhara hua sa jeer aha hoon nakku. Please, mujhe samait le. Please, mujhse pyar kar please!
as if he was begging for her love.. at this point of time he wasnt a heart specialist dutta shriraam patil but a lover who could do anything to get her love.. no attitude no pride nothing just love..although unaware of the fact that she is equally madly in love with him.. but it was him who could never realize that .gadha jo hai kyya kare..Day Dreaming
For naku life could have been no better than that one moment she was experiencing..i wonder does this happen in reality insaan jo chahe woh use mil jaye.. not always i guess par jise milta hoga use bhi waisa hi feel hota hoga jaise nakku ko hua hoga after listening to dutta's heart..
 the open heart line totally cracked me up.. LOL baat to pyar ki kar raha hai par doctor wala bheja kahan jayega..LOL LOL
kala's amusment on dutta's confession was so natural.. how could have she been able to say anything.. it takes time to come out of a sudden shock..Wink
chalo acha hua finally nishikant ji came to know about that idiot and his stupid mother.. bechari nakku to pagal ho jati us ghar main..Confused
dutta blushing! LOLEmbarrassedHeart awwww Day Dreaming much deserved blush i must say..Smile
and finally the last converstion between nakku and dutta again a beautiful piece of words.. they way dutta asked her mujhse shadi karegi.. mere dimag main ek dum se salman wala gana aa gaya"mujhse shadi karogi" heheh
and the way she said chimni se nai karegi insaan se karegi.. dutta pyar main bheegi billi ban gaya hai kuch bhi karega.. tere pyar main nakku.. EmbarrassedLOL

all in all a fantastic update shilpi.. i know i am not gud at words par kya karu raha nai gaya.. i have never commented this long to any of the ff's coz i find it difficult to put my thoughts in words but i tried it today just to appreciate all the efforts u put in to pen down such wonderful stories..Hug 




Edited by Subii - 21 April 2011 at 9:18am

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 9:30am | IP Logged


Hi subii,
First all thanks for all those heartwarming words about my amateurish writing. I sometimes wonder do i really deserve it or are u guys baised becoz its Tasha...the couple whom we all already love to bits...If its only that then my credit is belittled if not I am glad that i could touch some cords..

I wish i could get published someday...,maybe not the bestseller but a published author atleast.

Now I have a complain...why press only like....plz do write a few words....it gives me a feel if i have been able to convey my vision at all...like as u said in the dream he finally accepts his love for her..hence fresh from the dream and realization it becomes easy for him to let go and confess...partly coz he is still bothered and drowsy from his dream and memory of Uday trying to touch nakku..

I am glad it was noticed that Dutta realized it when Nakku in dream told him that he has lost the right to touch her and color her....that abeer scene was a build up for this scene..and that dream nakku had was build up for abeer scene...and the childhood incident between Angry teenage dutta and 8-10 yrs old nakku was build up for that dream....I always planned the confession to take place like this...with abeer/sindor playing a large role in it..

Also i wanted the two conflicting POV abt possessiveness and envy to play a major role here...Nakku  accepts Dutta's POV while relegating her life with Uday with a hope that maybe her new life would not have the shadow of her past-unrequitted love for dutta....and also she didn't feel jealous of her fiance's ex.

and that same dutta felt so much J and Possessive of his nakku that he couldn't bear it if uday tried to touch her even most innocently...reversal of thinking hai na!....just wanted to show that POV are never right or wrong they are just that Point of view of one person...we should try and accept them and not fight them to accept our POV as theirs...

Thanks and hope u do keep commenting...it does my little ego great wonders....i feel 10feet tall really due to all u wonderful ppl.




Edited by shilpita87 - 21 April 2011 at 9:31am

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 9:53am | IP Logged

shilpita!!!!

Girl, you have outdone yourself! Take a bow!

The update was simply awesome! Loved it to bits!! What confession! The whole scene was penned down so beautifully that i could "see" it happening in front of me! Till you updated I was just getting more and more restless thinking of what you are going to come up with next! But what you have come up with just swept me off my feet! Never thought of an honest, beautiful confession of love, possessiveness and something much more beyond that I couldn't put my finger to!

Eagerly, eagerly waiting for your next update! Just a suggestion, if you aren't going to be mad at me! Can you please keep two three chapters ready? Publish one at a time but periodically? take a couple of days between your updates to see the reactions of people! You aren't writing exactly for the readers that you have to come up with a new track or twist and turn it to suit the requirements after reading the comments! After all you are the creator of the story and we should just follow your story and comment on it and not demand changes! Print media thankfully is quite crisp and the best part is that the writer is at liberty to stay true to his/her concepts unlike serial writers who are constantly under pressure from various sides to make the changes even at the last moment to accomodate people! Love and trust your views because the whole concept of the story, your philosophy, your life experiences are beautifully incoportaed in the story which not only makes it adorable, readable but cherishable too!

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged
loved it completely ,plz update soon & shaadi band baraat detail too

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shilpita87

I am almost scared to do this but....here goes...

Ahem Ahem attention dear passengers...apni khursi ki peeti bandh le because we will soon be taking off for Ch16..

Work on runway in progress....

i won't respond to bullying or bribes this time around..ask Vandu..i am on diet! so there...i make my stand!!!Stern Smile

Hey shilpi 

ah what a news but this time kam ko assembly line par jaldi lana :P
ok 
and you dont worry i will take care of all teh bullies and bribes 
you just concentrate :P

btw edited my spot :D

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