Thanks for PM & sorry for commenting so late.
I had some serious virus issues with my lappy yesterday
The title is nice - ENVY & POSSESSION
Without further delay i will try to read & comment simultaneously.
I always knew she is head over heels in love.Why this incident had to happen or should i say why u wrote such incident
I have some experience of bathroom crying & believe me it only worsens the pain that u feel.Though mine & nakku's reasons are different ,but i can connect with her.
Right from childhood she had to sacrifice each & every dream of hers but she was able to fool the world into believing that it didn't matter to her.But,in this case it is much more than just dream naa.Its her heart who for the 1st time felt something-LOVE.
The dream which she knows is never going to get fulfilled,but to turn into joke
,indeed that red colour is bleeding of her heart & with it too away all her remaining dreams.
I also have this question that Why her Kanhaji has to make her 1st holi experience so berang
Instead of bringing rainbow colours in her life it brought darkness like black colour.
I was expecting Dutta to be waiting for her.Funny naa,even though it is ur story,but sometimes i can visualise how certain character will react in certain situation.I think it says a lot about u as writer
.U bind ur readers in such a way that they feel they are integral part of this story.
I liked how he tried to lighten her up with his-pure mahulle ke paani se nahaya kya
By now without his realising ,he has started to understand her so well.Par gadhe ki tubelight hi nahi jalti
The way he was telling her about staying happythat is her right & don't pay attention to those ladies,i don't know but it reminded me of Jamima.How she was thinking that apart from Kala & her ,he is one more person who is interested in seeing her smile & happy.
But,unknowingly he is making it all the more difficult for nakku,with his every word, & physical touch
Nakku is breaking more from inside.I loved how he called himself bewakoof
Nakku once again tried to cheer him up,she cann't see him in remorse naa.How these two care for each other & yet this karwa karela doesn't realise his true feeling
Nakku thinking what her mom would have said about that scene & it made me emotional.Interestingly it reminded Dutta of his own mom & what she would have thought.Finally Dutta ke logics par uski feelings take over karne lagi hai,slowly hi sahi,but shruwat to hui.
Its so amazing that these two are so at ease with each other's physical gestures,its like natural for them.
I loved how pur rights se Dutta was telling her that she only has to make some food for him.Haiye abhi se Dr.saab ko Nakku ki kitni aadat pad gayi hai.
Kala is right in her own way,Dutta indeed didn't know what he did hold such a big significance in Nakku's life & small town me aisi baatein lightly nahi lee jaati.Kala as i mentioned in one of my earlier comments ,is indeed like Nakku's mom.Only she could see love in her eyes,yet no hopes of ever getting it.
But,Kishore surprised me,even though he speaks so less,but was bang on about Dutta.Dutta ko nakku ki aadat pad gayi hai & woh uss par pura haq jama chuka hai
The another line which caught my attention was-kitaab jyada nazdik ho aankh ke to akshar thikse dikhai nahi dete.
So true in every sense.may be sometimes we don't pay attention towards the ones who are so much integral part of our lives,it is only when they move slightly away we realise their true worth.
Chalo Kala is already planning to keep nakku away from Dutta & in process of finding a suitable girl,may be this will make Dr.saab realise his true feelings.
I loved the conversation between these two.Every talk between them is bringing them so close to each other.I laughed when he was telling her about his good habits & how Nakku was not believeing into his tricky words.
He made joke about her bak-bak & her dislike about green vegetables
,nakku is also no less called him -perfume ki dukaan
.These two are match made in heaven.
she actually called him ullu ka pattha & he accepted it seeing her anger,haila abhi se he is scared of her
Finally the much awaited decanter story is out,but u blew me over,never i had thought about this outcome.
I don't have any word for Rakshanda,unfortunately these type of career & success oriented women are there in our society & in every field & in my very short pharma career in UK ,i came across one such lady who not only was married,but had a girl of 6 yrs. age.So i feel Dutta's ex. is much better than the woman who i came across.
But,still it didn't sit well with me about how Dutta had one night stand with her knowing about her married status.But,then the type of life he lived till date,i am not surprised that he has no moral concerns.
I guess only after coming to small town & meeting a person like Nakku,he is seeing other side of the world which is not so gloomy.May be nakku has started the process of change in his character,otherwise had he been the guy who has no issues with sleeping with married woman,he would have never apologised to Nakku for his stupid behaviour & also never would have fought with those ladies for Nakku's sake.
But,one thing i loved in their convo. is how he is so clear that he is not concerned about past of his life-partner.That shows how mature & understanding he is.But,Nakku is also right,if their is love then there always is jelousy.
I hope what kishore said & what Kala is about to do will help Dutta realise his actual feeling towards Nakku which is no friendship but LOVE
Now,i hope the title which u gave to this update will indeed come true in next one
I don't like when u leave me speculating,i always end up biting my nails.So u see,for betterment of my fingers & nails u update soon
Edited by preety_219 - 28 March 2011 at 7:38am