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FF:Imperfect Perfections Ch32-Pg142(14.4)Last UD (Page 10)

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by niki11

Hey elysia just finished wid reading it ,very interestingClap was a lil confused by kala's behaviour but u justified it in the end .Could actualy imagine kala sayin all that ,surprising!!!!![it does say sumthin bout ur writng skills cud actually imagine kala in a positive light] Waiting for ur nxt updateSmile 
1NCE AGAIN SORRY SHILPITA AN HONEST MISTAKEEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


I  understand its an honest mistake girl but whats it with the confusing the name...LOL i think u forgot to edit the whole comment..LOL

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
This is an interesting and very touchy concept that you are treading with this FF as to the paradigm of beauty and its relevance to a vast majority of women as well as men, Shilpi. Lots of people often ask themselves questions as to why does it always seem that inner beauty, or beauty in personality and character is more often believed to be more beautiful than just outer beauty? As such, we will often hear people saying, "I'd rather have an ugly wife with a beautiful soul than a gorgeous woman with an ugly soul?" Should this kind of attitude towards beauty be followed? Or is it all just a sham as the basic insecurities and hidden prejudices that we all harbour within the recesses of our mind are actually so strong and influential that we end up pursuing the Barbies and the James Bond of this world. I am, actually, very curious, yet, very confident about the sensitivity and ability with which you will incorporate this element which will be the crux of the love story that will unfold soon. Am I right or am I encroaching on your thought process?
 
Shilpi, I am already enthralled, especially, since I have the impression that Dutta is already quite blase about his current lifestyle. I also love your version of Kala who has rightly assessed the psychological implications of a union between two individuals so diametrically opposed to each other that she feels so protective towards them and wants to shield them from any pains. That is very noble of her.  
As to Dutta let's see how he will deal with the platitudes about the greater beauty of inner beauty which always seem to me to overstate the case. But I do believe that something interesting does happen when we identify someone else as having "inner beauty," and that is whatever physical defects they may have deemed to become less important  and we may also find ourselves becoming more attracted to such a person (physically) than we were at first glance.
 
Look forward to Chapter 4....Sorry I could not post comments on Chap 2 but I hope you will understand.
 
Luv,
 
KavitaSmile

 



Edited by KavitaDR - 15 March 2011 at 5:22pm

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shilpita87

Originally posted by niki11

Hey elysia just finished wid reading it ,very interestingClap was a lil confused by kala's behaviour but u justified it in the end .Could actualy imagine kala sayin all that ,surprising!!!!![it does say sumthin bout ur writng skills cud actually imagine kala in a positive light] Waiting for ur nxt updateSmile 
1NCE AGAIN SORRY SHILPITA AN HONEST MISTAKEEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


I  understand its an honest mistake girl but whats it with the confusing the name...LOL i think u forgot to edit the whole comment..LOL
 
Ok wats wrong wid me ,cud this b more embarrassingD'ohgo ahead kill me shilpitaOuchalready dying of embarassmentDead.Noorie ne mazak me DSP mental hospital banaya but i think i need a real 1Ouch


Edited by niki11 - 15 March 2011 at 1:45pm

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
Hey Shilpi !

Morning couldnt get better as i receive ur pm of ur update !
we a huge grin i open the page and start reading it 

you know one thing i sense that this FF of urs going to be very unpredictable 
and i am happy that one thing which i guess got true !
Ch3: Hopes and Hurts

well in th start i didnt know what does it means 
but as soon as i start reading it , the title makes sense 
and i feel the the relation of hopes and Hurt !

A normal start to a normal day 
naku running to Kala home as usual !
loved the repo she shared with kishore ji too !
its like she is one of them !

beautiful setting of room giving the texture of rain !
But the convo of NIshant ji and shashi ji was the one which i never thought !

i thought its going to be some loser or a man with 2 kids is ready to marry naku 
but u took be by surprise when i read 
that shashi was here for dutta rishta !

the conversation they share is so practical and so simple as if u have stole a scene from a real event !
the way he describes his daughter to be normal 
no father could do that but  he want to make sure that his daughter heart should be ready for all rejections !
he doesnt want her daughter to fall for hopes and then got hurt !
so realistic but painful !

But Naku she is a girl a simple girl !
she is smiling at her foolish thoughts abt Dutta !

You know Shilpi the very next part i thought naku will decide 
she wont let that happen and give a big sacrifice 
but this para was a big reality check for me !
she did fall for hopes !
she didnt want to leave kala didi home 
at the time he want to come !
the way she asked his daddy abt money 
and the way she just ignore his brother and sister !
this is reality !
whtver she say how much she deny 
but something in her heart or a death emotion just woke up !

At the chori wala the way she was buying the chori and the dialogie 

 "waise bhi mujhe todi naa kissi ko yeh sab dikhana hai!'

this is it , she wants somebody to see this , she was just assuring herself 
nothing else !

this is line which just stir me 
when i got ready alot and always say im getting ready for myself :P
which is usually not the case !
its so me , a girl is a girl !
whatever she is or whereever she is 

OH GOd Shilpi 
this was bad she heard it , she heard all which she didnt want to hear 
atleast from the person she  loves !
it was painful !
may be kala word were based on facts but 
truth is not always sweet !
Naku has fallen staright on her face and the push is given by non other than she think will never reject her !

and Sonu when comes in room !
the chooriyan which she bought with alot of hopes are there shattered like her hopes !
though notyhing official, no body knows abt the rishta 
even she didnt met the guy 
but the hurt she is going through is immense !


Well i love the talks Of kala and kishore !
she got a very valid point but who will tell Naku about it !
she is right that Dutta is from different word 
but still a chance can be given 
(u know na i am a beliver of second chances and here she didnt have got a first chance )
and the last line in which Kala says 

.itney alag imperfect Jodi ho hi nahi sakti

but i am quite sure u are gonna make this impossible possible !

amazing update Shilpi !
You know im getting addicted to it !
it again a amazing piece of art !
the way u emote the emotion of naku !

You know what i just realized !
Tahts writing Harry potter , twilight , all those in which you have liberty to show whatever u want is easy !
But the story u are attempting to write is extremely difficult !
getting a story from normal circumtances is a huge job !

Shilpi u are again creating a masterpiece 
and this is what im sure about !

Its a pleasure reading ur work !

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
shilpi u started a new FF YAY!!! thanks for the PM btw

read ch1 and 2 will comment on the third later

liking how u kept Naku koyal permanently one qs does she have a uni brow here? she's so sweet working for others, how could she think has no talent shes an amazing cook is that not talent for her. 
so kala's good here that's nice for a change aww she's so caring and all the other sisters too they all care for their brother soo sweet. 
I'm guessing the TaSha will slowly fall in love, i can imagine them having a few tiffs at the begining and then falling head over heels for each other.

thanks again for the pm, will comment on 3rd ch once read, update soon. xx
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
chapter 2:
really like this side of naku....the way she opens up in front of kala.....loved the bonding b/w them...kala is truly a mother like figure for her....the way she was guiding her about how people are taking her advantage.....
duttas nick is tillu Big smile ....every time i read this name a smile came on my face imagining duttas face...its really cute :-)
and dutta made entry in this chp.....wow
and hes smoking....must be looking hawt Day Dreaming
" And I am a future client for the cardiac section".......this answer was so spontaneously given by dutta....really enjoyed it

Chapter 3:
awww....poor naku is already dreaming about dutta.....
really liked nakus dads replies....so realistic.....he knows his limitations.....
kishore is so much concerned about naku....glad he questioned kala about it....
and kala was worried for naku thats y she said no to the proposal.....considering they are completely opposite....but im sure this imperfect couple will live a perfect life together:-)
waiting for the shehri babu to come soon :-)

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
Nice update!

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by niki11

Originally posted by shilpita87

Originally posted by niki11

Hey elysia just finished wid reading it ,very interestingClap was a lil confused by kala's behaviour but u justified it in the end .Could actualy imagine kala sayin all that ,surprising!!!!![it does say sumthin bout ur writng skills cud actually imagine kala in a positive light] Waiting for ur nxt updateSmile 
1NCE AGAIN SORRY SHILPITA AN HONEST MISTAKEEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


I  understand its an honest mistake girl but whats it with the confusing the name...LOL i think u forgot to edit the whole comment..LOL
 
Ok wats wrong wid me ,cud this b more embarrassingD'ohgo ahead kill me shilpitaOuchalready dying of embarassmentDead.Noorie ne mazak me DSP mental hospital banaya but i think i need a real 1Ouch


LOL LOL LOL OMG..there is a DSP asylum....do the patients get to meet DSP....i may like to join u there then...its ok...yaaar....don't be so embarrased...LOLWink
LOL

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