Hey Shilpi !
Morning couldnt get better as i receive ur pm of ur update !
we a huge grin i open the page and start reading it
you know one thing i sense that this FF of urs going to be very unpredictable
and i am happy that one thing which i guess got true !
Ch3: Hopes and Hurts
well in th start i didnt know what does it means
but as soon as i start reading it , the title makes sense
and i feel the the relation of hopes and Hurt !
A normal start to a normal day
naku running to Kala home as usual !
loved the repo she shared with kishore ji too !
its like she is one of them !
beautiful setting of room giving the texture of rain !
But the convo of NIshant ji and shashi ji was the one which i never thought !
i thought its going to be some loser or a man with 2 kids is ready to marry naku
but u took be by surprise when i read
that shashi was here for dutta rishta !
the conversation they share is so practical and so simple as if u have stole a scene from a real event !
the way he describes his daughter to be normal
no father could do that but he want to make sure that his daughter heart should be ready for all rejections !
he doesnt want her daughter to fall for hopes and then got hurt !
so realistic but painful !
But Naku she is a girl a simple girl !
she is smiling at her foolish thoughts abt Dutta !
You know Shilpi the very next part i thought naku will decide
she wont let that happen and give a big sacrifice
but this para was a big reality check for me !
she did fall for hopes !
she didnt want to leave kala didi home
at the time he want to come !
the way she asked his daddy abt money
and the way she just ignore his brother and sister !
this is reality !
whtver she say how much she deny
but something in her heart or a death emotion just woke up !
At the chori wala the way she was buying the chori and the dialogie
"waise bhi mujhe todi naa kissi ko yeh sab dikhana hai!'
this is it , she wants somebody to see this , she was just assuring herself
nothing else !
this is line which just stir me
when i got ready alot and always say im getting ready for myself :P
which is usually not the case !
its so me , a girl is a girl !
whatever she is or whereever she is
OH GOd Shilpi
this was bad she heard it , she heard all which she didnt want to hear
atleast from the person she loves !
it was painful !
may be kala word were based on facts but
truth is not always sweet !
Naku has fallen staright on her face and the push is given by non other than she think will never reject her !
and Sonu when comes in room !
the chooriyan which she bought with alot of hopes are there shattered like her hopes !
though notyhing official, no body knows abt the rishta
even she didnt met the guy
but the hurt she is going through is immense !
Well i love the talks Of kala and kishore !
she got a very valid point but who will tell Naku about it !
she is right that Dutta is from different word
but still a chance can be given
(u know na i am a beliver of second chances and here she didnt have got a first chance )
and the last line in which Kala says
.itney alag imperfect Jodi ho hi nahi sakti
but i am quite sure u are gonna make this impossible possible !
amazing update Shilpi !
You know im getting addicted to it !
it again a amazing piece of art !
the way u emote the emotion of naku !
You know what i just realized !
Tahts writing Harry potter , twilight , all those in which you have liberty to show whatever u want is easy !
But the story u are attempting to write is extremely difficult !
getting a story from normal circumtances is a huge job !
Shilpi u are again creating a masterpiece
and this is what im sure about !
Its a pleasure reading ur work !