finally shil read the update,enjoyed it...yes loved the whole nuptial night sequence as we say in Punjabi 'meethaaa' bhu meetha! ki gal hai,wah bhi wah! It was very seductively written and most certainly brought out the sweetness and sugary part of the scene,very tastefully! Also loved the phrase you used when he saw her in the negligee 'safai' ,sums his thoughts quite ingenious. Her thoughts about herself ater the morning after were exclusive and very interesting and well put,so good one. The thought provoking conversation about his existing disbelief in religion ,shows a fore knowledge of what his wife will grapple with in their future. O ,I also loved the reference to NRIs,[cricket] and their take on viisting home and viceversa. The train bit was light hearted and amusing,especially as it reminded me our Dutta's bouts of impatient rage! Thankyou my mate for this packed with engaging ideas,once again very well written update... xxxyours hammie
thanks for the PMx
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