FF:Imperfect Perfections Ch32-Pg142(14.4)Last UD - Page 53

Originally posted by: shilpita87

I am almost scared to do this but....here goes...

Ahem Ahem attention dear passengers...apni khursi ki peeti bandh le because we will soon be taking off for Ch16..

Work on runway in progress....

i won't respond to bullying or bribes this time around..ask Vandu..i am on diet! so there...i make my stand!!!😳

very nice update

dutta was awesome ..... liked his confession

hi shilpita, Edited by Subii - 13 years ago

Hi subii,
First all thanks for all those heartwarming words about my amateurish writing. I sometimes wonder do i really deserve it or are u guys baised becoz its Tasha...the couple whom we all already love to bits...If its only that then my credit is belittled if not I am glad that i could touch some cords..

I wish i could get published someday...,maybe not the bestseller but a published author atleast.

Now I have a complain...why press only like....plz do write a few words....it gives me a feel if i have been able to convey my vision at all...like as u said in the dream he finally accepts his love for her..hence fresh from the dream and realization it becomes easy for him to let go and confess...partly coz he is still bothered and drowsy from his dream and memory of Uday trying to touch nakku..

I am glad it was noticed that Dutta realized it when Nakku in dream told him that he has lost the right to touch her and color her....that abeer scene was a build up for this scene..and that dream nakku had was build up for abeer scene...and the childhood incident between Angry teenage dutta and 8-10 yrs old nakku was build up for that dream....I always planned the confession to take place like this...with abeer/sindor playing a large role in it..

Also i wanted the two conflicting POV abt possessiveness and envy to play a major role here...Nakku  accepts Dutta's POV while relegating her life with Uday with a hope that maybe her new life would not have the shadow of her past-unrequitted love for dutta....and also she didn't feel jealous of her fiance's ex.

and that same dutta felt so much J and Possessive of his nakku that he couldn't bear it if uday tried to touch her even most innocently...reversal of thinking hai na!....just wanted to show that POV are never right or wrong they are just that Point of view of one person...we should try and accept them and not fight them to accept our POV as theirs...

Thanks and hope u do keep commenting...it does my little ego great wonders....i feel 10feet tall really due to all u wonderful ppl.


Edited by shilpita87 - 13 years ago

shilpita!!!!

Girl, you have outdone yourself! Take a bow!

The update was simply awesome! Loved it to bits!! What confession! The whole scene was penned down so beautifully that i could "see" it happening in front of me! Till you updated I was just getting more and more restless thinking of what you are going to come up with next! But what you have come up with just swept me off my feet! Never thought of an honest, beautiful confession of love, possessiveness and something much more beyond that I couldn't put my finger to!

Eagerly, eagerly waiting for your next update! Just a suggestion, if you aren't going to be mad at me! Can you please keep two three chapters ready? Publish one at a time but periodically? take a couple of days between your updates to see the reactions of people! You aren't writing exactly for the readers that you have to come up with a new track or twist and turn it to suit the requirements after reading the comments! After all you are the creator of the story and we should just follow your story and comment on it and not demand changes! Print media thankfully is quite crisp and the best part is that the writer is at liberty to stay true to his/her concepts unlike serial writers who are constantly under pressure from various sides to make the changes even at the last moment to accomodate people! Love and trust your views because the whole concept of the story, your philosophy, your life experiences are beautifully incoportaed in the story which not only makes it adorable, readable but cherishable too!

loved it completely ,plz update soon & shaadi band baraat detail too

Originally posted by: shilpita87

I am almost scared to do this but....here goes...

Ahem Ahem attention dear passengers...apni khursi ki peeti bandh le because we will soon be taking off for Ch16..

Work on runway in progress....

i won't respond to bullying or bribes this time around..ask Vandu..i am on diet! so there...i make my stand!!!😳

hey shilpi,

i am at loss of words for ur update...... just loved it to bits......... the beginning is awesome... u r an amazing writer........

both D n N are so made for each other....... wat more can i tell........ D is ready to change for N..... that was so sweet......... it is rare to come across such things in life!.....

superb, i just read it thrice alrdy...........

will now wait to see how this couple's relationship blossoms henceforth.....

tc
divya

Originally posted by: Zohran

BAKWAAS!!!😛

Originally posted by: kiran255

oh zohran 

grow up !😈

stop being a loser which u have proved timely !🥱

get a life !🤢

BAKWAAS!!!BAKWAAS!!!BAKWAAS!!!😛😛😛Edited by Zohran - 13 years ago