FF:Imperfect Perfections Ch32-Pg142(14.4)Last UD - Page 16

Wanderbug

@Wanderbug

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -madhvi-
hey i really liked ur ff......do pm me when ever you update ok?

hi madvi...
just added u in buddy list..thanks for the request and reading my tuuccha sa FF..defo will PM u.😃

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568986

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey shilpi sooo sory 4 not comentin i n mst of ur updates..hav read them but not got time to comnt...got soo much wrk.l..wil update as soon as i hav prepared to my presentation for monday

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Wanderbug

@Wanderbug

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x
hey shilpi sooo sory 4 not comentin i n mst of ur updates..hav read them but not got time to comnt...got soo much wrk.l..wil update as soon as i hav prepared to my presentation for monday

Best of luck for ur presentation....ohh..don't be sorry take ur time and comment when u are free...take care

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droopy_asleep

@droopy_asleep

Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

Nice update, I like the tashan from both sides and both not backing down...Lage raho :)

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

IF-Stunnerz

Posted: 13 years ago

hi shil

finally got to taste your ff... read chapter 18, well written stuff as per usual. Had to get my head around a taming of the shrew Nakku, and a fagging Dutta... so he's a quack is he? i wonder if he can cure coronary disease which is what Iam suffering from along side hypertension..... The bit where he shoves a ciggy in her mouth was so dread! mind you, her bit where she says he looked like a fire snorting bull did make me laugh. I also like that you compared him to an eagle,the king of feathered friends. Promise to read the next bit. is he likely to play doctors and nurses games with her.oops I guess that would be out of order. May be his nurse goes off sick and he takes Nakku to help him at his clinic, and she reeks havoc...sorry just a thought... Iam sure you'eve got plenty more from the rest came from.... cheers mate. Thanks for the fun you gave me.

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445800

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Posted: 13 years ago

Love u Shilpi kya update hai man karta hai bas padhti hi jao. Kitna lively hai, mujhe to bahut mazaa aaya.

Loved their tit to tat tricks on each other basically the war is full on. Ab aage kya hoga yeh jaane ke liye bahut intezaar nahin kar sakti.

Pliz do update soon.

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Vika

@vikadesigirl

Goldie

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Posted: 13 years ago

Shilpi,
How are ya girl??? hope well. thank you so much for this wonderful update and PM. I am so loving this back n forth pranks between dutta n naku............ it is so hilarious to think that everyone thinks that she is a sweet, innocent girl, but dutta knows better. oh man he burnt her curtains YIKES!! i can imagine smoke coming out of her ears when she saw that.......and the tea with salt classic move................ and the ending.................. when he puts a smoke in her mouth................ he is enjoying his vacation................ but yet i still think he has got a long way to know her.......

Update soon........... waiting eargerly literary on the edge...............

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blueopal

@blueopal

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 13 years ago

hey superbbbbbbbbbbbb update dear................
all tasha fight was like tom n jerry..............i loved that...........very interesting too..........
looking fwd.............

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Naina :)

@NainaSengal

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Ahhhhhh two spoon namak in chai.......🤢

but this part weere really funny.....

upload asap dear....

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Warda.

@Warda.

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 13 years ago

Loved the update :-)

such cute fights....these two are just like kids....

specially dutta....glad hes exploring the child inside him

But he had not anticipated that the girl with fight back blow for blow.....now he ll come to know whom hes dealing with...she is a worthy opponent :-)

he burnt the curtains....really liked that how naku was worried for kala s emotions ...wish he realize that too...

really enjoyed all the pranks played by them.....specially the live cockroach one....dutta is too much :-)

awww....but dutta is still asking for his bottle.....wish naku had kept it in a safe place...and do return him one day :-)

so dutta is now trying to find out who nakusha actually is....a wallflower or a spitfire...

glad he found a reason to stay...rest he was running away in a week...

waiting for more such cute moments...thanks a lot for the pm

OH and I loved the aao dialogue from DDLJ 😊

awsome update...i know my comment cannot do the justice😳

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