Hello Hello Hello !
Happy Holi shilpi !
Your Pm has risen my sleeping emotion in heabs and bounds !
I am so xcited fro what BOOM BOOM BANG BANG is coming my way :D
CH5:Battle and War !
Ahan my anxiety has reach to its maximum level !
I am sure I am gonna love it :D
Hmm so Naku finally give in , she still hurt but she doesn't want her lifetime relation to be at stake for something which has not happened !
Wise decision !
One thing Shilpi in this update u have write so much about food k I am hungry now :p
Anyways malpowa in amking !
I love how u described when kala first comes how Naku got mesmerized
(you know ur storie always take me to memory lane , their was one girl who lives near my khala house I was 10 when I saw her and in the whole party I keep staring at her ,
She was breathtaking beauty for me still is ,
Ts like sometimes u just fall for some one u wnt to be with them , u love their smell , u want to impress them uwith ur lil acheivemnts and don't ask if they give u anyting, its become exclusive only meant for you , (hope u don't find me stalker J )
Same the case with naku she does love kala and she also loved all her sibling back !
Love kala naku conversation
The most beautiful line Kala says to Naku is
"
meri ankho ke samne tera bachpan chala gaya..agar ab teri jawani bhi yun hi chali gai to main nahi bardasht kar paungi...main…."
a very strong statement
this has happened to a lot of girls !
they sacrifrices their lives for their younger brother n sisters
and unfortunately mostly don't get what they deserve !
nad wohooooo
Jamima and Abdul Maqsood tell me sachi sachi are u chasing me
U kow u have written it so well that I cn relate each and every one
Bear haering me
At my khala house there is their old servants Gul khan !
Man he is no servant he is owner belive the authority he has I think no body have that !
Once he was so pissed at us for drinking water and opening fridge time to time !
He locked the kitchen door !
Just imagine
So u know I am enjoying ur FF !
2 ways first cuz its written by u
Second I have experienced it :P
OMG SHilpi !
Dutta is such a brat , he has come for few days but he has make life hell of jamima:p
Btw I love spoil brats :P
And wooooooo he let Naku maek 5 cup of teas !
wo now there is a problem !
One line is running in my mind raeding this
Mehmaan ho mehmman ban k raho , malik bannay ki zaroorat nahi :p
Two days no encounter but Naku did mange to get in room and huh what she sees which she didn't imagine :P
But naku has got guts !
I am so loving Naku !
she throw his stuffin garbage
Haahhahahahhah
Love it :D
Omg No way the whiskey decanter had been a gift from the Dublin doctors' !
There is a very valid reason why Dutta is so mad !
But still his only fav companion is missing
He has o be angry !
Yayyyyy yayy yayyyyyyyyyy
They finally met Though definitely not pleasing meeting fro
them !
but definitely for me !
Naku is Naku she has become an expert chor :P
But for a good reason !
And wooooooooooooo
What an encounter !
Love ur describtion :P
hick hair dark as night fell in an unruly manner over his forehead. They were not long enough to fall on his eyes but they reached mid forehead and looked like he had been running his hands through them. His eyes had narrowed to thin slits making her shiver at their heat…so like the eyes in her dream, she thought. He had aquiline nose which flared at his intake of breath and wide lips twisted in distaste. There was a groW*H of beard which had passed beyond the stage of five o'clock shadow which she had seen her favorite movie star Hritik favoured sometimes. Yet the thick groW*H couldn't camouflage the dip of dimple on his chin. He was tall, very tall to her small insignificant self. She had to strain her neck to meet his fuming gaze. She tried to free her wrist but he tightened his hold on her hand a fraction just enough to let her know that he was capable of breaking her fragile bones in a snap.
Wohooooooooo I can feel shiver in my spine !
Gosh this is scary !
the man is cruel , he knows it and he is proud of it !
he love to show off his power !
woho Naku manages to say wow
im still scared she said it all !
love naku
love when she says its her room
(and my heart says Soon it will be urs and Dutta , sorry honey but I am in notorious mode after reading ur update ;) :P)
And wo she spit it out she has thrown his bottle
Dutta is mad with anger !
And naku did what !
She kicked him hahahhaha
Oh im loving it
The unpredictability !
Its awesome !
Dutta too shocked he never could have imagined
He will get a kick from a small town girl !
Love the way naku runs as if she is in olympis race !
And to the fact she got the pack !
Finally Dutta knows her pet name Naku !
And he is surprise and angry bith I guess !
he is pissed and enjoyed it too !
He is having double feeling about all the fiasco !
And girl he is kind of a lil sicko
In that few moments he has scanned naku tip to top !
Boys will be boys !
And wow wow wow
Shilpi I bow to u for this part
Naku loved teasing him
She broke his cigarette in fron of him
Ahhahahahahahha
Love Love lOve it !
Cant wait for Dutta's counter attack to prove his words
"This is war. And Dr. Dutta Patil always wins.'"
Oh Shilpi
Indeed a superb update !
I love it , enjoyed it went to my lost memory lane!
p.s dont mind my writing
i write on word doc first so its get all messy :P
