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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 2:21am | IP Logged
awesome ... cant wait 4 d nxt ... plzzz udate soon ....

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 2:26am | IP Logged
UGHHHH!! Muskiiii... Yahan kyun roka?
Oh Man! I hate cliffhangers.. UGH!
OK! What a shockingg Update.. but damn hot! haha Maan toh gaya..
Oh fish! what if Geet tells her brother abt the incidence.. Oh fish!
ok You gotta update soon.. I cant wait..

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Awesome!!!!!! plz.............update soon!!!!can't wait!!!!!

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 2:27am | IP Logged
omg........wat has gotten into maan................is he drugged r wat..............i thought he wud feel bad for kissing her in turn he is demanding her to kiss him............oh god i am surprised.............

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 2:29am | IP Logged

Babe this is not the correct point to end the part!!!

now u need to give another update soon.

more over love the part!!!

Maan is too smart nd clever,

usually we used to read that he will be regretting  his act,

but this is new...............love it!!!

wonderful update!!!!

now better start to write the next part!!!

it would help u hun,trust meWink

nd also us from bugging u the next part!!!

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 2:31am | IP Logged
loved it n the last line was the best n wow maan to be jealous of both his n her brother n even arjun poor guy just realised his love n already has got competition
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 2:32am | IP Logged
Maan is out of his mind for sure
The moment he is back to his rude self he will agn n curse himself for dng that where as heart will defend n say but it felt good hehehehehe
Geet is awesumest awesum
Bear lion n than thnking lions there or not hahahahaha
She is really fab
Geet kissing him back kahi wapas baja na de hehehehehehe
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 2:33am | IP Logged
lovely update...Clap
 
geet got scared n ran out screaming...Shocked LOL

bechara maan...couldnt even understand whats was going on...LOL

cant believe he loses control whenever he comes near her...well i think that the magic of geet..Wink

best part -- He knew what he wanted. It was attraction or anything else he didn't know and he no longer cared. All that mattered was he loved the feel of her skin; he loved the thudding of her heart against his, he knew what he needed. He got on his feet as he said "I'll tell you what I was doing"

n after this telling geet that she will do the same...Shocked

hate u for leaving us at a cliffhanger...Angry..Disapprove...now tell me when will we get the next part....

there is too much going on..maan falling for geet...he hasnt met his bro...his wedding plans with other manROFL by his family....lost in jungle...yash coming...arjun there...omg...how much more do we have to tolerate this...

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