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BitterSweet LoveStory Thread 2 MG FF (Page 108)

ninavi IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 11:51am | IP Logged
u rock dear ...
the pess of ur story maintain by u  is really brilliant Clap
noo need too festen or slowdown 
its jus perfect ...........
well i never told u guys bt i do write script 
bt on social issues
love stories r jus nt my cup of tea ...
dts why m fan of all FF writen by u guys Hug

nyways lovellyyy update as usual
well precap is sound interesting 
bt my bad luck kal se NO IF for me till May 1st
exam fever is jus started

so cyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa sweety Hug
keep writing ...........Smile

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Hmmm....Whatay date...Maan is going on a date and poor Geet has no clue at all...Maan has fallen for her like tonne of bricks....You should make Geet realise a bit too...she did in the last couple of updates- she felt safe with him etc etc...but maybe a bit more...maybe we need to introduce a jealousy angle here

Great update!Star
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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
WOWWWWW MUSKI WOWWWWWWWWWW
I WANT 2 GET STUCK IN D JUNGLE WITH MSK
HE IS JUST A DARLINGGGGGGGGGGGG
LUVED ITTTTTTTTTTT
N GEET OH GOD SHE IS STILL A SMALL CHILD MANY TIMES
LUV HER INNOCENCE N CHILDISHNESS
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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Guys . . . it has not even been a week since they met . . . i am sorry but Yash and Maan encounter as some of you want will take time . . . if you feel i am taking the story too slow please let me know but still Yash and Maan encounter will only happen once maan realises he is in love with her . . . please bear with me . . . i have things planned and i wish to continue it that way . . . it its boring please let me know i will change a few things . . .
 
dont change the pace its going fairly nice
and write what you have planned and the way you have planned
dont ever ditter, you are going nicely and wisely
and no Yash Maan encounter needed
they can always meet once Geet relises her love and Maan his
no hurry
 
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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
lovely update
Maan is in mood of date,Geet is so sweet with her innocence,nd her own rules from her own world.
Wonderful sweety!!!
BTW i too commented b4 1st.
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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
hmmm well it was a good one 


but one complain u r becoming lazy in this days to send pm u didnt send for the bridge also hope this is small complain 
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