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M&G: Mr Iyer & Mrs Khurana - CLOSED (Page 53)

arabianpaki Goldie

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 10:19am | IP Logged
I'm grinning and blushing at the same time!Embarrassed I absolutely loved the update!
Talk about foreplay..Maan is definitely a tease. I think so is Geet,  is her shy ways, so one can tell Wink  they're perfect for each other...its so surreal!
 I had to read it twice, cause the first time around, I was holding my breath thinking someone was gonna come, considering she has cousins who don't mind interrupting...phewLOL
This train ride is gonna be memorable ride! I've never been on a train, and I always wanted to ride in one ..and subways/metros don't count! Now I'm more anxious to travel on a train.. though I prefer traveling in one that doesn't have closed door ;)

Edited by arabianpaki - 04 April 2011 at 4:56pm

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Limerance Goldie

Joined: 28 February 2011
Posts: 1987

Posted: 04 April 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 6thElement

Originally posted by Limerance

Wonderful part! I love reading about all these rituals. It's so alien to me like it is for some of the other readers but that's what makes it interesting. I'm truly looking forward for the next parts since now they will be separated for a while.  Just curious is this going to be a short FF or end up being like NY times?

I guess the ritual part is a hit. I was scared that people will get bored as I get into the details, but its turning to be the other way round.

No this will be a short one...perhaps 30 updates. NY times is definitely different. And Rooftop is even more complex. Keep visiting and thanks for your comments.


Yes these rituals are wonderful to read about. It's very different from most of the stuff on the forum. As are your other works like NY Times and Rooftop. I love the complexity as you said. It makes one think and process the writing rather than it being an easy read which I what I love about all of your FFs. 
The latest update was amazing too. Maan is such a tease and Geet's attitude is adorable also. I wish I had time to write more but I have to get back to being productive. But thanks for the long update and keep writing!

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Ramhari IF-Rockerz

Joined: 23 November 2010
Posts: 6689

Posted: 04 April 2011 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
Thank you for the awesome update.
The train journey was beautifully written.
Maan was teasing her so much and she was hitting back at him.
The choice of saree was beautiful.
Geet always felt his effect now she also knows what effect she has on him.
Good for her.
First kiss part was lovely.
The way she confessed and the way he wanted to make it special for her were too good.
Hope it happens soon.

Ramhari IF-Rockerz

Joined: 23 November 2010
Posts: 6689

Posted: 04 April 2011 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 6thElement

Originally posted by Ramhari

Superb update. Thank you.
All the ceremonies were so beautifully described.
The papad one was really nice.
I wish we had that in our marriage too.
We had all the others and the scenario was pretty much the same.
The way Maan was feeling guilty and challenging her was very sweet.
Finally he got some time with her and the patti's phone call had to disturb.
The way he reassured Geet's dad while trying to make amends was beautiful.
Icing on the cake was Geet's thank you.
Waiting for more.
Happy Ugadi

Thank you for the wishes.  Glad you have liked them all.
The icing was my favorite too. Oh! yes he is such a sweet talker...I have made him that yes he will be the same to Daadi and everyone. 
Geet will have her own charm too.

Thank you for the reply.
Antares IF-Rockerz

Joined: 02 December 2009
Posts: 6377

Posted: 04 April 2011 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
Fantastic updates, Hasini!

Maan is such a tease.....but sweet as well. He though Geet was mad at him for bribing the pandit and suggested visiting her grandmother. The rituals were nicely much fun to read. Their budding desires and also their attempts to win....lolz.

The train part was great as well. They finally got some time to spend together, alone. Teasing, conversing, was thoroughly enjoyable. I am really loving the way it's coming on.

Do continue soon.

Edited by Starry_night - 04 April 2011 at 3:37pm
mitzi11 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 24 January 2009
Posts: 10767

Posted: 04 April 2011 at 5:35pm | IP Logged
beautiful story
& hilarious love it
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn
thanks pm
ajenn IF-Rockerz

Joined: 19 March 2009
Posts: 6419

Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
I jst found dis FF.
Superb update. First from the part geet's dad propose d marriage alliance news till the current train journey. Totally luved every inch in it. U explained every details so well.
I luv reading all the marriage ceremonies. It kept me entertaining..
But i nvr had seen those kinds of games over at my country.
WIsh 'ey do play over here. would be really fun to see.
The last update on train.Beautiful train journey.
Loved the way 'ey tease each other. Or better to say as foreplay.
Hope ull b able to come out wif such scene in palghat   as well. Its so fun to read.
BTW palghat  is in Kerala rite. Could u add on some Boat House scene. Wink

Plz add me into ur PM list. Keep writing.. Its wonderful
JRia IF-Rockerz

Joined: 25 January 2010
Posts: 6302

Posted: 05 April 2011 at 1:29am | IP Logged
hi hansini
lovedd jiya jale instrumental
loved the choice of pics
the part are superbly written

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