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M&G: Mr Iyer & Mrs Khurana - CLOSED (Page 52)

-Deepzz- Moderator

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Hasini....Thanks for the super long update......

What I love about Geetika is she is not at all coy.....She  teases Maan equally and is forthright with him talking dirty as foreplay .... She is honest in accepting she has never been kissed before....They are so much into heating each other up with desire in spite of 100 people around....So hot.....Blushing....Honesty and frankness adds that extra zest in any mating ritual........

mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 7:39am | IP Logged
wow maan is so so dreamy !!
zaara2212 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:14am | IP Logged
loved it Tongue

Oh gosh Maan can be so naughty Wink
-pixie- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:30am | IP Logged
Woohooo...Hasini, Whatay update Embarrassed..I am still blushing!

Loved it absolutely! Maan is such a know some of the dialogues reminded me of the time when Maan was pursuing Geet with a vengeance (around the time Pari entered the show)...Geet has also been able to meet him chaal for chaal so far LOL

and please what makes you think I loved NYT less than this????? Nahi...aise mat bolo....thats where I learnt and started writing loooooong comments...dont you dare chide me nowWink

I still think that they are in sync..they may misread each other sometimes (without which they will become pyshicLOL) but are broadly in tune, me thinks...

Why did the cycle scene make you angry? I was ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL on seeing Maan atop that cycle!
JayaR IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:54am | IP Logged
SUPPPEEERRRRBBBBB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Hasini.....

it was too good......

Tyro IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 9:13am | IP Logged

i'm so behind commenting on this FF...uff....D'oh...what to do now...ita 10 parts...god bahut jyada lamba ho jaayega....LOL

nahi nahi...chota comment for now....LOL...will get back to my long comments afterwards....

all the parts were awesome.....right from her dad telling her that she is getting married to the train journey....fabulous...Clap

loved all the marriage ceremonies n was a new experience for me.....i didnt know much abt it...n it was surely informative n entertaining...Embarrassed LOL

the dhoti tieing, the papad war, the ring game, the one where she sits on his lap....there were so many....i think i have to make a list......LOL

once again loved each n every bit....Big smile

the last update...abt the train journey....UNRESERVED......awesome.......Clap

they both were wanting to talk to each other....especially geet i think....Embarrassed

loved the way they were teasing each other near the gate...woh passerby ko bhi jab hi aana thaAngry..thoda baad me aa jaata...LOL..but haan wo public place u have to control...LOL

was glad that they found empty place to sit n talk...rather in their language....seducing each other....Wink

now both of them will go to sleep thinking abt each the past few no...only 1 hi din to hua hai unki shaadi ko..D'oh..i really need to concentrate on the update...LOL

cant wait for the next part...update soon....
johnangad IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 9:54am | IP Logged
as geet said, great "foreplay"!
arabianpaki Goldie

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 10:19am | IP Logged
I'm grinning and blushing at the same time!Embarrassed I absolutely loved the update!
Talk about foreplay..Maan is definitely a tease. I think so is Geet,  is her shy ways, so one can tell Wink  they're perfect for each other...its so surreal!
 I had to read it twice, cause the first time around, I was holding my breath thinking someone was gonna come, considering she has cousins who don't mind interrupting...phewLOL
This train ride is gonna be memorable ride! I've never been on a train, and I always wanted to ride in one ..and subways/metros don't count! Now I'm more anxious to travel on a train.. though I prefer traveling in one that doesn't have closed door ;)

Edited by arabianpaki - 04 April 2011 at 4:56pm

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