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M&G: Mr Iyer & Mrs Khurana - CLOSED (Page 50)

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
Fantastic updates, Hasini!

Maan is such a tease.....but sweet as well. He though Geet was mad at him for bribing the pandit and suggested visiting her grandmother. The rituals were nicely penned.....so much fun to read. Their budding desires and also their attempts to win....lolz.

The train part was great as well. They finally got some time to spend together, alone. Teasing, conversing, romancing.....it was thoroughly enjoyable. I am really loving the way it's coming on.

Do continue soon.




Edited by Starry_night - 04 April 2011 at 3:37pm

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 5:35pm | IP Logged
beautiful story
& hilarious love it
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn
thanks pm
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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
Beautiful.
I jst found dis FF.
Superb update. First from the part geet's dad propose d marriage alliance news till the current train journey. Totally luved every inch in it. U explained every details so well.
I luv reading all the marriage ceremonies. It kept me entertaining..
But i nvr had seen those kinds of games over at my country.
WIsh 'ey do play over here. would be really fun to see.
The last update on train.Beautiful train journey.
Loved the way 'ey tease each other. Or better to say as foreplay.
Hope ull b able to come out wif such scene in palghat   as well. Its so fun to read.
BTW palghat  is in Kerala rite. Could u add on some Boat House scene. Wink

Plz add me into ur PM list. Keep writing.. Its wonderful
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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 1:29am | IP Logged
hi hansini
lovedd jiya jale instrumental
loved the choice of pics
the part are superbly written
 
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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 3:46am | IP Logged
part 9 (3)
nice part....................Geet is falling for Maan...........cant blame her when hes shirtless.................sigh.......................
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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 3:49am | IP Logged
Really awesome continue soon.
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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 3:59am | IP Logged
part 9 (4)
very nice part..................the games were so funny...................
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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 4:17am | IP Logged
part 10
wow very nice...................they teasing eachother was very sensuous................cont soon.................

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