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M&G: Mr Iyer & Mrs Khurana - CLOSED (Page 49)

-pixie- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:30am | IP Logged
Woohooo...Hasini, Whatay update Embarrassed..I am still blushing!

Loved it absolutely! Maan is such a know some of the dialogues reminded me of the time when Maan was pursuing Geet with a vengeance (around the time Pari entered the show)...Geet has also been able to meet him chaal for chaal so far LOL

and please what makes you think I loved NYT less than this????? Nahi...aise mat bolo....thats where I learnt and started writing loooooong comments...dont you dare chide me nowWink

I still think that they are in sync..they may misread each other sometimes (without which they will become pyshicLOL) but are broadly in tune, me thinks...

Why did the cycle scene make you angry? I was ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL on seeing Maan atop that cycle!

JayaR IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 8:54am | IP Logged
SUPPPEEERRRRBBBBB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Hasini.....

it was too good......

Tyro IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 9:13am | IP Logged

i'm so behind commenting on this FF...uff....D'oh...what to do now...ita 10 parts...god bahut jyada lamba ho jaayega....LOL

nahi nahi...chota comment for now....LOL...will get back to my long comments afterwards....

all the parts were awesome.....right from her dad telling her that she is getting married to the train journey....fabulous...Clap

loved all the marriage ceremonies n was a new experience for me.....i didnt know much abt it...n it was surely informative n entertaining...Embarrassed LOL

the dhoti tieing, the papad war, the ring game, the one where she sits on his lap....there were so many....i think i have to make a list......LOL

once again loved each n every bit....Big smile

the last update...abt the train journey....UNRESERVED......awesome.......Clap

they both were wanting to talk to each other....especially geet i think....Embarrassed

loved the way they were teasing each other near the gate...woh passerby ko bhi jab hi aana thaAngry..thoda baad me aa jaata...LOL..but haan wo public place u have to control...LOL

was glad that they found empty place to sit n talk...rather in their language....seducing each other....Wink

now both of them will go to sleep thinking abt each the past few no...only 1 hi din to hua hai unki shaadi ko..D'oh..i really need to concentrate on the update...LOL

cant wait for the next part...update soon....
johnangad IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 9:54am | IP Logged
as geet said, great "foreplay"!
arabianpaki Goldie

Joined: 20 May 2008
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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 10:19am | IP Logged
I'm grinning and blushing at the same time!Embarrassed I absolutely loved the update!
Talk about foreplay..Maan is definitely a tease. I think so is Geet,  is her shy ways, so one can tell Wink  they're perfect for each other...its so surreal!
 I had to read it twice, cause the first time around, I was holding my breath thinking someone was gonna come, considering she has cousins who don't mind interrupting...phewLOL
This train ride is gonna be memorable ride! I've never been on a train, and I always wanted to ride in one ..and subways/metros don't count! Now I'm more anxious to travel on a train.. though I prefer traveling in one that doesn't have closed door ;)

Edited by arabianpaki - 04 April 2011 at 4:56pm

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Limerance Goldie

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 6thElement

Originally posted by Limerance

Wonderful part! I love reading about all these rituals. It's so alien to me like it is for some of the other readers but that's what makes it interesting. I'm truly looking forward for the next parts since now they will be separated for a while.  Just curious is this going to be a short FF or end up being like NY times?

I guess the ritual part is a hit. I was scared that people will get bored as I get into the details, but its turning to be the other way round.

No this will be a short one...perhaps 30 updates. NY times is definitely different. And Rooftop is even more complex. Keep visiting and thanks for your comments.


Yes these rituals are wonderful to read about. It's very different from most of the stuff on the forum. As are your other works like NY Times and Rooftop. I love the complexity as you said. It makes one think and process the writing rather than it being an easy read which I what I love about all of your FFs. 
The latest update was amazing too. Maan is such a tease and Geet's attitude is adorable also. I wish I had time to write more but I have to get back to being productive. But thanks for the long update and keep writing!

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Ramhari IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
Thank you for the awesome update.
The train journey was beautifully written.
Maan was teasing her so much and she was hitting back at him.
The choice of saree was beautiful.
Geet always felt his effect now she also knows what effect she has on him.
Good for her.
First kiss part was lovely.
The way she confessed and the way he wanted to make it special for her were too good.
Hope it happens soon.

Ramhari IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 6thElement

Originally posted by Ramhari

Superb update. Thank you.
All the ceremonies were so beautifully described.
The papad one was really nice.
I wish we had that in our marriage too.
We had all the others and the scenario was pretty much the same.
The way Maan was feeling guilty and challenging her was very sweet.
Finally he got some time with her and the patti's phone call had to disturb.
The way he reassured Geet's dad while trying to make amends was beautiful.
Icing on the cake was Geet's thank you.
Waiting for more.
Happy Ugadi

Thank you for the wishes.  Glad you have liked them all.
The icing was my favorite too. Oh! yes he is such a sweet talker...I have made him that yes he will be the same to Daadi and everyone. 
Geet will have her own charm too.

Thank you for the reply.

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