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M&G: Mr Iyer & Mrs Khurana - CLOSED (Page 23)

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 9:16pm | IP Logged

First of all sorry for not being able to comment on the updates I was busy playing catch up with work. Anyways as usual I'm left with few words after reading your writing. It was absolutely wonderful. The auto and dhoti scenes were lovely and quite funny. But the marriage rituals were  my favorite to read because I'm not very familiar with Tamilian wedding rituals and you did a great job of describing them. I'm looking forward to Geet's punishment for Maan which I'm sure will be unique! Thanks for the pm btw and continue soon! 

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
Thank you for letting us know when the next update will be. Will check back on the 20th
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 5:11am | IP Logged
FIRSTLY MY COMMENTS ON ALL UPDATES COMMONLY - FREAKING AWESOME N I WOULD DEFINETLY LIKE 2 COMMENT ON EACH N EVERY PART INDIVIDUALLY WHICH I AM GOING TO DO IT THIS NIGHT
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 6:38am | IP Logged
Brilliant story. Freaking awesome. Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Here My comments for Part 3 & 4-
The revenge part was funny but poor geet has to fill the buckets.....
but the most loving part was the way maan felt abt geet n thinking of her n accepting his crush/Love to his dad

Most funny part was Maan's DAD always saying that he has source to give info... the way he is spying maan .....


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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 10:01am | IP Logged
My Comments on part 5 , 5a, 5b-

I loved the conversation bet., Maaneet...

The formula part... exactly didn't remeber wht is that... but it really chaged the situations...
first that formula made geet sit in auto same as maan
next gave the idea who was geet dreaming abt.,

n loved every bit of their talkings....... they talked abt everything n nothing

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 10:04am | IP Logged
My comments on 6 n 7-

6th part is nothing but just a funny ..... how to dress up in dhoti

but i love to comment more on 7th part....

first simply WOW............ the way u explained each n every scene bet maaneet in the marriage the way she sit in his lap, the garland exchage, stealing glances .... every bit after geet see her real face of the groom
just sooooooo romantic n gave goosebums .......

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
great update...

pm me soon for updates...

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