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M&G: Mr Iyer & Mrs Khurana - CLOSED (Page 21)

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Frm part 4
all were fab
Loved how Maan's dad n Maan spoke abt it
Parents actully thnk worst wen it cums to their bachas
Maan n Gay hehehehehe
His dad was fab n he spiked him there also hahahahah
Adi scared the hell out of him
Loved how Maan helped her that tym also
He was in love wit her frm that tym for sure
Geet reason for puking was fab hahahahaha
Bechara Maan
I thought Geet will faint seeing Maan in his real avtar but she didnt
Infact she strted thnking abt his punishment
I really wanna c wat punishment she will give him
Loved their touches n blushes
Both are getting comfy wit each other
Dhoti part was also funny
Jeans under dhoti hehehehehehe
It reminded a part in Two states novel of Chetan Bhagat
Actually the marriage way is sumwat same lik it is in dat

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
Hasini.....am in love with your FF! It's just superb! It's so much fun.....lolz. Maan is such a tease.....and even Geet harboured some feelings for him.....unaware of his identity though. Their back story is amazing.....cute. At the end of the auto ride, Maan gave away that he used to help her with her studies. The way you pen it.....you make it all the more interesting! The auto driver must have had a great time.....lmao. Finally, Geet saw the real Maan.....lovely update that was! Can't wait for them to be alone.....do continue soon.
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 1:23pm | IP Logged

Here I thought that just being married was enough .. you notched it up by inter-caste and that too arranged ' Aha!

I can imagine.. Geet's family doing Balle Balle at the reception ...and Maan eating Idly with Jelly'LOL




Edited by -Aarya- - 03 October 2011 at 7:17pm
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 6thElement

Originally posted by Ramhari

Wonderful update. Thank you.Why is she running away when she is confident that she can make it work? I know that is for us to keep guessing till you post the next part.But you left us at a cliffhanger Haasini.I have to keep refreshing and racking my brain till I read the next part.


I will be updating in another 20 mts...This is the last part of..."The importance of being earnest" Then as pixie said, the marriage starts.


I am so sorry I could not stay up anymore and I hit the bed. When I got back this morning I was so lucky to get three updates. Thank you soo much . You are such an angel and a sweetheart.
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
Part 5
Geet's recollection of him and her puking was hilarious. She put Maan in a spot when she wanted to come wherever he is going.But our genius talked her into thinking again before making a decision and she was convinced. Wow all that was soo good. He gave a clue of his identity back. Nice part
part 6
Dhoti scene was so funny . None of the brainies could figure out how to put it on right. But the best part was jeans under and belt over it. Actually my brother used to do it .Not jeans under but always belt over the dhoti to save him from embarrassment. Cute part.
part 7
The marriage. You described the event so well. It was nostalgic. She must be really courageous to look at his face after all the events. She still chose to look and froze instead of screaming. That part was too good. And the way she decided to tease as a punishment was awesome.Their game of teasing and touching was really sweet.

Thank you for such wonderful updates
.Hug


Edited by Ramhari - 15 March 2011 at 2:51pm
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 5:12pm | IP Logged
I Love Love this concept!!! nowadays our real as in "reel" Geet is so sad and heart wrenching that I read this FF of urs to cheer up!
Thank youSmile
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 6:02pm | IP Logged
I want this to have a Love Button...The Best I have EVER read!Clap THANK YOU sooooo much!
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 6:06pm | IP Logged
sorry what is dhoti  dont know
anything about it but  i'm loving the story
even dont much about
hindi constume i'm learning
dont get me wrong because
i wasnt born in  india so just
went vacation once
fabulous update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnn
 
 

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