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Posted: 13 years ago
hey Here I go with my one liners for each n every part from part 9(2) to 10

Part 9 - war n peace series r sooo cool n funny.... simply entertainment package

Part 10 - is a first stepping stone  of maaneet's relation

simply superb way to write a sweet journey from beginning

just awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome hasini pls come sooooooon waiting for ur update........... pls update sooooooooooon.................... love u..........
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Posted: 13 years ago
@hasini... where did ya disappear again????
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Posted: 13 years ago
I think you're running into a lot of trouble if your idea of foreplay is, 'Brace yourself honey, here I come!'... Maan's desperation speaks louder then words...!!! 😆
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: night13

I think you're running into a lot of trouble if your idea of foreplay is, 'Brace yourself honey, here I come!'... Maan's desperation speaks louder then words...!!! 😆


Are you kidding? We are talking about geeky Maan here....😉 I'm sure he has come across Dr. Phil already. Though he doesn't hold a Ph.D there, I'm sure he will figure something out when it comes to practicality...given that he does have good enough theory running up in that nerdy brain of his. 

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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: 6thElement


Are you kidding? We are talking about geeky Maan here....😉 I'm sure he has come across Dr. Phil already. Though he doesn't hold a Ph.D there, I'm sure he will figure something out when it comes to practicality...given that he does have good enough theory running up in that nerdy brain of his. 



ohh!!! who says a geek is not a better lover...a geek is going to be better prepared, knows exactly how to please the girl in bed and will actually pay attention to her needs instead of trying to catch the early train back home..😆

ps:  I can give you 12 reasons why geek is better lover... and if you find one that fits that category.. do share! 😉
Edited by night13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyy,,,,,wen r u planning to update??????dyng to read more
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely updates.......wow MAAN in Palakkad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!wondering wats in store 4 us???????? how i wish they get lost and be away frm all the crowds in the forests of WESTERN GHATS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉
Posted: 13 years ago
Part 11: Returned Favors

She had turned to catch a glimpse of him before she boarded the sumo that had come to take them to her granny's place. And he felt it was an imperceptible usher to have him sweep his step alongside her rather than the ambassador he was about to take. Did he even read her indefinite gaze right?

Partly he didn't know how to behave when her people were swarming around like flies, buzzing them and then there was his bride. He was still a novice at reading what her every look meant and given that he had minimal exposure to the opposite sex, he thought it was better to give up the decipher-her-look game and board with his fellow men.

They didn't treat the newly weds like they were man and wife, at least not according to him. He wondered why they had such morbid fascination towards grouping the women and men together like they were gearing up for the battle of sexes. He wished it were true, for it would at the minimal offer some fun and frolic to the grim environment that always prevailed. And now as he sat amidst five other men, of which were three very dour and poker-faced uncles, a sleepy Adhi and the tight-lipped father-in-law, a vague movie scene of a death row prisoner in shackles, surrounded by a few uniformed cops came to his mind. It was all quite symbolic now that he was married and all. So before any more of such emblematic scenes started flashing like that of a slide show, he wanted to break the silence.

But just as the first syllable escaped him in a low grunt, the sumo screeched to a halt. Well that was a very short drive. They had reached the destination even before he could take in a view of this exotic place and all things coconut. Even then he didn't miss out on the experience entirely, for what greeted him outside was a rustic and quaint mansion, which screamed the message loud and clear that he was indeed in god's own country. The air was still damp from the late night showers, and moss of prickly pepper green color adorned the walls of the house, suggesting it had been a wet season there for quite a while now. Although the building stretched monstrously in width, a very rectangular design indeed, the not so clean beige look and dull red tiled roof, made him feel he had slipped into a century that marked a period of traditional architectural extravagance; a time long before his own. There were no fence or wall engulfing the house, a very boundless structure in every sense had its immeasurable energy flowing into its surroundings, in sorts that it all connected and swirled like being its own universe. Lush green plants and coconut trees waved up and down in a swift breeze as they playfully entertained the infant river facing the house, that cooed and tittered while tickled by buoyant canoes lining its shore. The light, still befitting to be descried as early morning twilight gave a warm fuzzy glow to the location. He had a very good feeling about the place already.

He smiled - and she did too - as she joined him at the ornate and intricately carved crafty door as they awaited one of her relative to complete the Arthi. Still gaping with awe, he entered the mansion with her by his side, followed by the rest of the troupe that had travelled with them from Chennai. The activity inside picked up as they strode past the lengthy hallway and was led into an open rectangular courtyard surrounded by columns of pillars on either side in the lower level. The upper level had a balcony or a porch running around the perimeter with a few of her other relatives leaning in to grab a look at the new member of the family. He could not help notice the inestimable number of rooms in the first floor giving an illusion of a mirror image repeating in ad infinitum; like he was part of some alternate reality, the one he had read up in Alice in wonderland. Strangely it gave him the feeling of standing inside the coliseum in Rome, only this was Indian style and that any minute her kin were going to raise their thumbs up or down deciding his impending doom for such were the judgmental stares he now received.

To his right was a raised platform where a pleasant old woman lay in a stringed cot padded with thin layers of mattress. She must be it; the lady in question for whom he had been a martyr and sacrificed his first night with her. Although he had no complaints about their fun and romantic train journey, he still felt, he could do with more. Man and their insatiable appetites!

She ran to her grandma at once and lunged on her forgetting he was still very much in the vicinity. It was a scene just like in the movies; she kissed her, her granny kissed back, tight hugs, puddles of tears, cheeks being pinched interspersed with gleeful laughter and with all the elements of warm effervescence that is shared only between grandchildren and a generation of greying elders. He was partly wrong, for the same affectionate look was extended to him now - after all he was privileged too  - at least that is how Tannu paati made him feel.

Her silver strands and many soft folds on her face spoke her age and he kneeled by her side. She sat up to have a closer peek at him when at the same time he bent down to touch his feet. Holding his cheek, as she adjusted her square thick lens glasses, she curiously studied him. He smiled even wider as she pursued her not-so subtle act and Geet immediately broke into a laugh and cut in; the whole set up leaving her flushed in the cheeks.

"Paati...please...ningal veedungo avarai (Please leave him)"

He has to get used to it, she thought. She constantly observed for a sulk or a pout but all she got was his same old trademark smile. He was not just putting up with the inquisitive and eccentric relatives of hers, but he was trying to blend in and crack up jokes to mingle. The revolting frustration and hopeless images of the previous week, flashed in her eyes making it all seem like memories of a distant past, even better, like they had not been part of her life to start with. She wondered if all this would even still be a part of her reality had she acted upon her idea to storm out of the house in that indecisive moment. It had all come to her in good time.

Once the pleasantries were done, her mother came to inform them of the plan for the morning. Being the newly weds, a status that would last them at least another couple of months, they were to have a ceremonial bathing together over a chandan ceremony and carry a kalash and offerings to the family temple in the same wet attire to be solemnly blessed. He didn't know what to make of it and she was quite surprised. She had seen the other couples in her family carry out the tradition, but when it was her turn it had completely escaped her and now she colored a deep scarlet. Everyone settled upstairs and each got his or her own room. The rooms adjacent to his were still plenty empty and yet she had taken the room diagonally opposite from him.

Picking up a towel he came out into the balcony that overlooked the courtyard. One of her cousins had directed him towards the bathroom, which was located by the end of the hallway, the same side of his room and he now strode in that direction. Clearly it was occupied and he knew it was her for she had broken into a song spontaneously. He was lost in her sweet voice, but some nature calls could not be left at bay for long and so he called out to her from outside.

"Oi...jaldi kar..." She exited in another few minutes; her classic blush and smile coming up almost involuntarily. Just as Maan was about to enter, she stopped him in a small voice.

"I almost forget...the door locks are jammed...you gotta sing if you want to keep your modesty" Towards the end her words turning out into a whisper.

"What?" His jaw hung low in shock as he took in the news.

"Oh! crap...Forget singing, I can't grunt properly" he cried out.

"Sorry...can't help. I need to get ready for the ceremony" She informed and left him with a giggle and a predicament. It was indeed one. Singing was never his thing, he had always been the break a leg person and now for the life of him, he would attempt the unthinkable. The next step was a crucial decision, which being the song he would murder with his own sense of cacophonous melody. He chose the title song of the Titanic, knowing well he was sinking either ways.

So it began...every bit lacking harmony and rhythm, he dragged on the evergreen love song that even the Amazonian bull frog- noted for its gruesome croak - would not want him to sing for its own funeral. And so it went on for a few minutes more, leaving him with nothing but revulsion at his own discordant tune. "Uff!" he sighed loudly, washed up with a bar soap nearby and opened the door to be launched into a full-scale embarrassment.

There was complete silence as all the pair of eyes surrounding the entrance shrouded him with mortification. From 2 feet to 5 feet, every one of her cousins stared at him in disbelief. He continued to dab his wet chin with the towel on his shoulders, as his eyes widened at the small army she had arranged to catch him off-guard. Turning to check the doorknob immediately, he realized it was a well laid out scam for him. Very well then, he had trusted her blindly. He had to give it to her for this time around as a silly look showed up on his face.

In a family of rich musical heritage, they now had a misplaced brother-in-law. She was there in the middle muffling her laughter within the palms of her hand. Struggling to control the same, she swung both her hands like that of a music conductor as she eyed him; a friendly vengeance gleaming in her eyes.

"Ready?" She looked to both her sides "One...two...three"

It was the last thing he expected, but breaking the web of silence in the house, the minions started the same song he had sung moments ago. Only this time it was every bit in tune and mellifluous like a trained symphony. They couldn't sing like him, even if they tried very hard at it. He colored at once, his eyes lowered in discomfort, a vague and unsure smile entertained the others, while he shook out his ears with his index finger as they shot up in soprano. He laughed to join in and rounded them to play catch, when they all dispersed and picked up a run. She had luckily escaped, running gallantly in the hallway and now turned to catch a look of him, her anchal billowing in the air, a gentle swinging of her waist, her lush hair swaying as black billows was some sight to him. He stood there in a trance, the enchanting spell that she cast on him spiraled him down a path of need for her. He would have chased her if not for her mom, who showed up suddenly from the side of the winding staircase, right that instant, he had put forth a step in pursuit.

He retired to his room and fell on his bed as he lived through those coloring moments at the bathroom. He smiled and reveled at how his wife indeed was matching up to his level of mischief. Somehow while he was lost in her thoughts and when reliving last night's train journey, sleep had come to him and he had dozed off unsuspectingly.

She had showered in the meantime, clothed in the traditional mundu (Kerala style of wearing a sari) and came back to knock on his door.

True they were to have a ceremonial bathing before leaving for the temple, but no woman of the house would touch them for the chandan ceremony had they not showered previously. Well at least that is how orthodox her family was once they touched Palghat and he would have to live with it for one day.

"Maan..." she knocked slowly at first and then her calling grew louder when he didn't answer her first few calls.

He finally did and when she saw that he was still in that same blue kurta, she gasped weakly and realized that no one had told him about the other bath he should have finished by now. They were to go down in a few more minutes and here he was standing coolly, rubbing his eyes to clear out his blurry view.

But while she had made sense of his state, he had looked to either sides and had grabbed her arm instinctively.

"Oh! Maan..." she yelped as he pulled her inside his room.

"Leave me...I have already bathed" He was confused at her statement.

"Oi...I thought we were doing it together" He winked and smiled at her; his arms went around to encircle her. This was not the time for his frivolity and the urgency got to her mind first before she could give in to his ardent hold.

"No...No...You can't touch me until you bathe...that ceremony is in another few minutes...go bathe Maan" She struggled and tried to wiggle out of his hold. Her lips curved into a frown as she registered that she would have to bathe again too. This was cruel than untouchability; she cursed her own customs. Anyways they never made sense and yet she conformed keeping in mind her other family members.  

"Look at what you have done...Now I need to take a shower again" She backed out of the room much to his dismay.

Grudgingly she walked back to the bathroom to correct the mishaps from minutes ago. After she was done with the second shower, she hurried back the stairs to get to her room. She still had to tie her mundu properly. She swore, she could hear her mom calling out to her already, while she still needed time to get decent. As she gained height and looked behind to see if he was already downstairs, she bumped into someone unexpectedly.

Oh! lord, he screamed mentally as he saw her clutching her saree ends to her chest. Her wet skin and damp hair made her the very object of his affection. Losing her balance momentarily, which was perhaps bound to happen more often now that he was in her life, she leaned backwards as she slipped further from the impact. He grabbed by her waist, of course intuitively following through on his cue to rescue his damsel who was losing her sense of equilibrium altogether at the sight of him.

Yet again, before she could shrivel in his partial embrace, frustration took over in her.  He was still in his blue kurta with a phone on the other hand. "Argh!" she cried in exasperation, as she clutched her crunched up sari folds tighter.

"Suno Geet..." he screamed as she turned back and went back the same path she had come. No point going up to her room, was there?

And so she surfaced out of the bathroom after the third shower, once she made sure the coast was clear of him or even the likes of him. At this rate, she was going to get those wet rashes all over, given that the ceremony had lots to do with water too. She scurried up to her room and closing upon the door hastily, she rested her forehead on the same and took a relaxing breath. She needed that gulp of air to calm her nerves that were growing wearily worrisome of the delay that they had already been caused. Hanging the towel on the peg, she combed through her hair and looked for her pallu piece of the mundu. She went through her clothes she had just carried back. This can't be, she cussed under her breath. It was all going wrong that morning and she was becoming a wreck. How could she be so mindless and leave her mundu behind in the bathroom?

Just then she heard a knock at the door. She cried out to enquire out who it was, but there was only silence for a response.

"Hello...what is it?" She questioned once again to find out whomever it was banging loudly at her door. When the sound almost promised a headache to her, she decided to open a crack and see find out why the sky was falling down. She grabbed her towel to cover her torso and midriff and opened a crack to peep outside. It was of course him, holding out her white with gold border pallu piece in mid-air, waving it casually for her attention.

"I think you are missing this" he hoisted it further into her face.

He had finished his own shower in the second bathroom and had rushed upstairs, when her 8 yr old cousin had come running to him. She had thoughtlessly dumped the task of passing on her pallu piece to him and had disappeared in a jiffy. He only felt too obliged to do so and so here he was at her doorstep.

"Oh! Thanks Maan" she said as she extended her arm out to grab the essential piece of her clothing from him. But he was in no mood to give away easily and did what he did best, which was to pull back.

"Ah! not that easy Geet..." He gave a teasing smile and his eyes twinkled in vain glory as he tackled her arm that hovered around him, anxious to retrieve what was rightfully hers.

"Maan no games please...we are already late and you made me shower three times today already" Her fake hiss and a cry coming out as a yelp of a hurt puppy.

While they playfully argued and he ducked out of her grabs from the crack between the frame and door, she heard Meera calling loudly for her. Matters got worse, when she heard her come up the stairs. It would only prove detrimental if she would so much as catch a whiff of Maan around her and what was to become of her, if she sighted him with a principle article of her clothing. Did he know what he was holding?

He had very naively thought it was a long towel, when he had seen the plain white-bordered cloth. There was nothing to blame of him, for it only did look like a high-end towel.

She had to act fast and in that spur of the moment, she had done the implausible. Clutching him by his wrist, much to his delight, she yanked him inside while she opened the door simultaneously and shoved him behind her. In a moment the door was closed and awkwardness at it's highest was out to grip them grimly.

He had the no idea of what was about to hit him when he had jerked and landed indoors. It all happened so swiftly, that one moment he was outside, then the next he was ogling at her low cut blouse and a bare view of her waist. There was a real need to check his pulse, as he realized she was scantily dressed. What was this style? He wondered. He had never seen women clad sari like a Dhoti and why did the piece of cloth in his hand matched the same border design her sari had? Was this even a sari? So many questions escaped him, but they were all plopping up inside his head and went up in a poof of smoke. Such was the effect she had on him, when he spotted a drop of water slide down from her shoulder down the smooth curves of her back. He wanted to kiss her right where the goblet had slid down, but something held him in palsy.

His piercing eyes torched her back, as she blamed herself over what she had done. Her gaze lowered automatically, her pulse picked up the speed of a galloping horse, while she cowered just at the thought of all the possibilities that could happen in the room crossed her mind. She was right and he lost no time, when he ran down his hands over her waist and moved forward to hold her closer. She moaned at the touch of his skin on hers, a fire blazed her chest when at the same time a thousand butterflies flapped its wings around in the pit of her stomach.

A stiff tingle ran up his spine as he locked his fingers over her waist. His eyes closed as he brought his nose to take in the scents of her wet ringlets bunched up by her shoulder. The towel that covered the front of her blouse hung over her other shoulder and his hand itched to pull it out straight. Whatever happened to all that talk of waiting until their other wedding for that first kiss? It was all ashes, when he knotted the tip of the towel over his index finger.

The tension on the cloth as he tugged from behind teased her. She shriveled under his breath that softly stoked her nape. She swooned at how his fingertips grazed the top of her skin around the curve of her hip.

Her moan turned into a low grumble and she didn't know if she should stop him. Was there a question? She tried to make sense, but a coherent thought was far from her grapple. The explosion of sensations inside her, all new and sensual had her fall back on his chest and her hand closed over his passionate hold by her waist. This only made him even more sensitive to her breath that landed by the side of his inner collar. He was infinitely affected by their closeness as an uncontrollable rage to kiss her nape picked up in him.

Just as he was about to act on that thought, a loud thud had landed in their ears to wake them out of the misty haze they were under. Both of them jerked in each other's arms and she had moved forward a few inches away to answer the call.

"Sollu Meera (Tell me Meera)" She stuttered now.

"How long? We are waiting downstairs"

"Yes...I'm coming"

"Where is Maan? He is not in the room"

She slightly turned and gushed, while he smiled and rubbed his forehead.

"I don't know...saw him walk outside with his cellphone" she said while she listened keenly for retreating footsteps.

They had listened for a bit too long over being extra cautious. When he had been convinced they had no knocking intruders, he had extended his arms once again to grab her. She had slapped him on his fingers and had fought him to push him outside. It wasn't easy, as she strived to keep her towel in place and with the other hand drove him out of her room. He gave up eventually and only then she had been successful in having the room to herself.

She breathed in short gasps, as she paused to soothe her frayed nerves. When the jitters evaporated slowly, a prompt smile crept up her lips. He was very good at returning favors, she concluded. She shook her head in disbelief over how close they had come to being caught and taken for a ride by her cousins and at all that could have happened behind closed doors. The list was countless for now.

Ok...I did it again...A long one. Hope you like it. Please comment, post. Like button as always?

Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
All the angst over the missing piece...😳


The pallu is a separate piece. The rest of the sari worn with very minimal pleats.

Image of the house.


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Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago