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<3 A Birthday Surprise! A SG OS!! <3

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Hey Guys,
This is my first hand at an OneShot..
I hope it turns out to be good..
This thought came in to my mind about our lovely Sajan.. You all are free to criticize.. I know it will not be so good!
Sorry to disturb you guys..
 
Character Sketch (it's an OS but you will be confused!)

Gunjan &Samrat Shergill: Our sweet SaJan!Embarrassed

Suhani Chapekar: Samrat's twin sisterSmile

Adhiraj Chapekar: Suhani's husband

Sneha & Abhilasha Chapekar: Adhaani's daughter

Indraani Shergill: Samrat's mom!

Mayank & Nupur Sharma: Gunjan's brother and sister-in-law

Rajat Sharma: Gunjan and Mayank's elder brother (elder to Gunjan by 15 years and to Mayank by 10 years) {Only specified in a dialogue.. Not in the oneshot!Smile)

Mughda Chapekar Sharma:  Adhiraj's elder sister (15 years) and Gunjan and Mayank's Bhabhi

A perfect start to a morning...

In the kitchen, we can see a girl humming to herself while preparing the breakfast. Clad in a pretty purple Sari with the world's most beautiful smile playing on her lips' Well for her husband though! She is Gunjan Shergill. Wife of Samrat Shergill!

She then goes upstairs and opens the door to their room. Just to find her lazy husband still asleep. She sighs, goes in and keeps the coffee on the side table and thinks of a way to wake him up. The world's most difficult task. Even beats the task given to Hercules in the Augean stables' 

She bent and whispered in his ear with her sweet angelic voice..

G: Good Morning Samrat..

He smiled in his sleep and turned to the other side..

G: Come on Sam! Get up fast.. I want you down in 15 minutes all ready or your morning and night kiss is cancelled for 5 days!


Samrat got up in a jerk and then slowly rubbed his eyes Day Dreaming

S: Not Fair Chashmish! Let me at least sleep late on a Sunday morning!!Ouch

G: Samrat it is already 12:30, how much more do you want to sleep?

S: Only 12:30??? Before marriage I used to sleep till 4!

G: Not anymore sweetheart! LOLAnyways, today Bhai and Bhabhi are coming home for lunch! {Mayank is 5 years elder to Gunjan and is her brother}

S: (murmured) OH SHIT! Again those Kabbab-Mein-Haddis!Angry

G: Did you say something? (Suspiciously)

S: (innocently) Can I ever say something to you? Anyways, leave that Darling! I want my Good Morning Kiss!Embarrassed That will make up for the interruptions you called for lunch!

G: Nope! First get ready and then morning kiss! Drink your coffee or else it will get cold and then you will scream at me!

S: Ok Jaan! But I won't scream at you! It's not possible in any birth!
G: OK fine! No more butteringWink.. I am going down to lay the breakfast come fast!

Gunjan gets up when suddenly Samrat held her wrist!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

S: Not so fast sweety.. At least take out my clothes! You know I only wear the clothes you decide! I have been doing this since the last 2 years!Wink
G: I know! They are in the bathroom already!Smile Won't give you a chance to flirt!!Wink Go and get ready F-A-S-T!!

She gets out of his grip and goes down running..

(FEW MINUTES LATER)

Gunjan was setting the table when suddenly two strong arms encircled around her waist! She smilesSmile

G: So! You ready?

S: Obviously (nuzzling his nose in her neck!)

G: Come on let's eat our breakfast!

S: (nuzzling in her hair) you did not have it yet?

G: Samrat you know I don't eat without you! I have been doing this since the last 2 years (mimicking Samrat!)Wink

Ting-Tong!

S: (to himself) there comes the famous Nupur-Mayank! I wonder if they have their own work or not! Huh' Always come between me and Chashmish.. I hate them..

G: Oh! Finally.. Samrat leave me I need to open the door!
S: No.. I won't! You broke your promise.. Give me my morning kiss and then I will leave you!
G: No Samrat!
S: Oh! So accept the fact that you like being in my arms..

G: I doEmbarrassed but it's not the right time Mr. Shergill!

And she surprisingly kisses him on his cheek..Shocked

S: Thank You Madame.. I'm honoured!

They both share a hearty laugh and join their foreheads. But got interrupted with another 'Ting-Tong!'LOL

Samrat left Gunjan and went to open the door.. Gunjan smiled to herself as she knew about the surprise for Samrat!

She started to lay the table!

(OTHER SIDE)

Samrat opened the door and found Suhani, Adhiraj and Indrani (his mom) standing right in front of him with his 2 little nieces Sneha and Abhilasha...ShockedShockedShockedShocked

All: Happy Birthday!SmileBig smile

Sam was left in tears when he hugged Suhani...

S: Same to you Suhani.. Aww!! (they are twins remember!)

Su: Thanks Bhai! So??

A: Even we are there!
S: Oh yes.. How can I forget you JEE-JU Wink(Adhiraj hates to be called that!)Angry

A: Oh please not again!Angry

Ab: Come on dad! What's the harm in it? Anyways, Happy Birthday Mamu!Smile

Sn: Yeah Happy Birthday.. (Looking up from her Mobile, I meant Suhani's)LOL

S: Thanks Sneha and Abhilasha..  And mom I am expecting something! (matter-of-factly)Ermm

I: Happy Birthday beta! Where is Gunjan? And won't you let us in?

S: Oh yeah! I forgot! (hitting his head)

Soon all came in and Gunjan came wiping her hands..

G: Hi Suhani, Adhiraj.. How are you Sneha and Abhilasha (pulling their cheeks) Namaste Mom! (folding her hands in front of them)

Sn & Ab: Hi Mami!Smile

A: Hey Ginny (Gunjan's pet name!)

G: Oh yeah Happy Birthday Suhani and Samrat!
I: You did not wish him? Anyways..So how was our surprise Sam?

S: Mom! It's awesome!! I can't find words to express my happiness!
G: So, felt nice meeting them.. Even I get a little credit! (Turned her head to the other side and saw Sneha)

G: Sneha, at least stop playing today!

Sneha keeps the phone down and smiles at her!Smile

Su: Bhabhi, I am trying to explain her the same thing since the morning.. You said it and she heard you in a minute!

Sn: Because she said it sweetly, you always scold and say it! Hu-h!Angry

A: Only Ginny knows how to handle kids.

G: Adhiraj stop calling me Ginny..

S: Why? It is such a sweet name.. But yeah, I am always reminded on Guinea Pig whenever he calls you that (Hi-5s Adhiraj and they both start laughing!)LOLLOL

G: Oh Yeah! Then Adhiraj, shall I also call you by your pet name which I kept? (Gunjan knows him since they both where 5 )

A: No need' (quickly)

G: Why not lollipop? LOL You know Suhani, when Bhaiya and Bhabhi where getting married. Mr. was busy eating lollipops.. He changed it in every hour. Check out the pictures, every alternate picture of his consists a different lollipop! It looked like he was endorsing Lollipops..LOL

A: Uhh.. Ginny umm.. {trying to say something..} (the bell rings 'Ting-Tong')

S: Must be Mayank and Nupur.. I'll check..

G: You sit, I'll open the door'Smile

Mayank and Nupur enter..

M&N: Hi! Happy Birthday Samrat and Suhani!!Smile

S&Su: Thanks Mayank and Nupur!

N: Looking handsome Samrat..Wink
M: Uh, Nupur.. He is my Jiju..
N: By God Mayank! Tum kitne jealous ho..
M: Chup raho Jhansi Ki Rani..
I: Bas bacho..
 
And so they all have fun, enjoy and tease each other but Indrani was there to cease the fire if someone started fighting..

Soon the cake arrived and all sang the song for Suhani and Samrat.. They fed each other and their spouses the cake and all had fun..

Everyone departed..

(AT NIGHT)

S: Thanks Chashmish! This was the best Birthday I ever had! Thank you Jaanu!

G: Samrat! No need to say Thanks!

S: Where is my gift? (naughtily)

Gunjan undertood.. And then Samrat and Gunjan then attached their lips to each other's. softly brushing them.. They left after what looked eternity..

G: Happy Birthday Sweetheart!

S: Thanks.. This is the best gift ever!!  

And they slept in each other's armsSleepy

                                  *END*Smile

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Feel free to criticize! 


Edited by SajanRox - 12 March 2011 at 9:13am

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 7:57am | IP Logged
Congo dear! Party
It was not bad at all!
Lovely OS! 
Keep writing more and more!
You rock! Embarrassed
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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Superrrrb OS manji... Hug   Hug  That was shooo cuute and sweet... Blushing Blushing
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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 8:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nishi_sajan

Congo dear! Party
It was not bad at all!
Lovely OS! 
Keep writing more and more!
You rock! Embarrassed
 
Thanks Nisha....
Your comments are very valuable for me and also inspiring..
I was inspired by reading your OneShots.. I love them!!
Thanks Dear!!
Smile
You left me teary-eyedCry
 
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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 8:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by CandYlicious_SG

Superrrrb OS manji... Hug   Hug  That was shooo cuute and sweet... Blushing Blushing
Thanks for liking the OS! Nice to hear it from you!
Thank you so much! U inspire meSmile

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SajanRox

[QUOTE=nishi_sajan]
 
Thanks Nisha....
Your comments are very valuable for me and also inspiring..
I was inspired by reading your OneShots.. I love them!!
Thanks Dear!!
Smile
You left me teary-eyedCry
 

aww dear thats really sweet of you!Hug
You are really good at this! 
Keep writing more and more!Embarrassed
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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 8:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nishi_sajan

Originally posted by SajanRox

[QUOTE=nishi_sajan]
 
Thanks Nisha....
Your comments are very valuable for me and also inspiring..
I was inspired by reading your OneShots.. I love them!!
Thanks Dear!!
Smile
You left me teary-eyedCry
 

aww dear thats really sweet of you!Hug
You are really good at this! 
Keep writing more and more!Embarrassed
 
I will surely try writing more!!Shocked
Thanks againSmileBig smileLOLWink
I am amazed that I already got so many comments!
 

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 9:09am | IP Logged
hey dear it was beautiful OS seriously loved it and enjoyed it it doesn't look like ur first OS Clapdo write more 

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