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Kriya on Holi (a short story ) Part 3 on pg 13 (Page 7)

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 3:25am | IP Logged
surbhi wow gr8 keep it up

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 4:14am | IP Logged
Surbzz........

Itna sweet part tha..

Dil khush kar diya ji...

I was also going to write on holi,, but tumne already likh diya..

well done again...
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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 5:58am | IP Logged
hey shurbhi dear where r u plz update the 2nd part as we all especially me is waiting for it na it was so nice plz do it soon

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by RoKa PraNeev

Originally posted by surbhisachwani

Originally posted by RoKa PraNeev

OKIE SURBHI...TRY UR BEST TO UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!VVL BE DEFINITLY WAITIN FOR IT..aww nechu i m truelyy flaatered ..u r made me blushh with so much appreciationnEmbarrassedEmbarrassed.MWAAAAAAAAH FOR STARTING SUCH A GREAAAT STORY...BT EM SAD DAT ITS A 'SHORT' STORY ohhh kya karoon i have thought of the story only till holi ..if u wanna make me continue itt i need to get some good suggestion ...Big smile:-( ACHA SO UNTIL U UPDATE EM GONNA CONSOLE MYSELF BY READING D FIRST PART AGAIN...HEHEH...EM SO IN LUB WID UR STORY!nechuu ......now u r making me embarrass ...hahaha ...thankss a lottttt nechuuu for the supportttEmbarrassed
OHH MA SURBHI...PLSSSS CONTINUE D STORY...U CAN TAKE SUGGESTIONS FROM SHUMI DII NA..yeahh she is a wonderfull writerr..i'll tryy too take some from her.COZ EM VERY BAD AT GIVING IDEAS FOR STORIESDeadLOL.ohh dont say thatt ...just give a try and i m suree u r gonna rockk..BUT SURBHI I TELL U..U R VERY GUD URSELF..thankss dearr..Embarrassed.!U CAN GO FORWRD WITHOUT ANY SUGGESTIONS ALSO! HMMMM EMSTIL WAITIN SURBHIohh i know i made u wait so muchh but the next part is on its wayy ..enjoy and do commentt
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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Minnie.

sorry 4 l8 reply surbhi i got really busy these past few daysohh no probs miniie
love ur wokr thought thankss sweety
cant w8 to read more of ur fantastic stories awwwww
love reading this altohught it took me tym to read loll ahhh the next one is moree bigg ......Embarrassed Big smile
 
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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rockin_gal

Great start surbhi Smile thankssnow plzzzz update the next part of this suree ..its ion its wayyyand the ff soon aw yehh ..i remember two chapetrss Embarrassed Big smile... Eagerly waiting Smile
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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vaishu2

please update dear. suree .....
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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by premprem1

omg.. this is such a nice story!!!! thanksss lubin it alot!!!!  i m glad u lubbed itt      UPDATE SOON suree

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