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Kriya on Holi (a short story ) Part 3 on pg 13 (Page 16)

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 4:52am | IP Logged
SURBHIIIIIIIII...EE KA KIYA TUMNE...MUJHE BEHOSH KAR DIYA?SURBHI EM STILL UNDER D EFFECT OF UR STORY N HOW CAN U DO DIS...?END IT SO SOON?HOW CNAN U DO DIS SURBHI...EM SOOOO IN LOVE WID UR FF...OMG I JUST LUBB DIS BHAANG WAALI PRAATIGYA...SO CUTE CHUBBY N BUBBLY...N D WAY SHE TALKS...ESP D BACCHA WAALI BAAT...AWWWW I JUST LUBBD IT...ESP WEN SHE ASKED 'HAMRA BACHAA KAB AYEGA'...N I JUST LUBD IT WEN KRISHU SAID 'KAASH TUM YE TAB KEHTI JAB TUM APNI HOSH MEIN HOTI ' N ALSO 'AYYE BABU HUMARA BACHA BAHUT JALDI AAYEGA'...HOW I WISH DAT IT HAPPENS SOON IN DA SERIAL...WHY CANT UU CONTINUE DIS SURBJIII?PLS CONTINUE NNAA!PLSSSSS MERI BAAT MAANO SURBHI!

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 8:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shrutisinha

nic yrrrrr
thankss shrutii

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Amit_Mehra

gud one surbhi luved it that pichkari scene was too gud ro thanx for this beautiftl story
thanks amit for likingg the scness
and i m just lubbing to write theses ff and storiess ...its my pleasuree

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
Surbzz,
kaa bey?u blushing?na na na. .it ws me hu ws blushing as though fel into a kumkum box. .kaa baat hai!omg!!sooo roman tic n intense!!hamein maar dala. .

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 5:03pm | IP Logged
Ooooooo miiiiii goshhhh!!!! Shocked Lol this was the most romantic updateee. Embarrassed .. It wassss cuutteeee..... Juz luved it.... Great no actually fenomonal job writing itt. Clap ... Haayyeeee im still lost in them Embarrassed   Once again good job Smile

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 3:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RoKa PraNeev

SURBHIIIIIIIII...EE KA KIYA TUMNE...MUJHE BEHOSH KAR DIYA?omgg sachhiiii ShockedSURBHI EM STILL UNDER D EFFECT OF UR STORY N HOW CAN U DO DIS...?END IT SO SOON?HOW CNAN U DO DIS SURBHI.aww nechu what shall i do .i really have no idea how to continue it ..EM SOOOO IN LOVE WID UR FF.myy pleasureee Embarrassed..OMG I JUST LUBB DIS BHAANG WAALI PRAATIGYA...SO CUTE CHUBBY N BUBBLY...N D WAY SHE TALKS...ESP D BACCHA WAALI BAAT...AWWWW I JUST LUBBD IT...ESP WEN SHE ASKED 'HAMRA BACHAA KAB AYEGA'.yeahh even i lubbed that csne and amost everyone did .thankss.N I JUST LUBD IT WEN KRISHU SAID 'KAASH TUM YE TAB KEHTI JAB TUM APNI HOSH MEIN HOTI ' N ALSO 'AYYE BABU HUMARA BACHA BAHUT JALDI AAYEGA'...HOW I WISH DAT IT HAPPENS SOON IN DA SERIAL..omgg yeahh yeah kriya's childd .WHY CANT UU CONTINUE DIS SURBJIII?PLS CONTINUE NNAA!PLSSSSS MERI BAAT MAANO SURBHI!ohh okk i'll sureelyy sureelyy thinkk about it and as soonn as i get a new idea i'll continue this storyy Big smile 
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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 3:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zash_LubUKriYa

Surbzz,
kaa bey?u blushing?na na na. u knoww how much i was blushingg while writingg itt .it was the first time i wrote an intimate scne that too of krishnaaa ..... Embarrassed Embarrassed.Embarrassed..my chheeks were dark redd.it ws me hu ws blushing as though fel into a kumkum box.awwwwww  .kaa baat hai!omg!!sooo roman tic n intense!!thanksss hamein maar dala. ahhh now i can say that my story was romanticc ..u blushed naa .....Embarrassed Wink.thankss aziii


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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 3:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rockin_gal

Ooooooo miiiiii goshhhh!!!! Shocked Lol this was the most romantic updateee. Embarrassed ..thankssIt wassss cuutteeee..... Juz luved it..glad u loved itt Tongue.. Great no actually fenomonal job writing itt. Clap .aw thank u so muchh .. Haayyeeee im still lost in them Embarrassed  kriyaa kriyaa Embarrassed Once again good job Smile

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