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Kriya on Holi (a short story ) Part 3 on pg 13 (Page 14)

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 5:00am | IP Logged
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ME FIRST....

Surbzzzzz.......

Muah muah muah muuuuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh.

Love you.... lots my darling...




Haayeeee... kya likha hai bey...

LALLANTOP....




yeh tumhre liye....






Edited by KriYa_life - 17 March 2011 at 5:17am

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 5:51am | IP Logged
oieeeeeee I forgot to say about the update...

I'd seriously want to see Babu with the gun...
I can imagine the reaction on their faces..ROFL

Madam ji, aapne next post mein kya likha hai?? Embarrassed

kauno laaj sharm hai ki nahi...  ROFL ROFL

lekin jo bhi lokha hai na.... Blushing

uffff kya kahe... hayeee..


I have already turned red.. dont make me blush...
My Krishna wont be able to handle me..
lubb you for this..

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Wow surbhi I neve knew u write so well....it was jus awesomeeeee......lubd it veryy much. Pratigya was behaving sooo cutely n d way Krishna was handling her was so sweet. the funniest part was when she askd Krish humara bacha kab ayegaLOLLOLLOLLOL....so innocent....Pratigya wid a gun..wow so unbelievable....n Kriya romance on d road in d rain....waah waah....u really made my day.......keep up d gud work...lub u n lub Kriya/Arja ofcourse
 
Wish d Mahaepi would hav been sumthing lyk dis.......it would b tough 4 all of us 2 get out of Lalaland(who wants 2,thou)


Edited by Eden_luvsKriya - 17 March 2011 at 6:38am

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 8:55am | IP Logged
nic yrrrrr

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:08am | IP Logged
gud one surbhi luved it that pichkari scene was too gud ro thanx for this beautiftl story

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it is awesome and nice mainly that funniest part humara bacha keep it up good work thanx for beautiful story

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 10:43am | IP Logged
wow shurbhi amazing sorry for the late reply bt wa busy well it was awsome romantic funny innocent and sexy u cross all the limits of beehodapan wah bhai wah kya baat hai hahaha just kidding bt u make all of us also very beehoda pehle se thi r ho gae enjoying reading ur updates u r having a very good writing skill so more sis i love all the scenes bt the most was hmara bacha kab ae ga wounderful sis mindblowing carry on thanks for ur lovely ff love it and love kriya more hope cv,s take any idea from our writers bt behhooda apna dimagh chalate hai par kya kare un ki waja se hi kriya mile so love it

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hey....surzzz...tum tho fir se chaaagayeeeeeeeeeeeeBig smile....ek dum lalan top...Clap



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