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Kriya on Holi (a short story ) Part 3 on pg 13 (Page 11)

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rockin_gal

How can u say it was nt romantic???i was not satisfied with this chapter ..i know i would have done lots better than this ...OuchIt was very cute funny and romantic..thankss for appreciatinggI jus luvd how he arranged the special room for her ahhh gosh i wish i hav sum1 like him Embarrassed hehehe..ahhh ofcourse u'l have onee like him but not him haa ....cux he is mine .....Embarrassed.EmbarrassedWinkhahhahaha Well good job and plzzz continue soon Smilesure sure and my ff is too cooming very very soonn Big smile

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shumi.

surbi...seriously...u have a great writing skill...wo kya kaha thay hai...chaagayeClap..aww thanks shumii diii .ur flow of writing is very good...romantinc nahi tho kya...waise i am not interested in kriya romanceLOL....keep it upThumbs Up thanksss

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Amit_Mehra

gud one surbhi luved it,thankss yaar romance kahan gaya? i knoww amit ..infact i didnt like this chapterr .........i just wrote whatever came to my mindd ..but i m surely gonna make up for the third onee
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mitaly..

Aikdam badiyaBig smile
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lovely sweety Embarrassed thank u thank u mitalyyyy ........Big smile
i love it keep Embarrassedit up waiting for next oneClapBig smile suree sure ........
awwww thank u so muchh mitalyy ....its so nicee ..thanks for apprecitaingg and supportingg Embarrassed Big smile
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 4:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by premprem1

omg,. such a nice chapter!! very nice actually thank uuuuBig smile 
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ramanbabitha

Hey, seriously Surbi... U rocked...Clapaww thank u dii  Iam eagerly waiting for he next update...suree suree ..it will be there veryy soon ur precap is looking great..... u can write for kriya scenes yaar..aww i'll think of themmm Big smile..just imagining these scenes happen with arja... How hot it will be...yeahh Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 4:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shrutisinha

woooooo awsomeeeeee subiiiiiiii yrrrrrrrr
keep it up thankss shrutiii
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RoKa PraNeev

SO FINALLY MA SURBHI UPDATED.yeahh how could i not ...when i knew my nechu is waiting so muchh ..IT WAS VERY NICE DEAR...I LUBD D ROOM PART!IT WAS VERY NICE...I LUBBD IT.thanksss ...SURBZZ GIVE US A ROMANTIC INTIMATE ONE!suree i m writingg itt WinkEM SOOOO EXCITED TO READ D REST YAAR!WID DA BHAANG WAALI PRATZ...OMG EM DYING TO READ D NEXT PART!PLS DNT MAK ME WAIT FOR SO LONG...OLJJJJJJJ!yeahh suree suree ..it will be up very very soonUPDATE SOOOOOOOON!LUBYYYAAA MWAAAAH!luv u too UPDATE SOON

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